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Discovering Aphrodite
Discovering Aphrodite
Bette swallowed the immediate constriction in her throat, she wasn’t sure she could clear it, wasn’t sure she could even breath let alone form any kind of verbal response to Tina’s whispered words.
She stood stock still as Tina’s eyes slowly travelled over her body. She didn’t feel the least bit uncomfortable as she stood naked with Tina fully dressed for an evening out, in fact the heat from Tina’s intensity warmed her through as if she was standing under the hot steamy water of the shower as she had been only minutes before.
Tina parted her lips as she felt her chest rising and falling at the unexpected vision before her, granted she had touched the towel, she had given it that gently tug…, but it was unplanned, she had no idea whatsoever that she would be graced with the visual of Bette still wet from her shower, clothed in nothing but her white fluffy towel.
The fact her hand had moved to the towel and gently pulled it open, dropping to floor had nothing to do with her, it was instinctual, it was automatic pilot taking over her body and making her hand move to the white cotton…, it was…, it was…, she had no idea what it was but in that moment she wanted nothing more than this woman in front of her.
Tina’s eyes dropped to Bette’s chest, her eyes taking in the water droplets moving slowly over skin.
Bette watched Tina’s eyes, she watched how they moved lower. She felt her nipples harden under her gaze, she couldn’t stand it, couldn’t stand the ache beginning to burn through her body. She dropped her head back and closed her eyes, parting her lips and breathing heavily.
She felt Tina’s lips on her neck in an instant, the slight moan escaping her lips was subconscious because she didn’t feel able to form any sound…
Tina’s fingers gently entwined with Bette’s damp hands, as her lips tenderly moved across the wet skin, her tongue trailed up Bette’s neck and along her jaw line, stopping at her chin.
Bette brought her face in line with Tina’s, she let out the breath she had been holding as she looked at the intensity she was seeing.
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WOW……….you are an amazing erotic writer Jo. I’m basking in their after glow.
Guess they are late for dinner
Yowza, that was HOT! They are very cute! Great chappie.
Well-written hotness. Thank you!
Hey…well we both know how i read this chapter..lol..and dizzy doesnt begin to describe it..lol..but Jo,oh sooo worth it.its an exceptional chapter..and one of your hottest! Bette & Tina are wonderful in this story..and are we even half way through their week?lol looking forward to lots more of this…but ill try to read it the regular way!lol.Thanks x
wow… i’m just glad i’m reading this at home and sitting down! very well written!
Enticing, sensual, raw and loving all at the same time. Shower time……. xo
******THUD******
What more can be said. WOW!! HOT!! and yes I’m glad I was sitting down. PPS
Beautiful! I hope there is more to this journey. Thanks for posting!
Woah that was intense! I have a feeling this is going to go way beyond a holiday romance…at least I hope so! PPS:)
WOW! That was incredible! I hope this holiday romance turns into a former romance.
ahhh hmmm awwh yeah i have nothing else to say…sweating…
I think that I need Aphrodite’s bath to cool off. I love your knowledge of how to draw out all of Bette and Tina’s senses when they are together. I hope that this romance holiday continues onto a life of romance.
That was one of the most beautiful things I’ve ever read….I hope there’s more. PPS
aphrodite who?
Holy freaking cow, that was so freaking hot and love it. Please post more, thanks!
Holy smokes…and I do mean smokes! The only way that could have been hotter was if we were peeping Toms. Unbelievable writing…you are still the undisputed champ Jo!
Thanks, mate for the shout-out and this chapter. I was in need of this chappie. ;-) Your NC-17s are sensual and just plain sexy w/o being trashy and tawdry. Never boring. Yes, Sometimes NC-17s can be boring or trite. I love your use of words and your imagery is always clear and beautiful. I do sometimes think of the photo of JB in the shower. What did she say at L5 about taking that pic? She was feeling “frisky”? She’s quite the woman.
Would you like to know how I feel after you write an NC-17? H-O-T! LOL! You may not have written an NC-17 like this one for a while but you sure haven’t lost your touch. The details in your writing help me to visualize the beautiful, erotic images of B & T together. It left me breathless and wanting more. We’ll get more right, Jo? PPS.
oh wow! I shouldn’t have read this in the office… :) I feel lots of things and dizzy is one of them :) Thank you for this story. Will this be more than a holiday romance! I can’t believe I can still write complete sentences :D
Hello Jo , Great to be back and commenting on your wonderful writing. You bring so much joy and excitment with this latest chapter. I am breathing heavy myself and feeling somewhat tingily after reading this new chapter. You hve such a wicked way with Bette and Tina. The heavens have opened. More please. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Jo, you may not have written an NC-17 in a while but you have not lost your supreme touch in describing “our girls” and their very sensual lovemaking. For a first time in this story and Tina swears she has died and gone to heaven, Go Porter. Jo, I was hoping this chapter would have been nine pages, also. The way you left it, I hope this evening of lovemaking continues to the next chapter. Pretty please. Thanks for posting such a beautiful and loving chapter because after this trip they must continue on and become a couple. God, I hope they live in the same city. Please!!! Beautiful Jo. Thanks ever so much. PPS
O.O…HOT!
oh yes!!!
Hi, dear sweet Jo! Oh my Gosh! This was just pure bliss to read. We were true witnesses of how our fav couple experienced the passion and raw feelings that they have for each other. All the built in sensations flourished and emerged till pure ecstasy came. Holy wow, dearest Jo! This was freaking AWSOME. Thanks for describing such an amazing encounter between B&T. THUD. PPS Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks.- Lu & Marsh (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick and Tias Adoradas to Patpez)
So lovely. Thanks
I need a better travel agent, cause my vacations usually aren’t like that. To my sorrow.
Hot Hot Hot great chprtr, also enjoy your authors notes made me smile
I feel dizzy.
That was amazing
I am plummed tuckered out…………
That was extremely hot.I hope this holiday romance turns into a little more than just the holiday. Do they live in the same state? PPS
oh so dizzy!!
WOW!!! Jo, That was so amazing and full of love. I so hope this is just not a holiday romance for B&T. The way you write is so wonderful. Thank you PPS
SOOOOO worth the wait!!!