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Disturbance – The beginning and the end Part 1
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Tina was lying asleep in a deep slumber after what seemed like hours of trying to get herself to calm down and let sleep overtake her, when she felt someone touch the top of her shoulders. She quickly bolted up in defense and fear, looking at Henry with scared eyes. Henry saw this fear and immediately felt crushed for what he had done.
Henry: Its ok, I’m not going to hurt you.
Tina just stared at this man, the man she thought loved her unconditionally, the man she vowed her life to, the father of her child, the man who physically BEATEN her!
Henry: I know you are feeling scared and babe I am so sorry, I don’t know what gotten into me but it will never happen again I promise.
There was no response from Tina, she just continue looking at him through frightened eyes.
Henry: honey please let me make it up to you. It was the alcohol that made me do it…
Tina: that doesn’t make it ok.
Tina finally speaking with a weak voice cutting him off.
Henry: I know.
Henry said putting his head down.
Tina: you accuse me of cheating.
Henry: I’m sorry I shouldn’t have…I know you would never do anything like that, it was just my own insecurities that got to me…
Henry said honestly, and Tina could see that he was truly sorry for what he had done to her but she knew it still wasn’t ok and not to let him off that easy.
Tina: I… (Clearing her throat)…I have to get Christie ready for school then head to work.
She said in a cracking voice. Her voice was becoming hoarse after crying for hours last night.
Henry: yeah ok…maybe we can talk about this later and honey you got to believe me I’m really really sorry.
Tina just nodded her head and got up to head to the restroom to shower and leave for the day.
Tina had gotten Christie ready for school and now sitting at the table watching Christie eat her breakfast. Luckily the little girl was oblivious to the events of last night and didn’t have a care in the world.
Henry made his way to the kitchen and Tina then hurried Christie to finish eating, she wanted out of his sight and most importantly out of his reach as the fear still lingered inside her.
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Just caught up with the rest of the chapters to this story. Nice job handling a very tough topic. Sad that this happens every minute around the world and that anyone has to endure something like that.
thanks for reading…and nice update on your story by the way, just excellent!
Thank you for a wonderful update. Your elaboration makes a very important point. Some people falls into depression not just because of relationship. Depression can lead to violence, first is the feeling then they have to act on it to relief, these people mostly feels that the world owe them something or they are not being treated fairly. People change from time to time due to environment and people they are with. Just watch out, sometimes love and care is not enough for them, I believe is inner self of an individual…. No explanation at all. You did great….. facts written are well supported. Pps…
I have been looking forward to a new update this story. although this is a difficult subject, you’re doing a great job and I really care about this story.
I’m very sorry that the end is approaching, I wanted to read the sequel. Bette and Tina start a life together with the girls and you know, a happy ending ;)
I know it was hard to Tina, but there she was, made a mistake, that she forgave him! It was not just a slap in the face, Henry, bloody beat her!
I look forward to the next chapter.
Glad that you are writing this but it is so disturbing and scary.
Yes it is, very hard story to write
Thanks!
Domestic violence “, read this story does mess with my
emotions as every great story has to make us reflect
and think, “why it happened.?”.
You bring the sensitivity of the matter and exciting way
as you write, putting deTina a victim of this
violence.
Benvinda Levy, Minister of Justice of Mozambique said:
A small trexo of his speech: “In one way or another, we live violência or because we’re part of it or because it happens on our side?”.
Congratulations.
I’m your fan.
11 stars.
I know this is a hard topic for you to write about but you are doing a great job.There are far to many women and men that go through this ordeal day after day and feel as if there is no hope and they are to scared to do anything about it but there is if only they can be brave and stand up and say im not going to allow you to abuse me again times are changing police who once upon a time turned there backs on domestic violence now its law to interfear anyone want a great true movie about this matter hire the Tracy Truman Story one of the best examples out there once again great writing pps.