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Direct
Shane walked towards the front door of the Planet humming happily as she got to have a date with Carmen tonight. After few months of isolation they were on speaking terms again. Shane was definitely very happy. She couldn’t see her life without Carmen. She wondered what was wrong with her when she left Carmen at the wedding. She shook her head and vowed that she would not break her heart again. A smile crept up her face as she saw Kit at the counter taking orders. She greeted her politely. Kit smiled and greeted the lanky brunette. But then she motioned Shane to look at a table at one of the corners. Shane arched her eyebrows and followed where Kit looked at. Dana. She was banging her head lightly onto the table non stop. Kit looked at Shane again worriedly.
“She has been banging her head like that for about ten minutes now. Go to check on her. Gosh I hope baby girl doesn’t hurt herself. That pretty face worth millions of dollars.”
Shane nodded knowingly. She got her espresso from Kit and walked towards the tennis player. As she stood beside the table Dana was still doing the same thing. Shane could hear Dana mumbling under her breath. Shane chuckled silently. She thought Alice was the only one in the gang that had potty mouth, but now it seemed like Dana had inherited that from her. It’s contagious, maybe from the kisses they shared; she thought and wanted to laugh at that. She composed herself and cleared her throat.
“Ehem, Dana what are you doing?”
Dana stopped her motion abruptly and looked up at Shane.
“Nothing.”
Shane took the seat opposite to Dana and gave the tennis player her look. Dana furrowed her eyebrows, still couldn’t figure out what that meant. Shane rolled her eyes.
“A reliable source told me you have been banging your head like that for ten minutes. What happen to you?”
Dana looked at the counter and saw Kit looking at her. Kit quickly moved her gaze from Dana and pretended to wipe the glasses on the counter. Dana looked back at Shane and sighed.
“I failed Shane.”
“What? I have no idea you are studying Dane.”
“It’s not that. It just..”Dana sighed again.” I failed to ask Alice out for dinner tomorrow. Tasha gets to her first. Fuck!” Dana put her face onto her hands feeling defeated.
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(54 votes, average: 3.61 out of 5)
Loved it!! Thank goodness Shane was there to talk Dana off the ledge. Also love that Shane and Carmen are making another go of it. So many humorous touches — like Dana hitting her head on the table and Kit’s comments, Alice when Dana knocked on the door and Dana trying so hard on the clue. I got a little smile thinking about Dana trying to turn “direct” into an acronym. I gave a little “squee” at the 4 AM kiss recreation and Dana getting “creative”. The conversation in bed was perfect. Just wonderful. Thanks, uhhuh!!
Contagious potty mouth made me laugh so hard. LOL… Dana’s murmuring and Alice’s cursing is soooo cute and I totally love “direct” “creative” Dana! LOL Great chpater, thanks uhhuh :)
hahahahaha another funny yet “creative” story uhhuh..i love the part where alice told dana “Slow down hun, you twist my arm” hahaha can’t help myself from laughing. i wonder how that twisted arm looks like. thank you uhhuh…
This was awesome! loved Dana’s creativity, head bangging, the arm twist LOL and her attempt at being direct. I read your new year story before this so cute thanks for posting.
very creative story //so cute couple