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Disturbance – The beginning and the end Part 1
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Henry looked at Tina’s defenseless body lying on the bed shaking and trembling due to the sobs coming from Tina’s mouth, and just walked away leaving Tina in a puddle of her own blood.
He went and sat on the couch staring at the TV as if it was on. His sober mind couldn’t believe what he had just done to his wife but the alcohol in him didn’t care…she got what she deserves as far as his conscious was concern.
Tina cried for what seem like forever then finally pulled herself together and went into the bathroom to clean herself up. She looked at her face and began to cry again, she couldn’t believe Henry would do this to her. About thirty minutes later she went back into the bedroom and just stared at all the blood on the sheets that escaped her nose and lips after it was busted by Henry fist to her cheek catching her lip in between. She pulled the sheets off and replaced them with new fresh clean ones, throwing the bloody ones on the floor. Tina crawled into bed still shaking in fear, not knowing whether or not Henry would enter the room again and lay it on her. She suddenly began thinking about what Henry said to her ” your new lawyer boyfriend, are you fucking him”, she couldn’t believe after five years Henry would think that less of her, and also wondered what was going to happen when she goes to work. Obviously Tina knew she had to work with this man, but Marcus wasn’t the problem, truth be told she found him quite charming but never did she once think of him in any other way, but what was going to happen when she come home and Henry know that they was working together, was she going to get beaten every time. ”BEATEN” wow Tina never thought she would be using that word to describe her life and she wonder just how it was becoming of this, she knew Henry was stress at work and dare she say, jealous of her career heights, but to beat her over it was just plain cruel and unhuman.
The next day…
Henry woke up on the couch, still wearing his clothes from last night, body shrieking in odor from the alcohol, and he noticed specks of blood on him and wondered just where the hell it came from. He thought and thought until he remember the dreadful events of last night, he had beaten his wife out of spite, anger, jealous, and alcohol…none to which are a reason for anyone to physically hurt someone. He rushed to the bedroom where he found the door closed, he slowly opened the door almost frightened of what he was going to see and his eyes confirmed all of his fears. There lying was his battered wife, her body looked so frail and his heart broke for her, he hated himself for what he had done to her.
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Just caught up with the rest of the chapters to this story. Nice job handling a very tough topic. Sad that this happens every minute around the world and that anyone has to endure something like that.
thanks for reading…and nice update on your story by the way, just excellent!
Thank you for a wonderful update. Your elaboration makes a very important point. Some people falls into depression not just because of relationship. Depression can lead to violence, first is the feeling then they have to act on it to relief, these people mostly feels that the world owe them something or they are not being treated fairly. People change from time to time due to environment and people they are with. Just watch out, sometimes love and care is not enough for them, I believe is inner self of an individual…. No explanation at all. You did great….. facts written are well supported. Pps…
I have been looking forward to a new update this story. although this is a difficult subject, you’re doing a great job and I really care about this story.
I’m very sorry that the end is approaching, I wanted to read the sequel. Bette and Tina start a life together with the girls and you know, a happy ending ;)
I know it was hard to Tina, but there she was, made a mistake, that she forgave him! It was not just a slap in the face, Henry, bloody beat her!
I look forward to the next chapter.
Glad that you are writing this but it is so disturbing and scary.
Yes it is, very hard story to write
Thanks!
Domestic violence “, read this story does mess with my
emotions as every great story has to make us reflect
and think, “why it happened.?”.
You bring the sensitivity of the matter and exciting way
as you write, putting deTina a victim of this
violence.
Benvinda Levy, Minister of Justice of Mozambique said:
A small trexo of his speech: “In one way or another, we live violência or because we’re part of it or because it happens on our side?”.
Congratulations.
I’m your fan.
11 stars.
I know this is a hard topic for you to write about but you are doing a great job.There are far to many women and men that go through this ordeal day after day and feel as if there is no hope and they are to scared to do anything about it but there is if only they can be brave and stand up and say im not going to allow you to abuse me again times are changing police who once upon a time turned there backs on domestic violence now its law to interfear anyone want a great true movie about this matter hire the Tracy Truman Story one of the best examples out there once again great writing pps.