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Discovering Aphrodite
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Discovering Aphrodite
“Good morning…” Tina said as she slowly walked to the table that Bette was already sitting at.
“Hey…, did you sleep well?” Bette asked with a smile, knowing her own sleep has been fitful after the kiss they had shared the night before.
“Yeah…, I did thanks, you?”
“Yeah, not too bad…” Bette replied with a smile.
“It doesn’t seem as busy here this morning.” Tina said as she glanced around the breakfast area.
Bette looked around, she hadn’t noticed, her mind had been more on Tina than on who was sat at the other tables. “You want to go to one of the other tables?” Bette asked with a smirk, knowing that the only reason they had even begun to talk was due to the fact they had to share a table the previous day.
“You fed up with my company already?” Tina asked as she sat down.
“Uh…, not yet, just give it a few more days…” Bette quipped, “you want coffee?”
“Please…, I’ll just get some breakfast.”
As Tina filled her plate she glanced back at their table, watching the woman who had invaded her dreams last night. She had wondered whether the words she had spoken after their kiss would have come to anything, if had had spoken louder… Would Bette have walked back to her room with her or would she have declined the invitation…? She would never know…, she didn’t even know if Bette had heard her or not…, regardless, she had to move on from it…, carry on as if she had never uttered the words…
“So, what are the plans for today?” Tina asked when she returned to the table and sat down.
“Well I have the car today, tomorrow and then it has to be returned by midday the day after, so…”
Tina stopped suddenly, she was assuming they would be spending more time together, it seemed that it was the intention from their conversation the day before, but maybe it wouldn’t be wise to assume.
“Uh…, is it okay for me to…, you know…, tag along with you?”
Bette looked up at the question, “of course…, I invited you…, unless of course you want to pay for those excursions and have to share with a coach full of the ‘blue rinse brigade’…”
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You’re up late! Great story, Jo. I hope your holiday was as enjoyable as this story is! Take care.
I bet you say OMG every time you glance at that wonderful photo of JB in the shower, eh? Great writing per usual, Jo.
OMG, I SEE IT ALL!!! wonderfully written as usual. Loving it.
OMG you didn’t just stop there did you? There HAS to be another page….where is it? It must have got lost…because you would NOT leave us hanging like that….JO!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG is right!! I didnt see that coming. what will they do next Jo? great story.
She’s wearing granny pants, isn’t she? ROFL!OMG is right – get that next steaming hot chappy to us pronto, Jo!
Okay so I’m sure that there must be another page that my computer just didn’t load! Seriously, that’s where you stopped?!?! I love this story! Can’t wait for more!
Jo, OMG is right, that was just beautiful and I did not expect Tina to unwrap Bette so soon. I’d say the dinner will have to wait for awhile. Bette is the only thing on the menu at the moment. Hope Tina doesn’t ruin her pretty blue dress. At least let her hang it up and not leave it on the floor. Loved it but the computer ate the last page because you would not leave us hanging like that, now would you. PPS Jo, pretty please. Thanks for posting.
i was waiting for Levis to make their appearance but naked Bette is even better…i guess their dinner would have to wait, right? can wait for the next chapter
Well I think I know what is for dinner, and it’s not on a menu at a resturant! lol PPS:)
Oh. My. God. I echo Tina’s sentiment. The build-up is brilliant – the tension palpable – and the anticipation … gah! I can’t wait. Loved this update as it was both sweet and hot. Thanks Jo!
My recent holiday really can’t compare… Enjoying the story, thanks, Jo.
Jo…I am catching up..and I know there is another chapter all ready out there but I just have to say OMG! you are amazing woman.
i guess just like Tina all we can really say is ‘oh my god’ lol this is really a wonderful story. can’t wait for the next one!
‘Whew’… unexpected and freakin’ good!~
Oh My God, indeed. Looks like they’re having dinner of a different variety. Tina isn’t shy at all, which in my opinion is very very good.
So, Aphrodite is discovered indeed!
my thoughts exactly Tina my thoughts exactly…
Just discovered this story. Looks good. I’m gonna catch up on it asap.
Holy…….. a wet and naked Bette. I cannot stand it. Cancel dinner, Tina is going straight for DESSERT. Please DO NOT TORTURE ME BY MAKING ME WAIT. PPVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVS.
Oh my. Their dinner plans look like they’re about to change. Maybe Tina needs a dip in Aphrodite’s baths? I know I do… pps, Jo. Thanks!
I love it! Great story.
A wonderful tale as always! I will say though that I feel the need to come to the defense of the ‘blue rinse brigade.’ This sentence, “maybe, they might need some aspect of their life sprucing up, so you never know, or maybe they’ll be visiting the Baths of Adonis to see if they can get back some of their long forgotten fertility…” was spoken with the true arrogance of the young. Not everyone is as lucky as Bette and Tina and able to visit these mythical places when they are young like B&T. For many people it is only after they have retired and have let go of so many of lifes obligations can they finally visit places that they have read about their whole lives. So please Jo…be nice to those people who are in their waning years, and be happy for them that they can finally fulfill one of their lifelong dreams, no matter the color of their hair. (Sorry, not sure why that sentence upset me so, but, LOL, it clearly did. Thanks Jo!!
OMG can’t believe you leave us like that lol, that was beautiful and sweet, love them. I think their dinner need to wait cause a naked Bette is more important now lol. Please post more, thanks!
Finally caught up! Wow so amazing! I want a holiday romance ;) please please please post soon I can’t wait to see what happens
OMG noone ever answers the door in a towel for me..You stay on my favorite authors list!
My thoughts exactly “OMG you didn’t just stop there did you?” PPS Love it Jo!
This is a freakin good story. You can actually picture it all. Thank you for this and now am off to read the next chapter! Thank you again :)
Hello, dear sweet Jo! Wow! This update was just breath taking. Gosh! All the fine details you added were just beautiful and a joy to visualize. Thanks for this marvelous update, dearest friend. PPS Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks.- Lu & Marsh(Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick and Tias Adoradas to Patpez)
No, Tina, it’s “Oh my goddess.”
OMFG!!!! That was wonderful. Dinner is so going to be put on hold. Love it. Thanks Jo PPVS