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Disturbance – The Victim
Tina: Christie why dont you and your friend go to your room and I will be right there ok?
Angie and Christie just stood there.
Tina: Christie!…please do it for mommy sweetie.
Christie: ok.
Christie pulled Angie hand and both girls took off running to her room.
Tina went over to her phone and called the only person she could think of in a moment like this.
The phone rung for a few seconds until someone picked up.
Tina: Hello? Marcus?
Marcus: Tina is that you? Is everything ok?
Tina now crying uncontrollably, Marcus immediately hope out of bed putting on his shoes.
Tina: Marcus could you please come over, I need your help?
Marcus: Already on the way, be there in 5.
Marcus and Tina had been really great friends for about 3 years now. They met while working on a child services case together. Marcus was a tall, handsome, African-American man and a very successful lawyer who specialize in child care. They both had one thing in common and that was the determination in making sure every child was safe and well taken care. The case dealt with a child being abused by her mother and they needed the court to see just how unfit the parent was and why she shouldn’t be allowed to care for the child, but they needed to get the child to speak and tell the truth about whats been happening to her. The case went on for a little over a year and finally the judge ruled in their favor. The child was put into foster care, six months later adopted by a well rounded family who provided her with the love and care she needed. After the case was over they shared a drink together at a local bar, got to know each other better, and been buddies every since.
Five mintues later…
Tina heard a knocked on door but didn’t answer it right away it could be him and she didn’t want to let him back in. Marcus sense something was wrong and yelled through the door.
Marcus: Tina it’s me, please open up.
Tina finally let out a breath she didn’t know she was holding suddenly feeling a little safer. She opened the door and Marcus gasped at what he was looking at, Tina’s face was clearly beaten. Her lips were busted, her right eye had already started turning black, and blood was slowly coming from her nose. Anger filled Marcus’s body immediately.
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Wow, who called the police? Where did the slime bucket Henry go? Thanks for the quick update
Hahahahahahha thanks for just lighting my mood. Lol
Such an difficult but important topic to cover. So fa, I like how you are handling it!
wow this is amaizing. thx for your story. Bette will hopefully come to the rescue and take Tina and Christy away from thst idiot. thx again. pps
My dear, happy to see you writing again. I like this too. Thank you.. Pps
I had not a couple of days and much has happened. I can’t know catch up in reading. :)
Henry; I knew that … there’s a reason why I hate him no matter what. :D
I think this kind of abuse has long been a go, and Marcus never did anything to stop him, why he didn’t talk to Tina, and took her when they were in good friends? Marcus knew how Tina frightened ….
YESSS !! pure adrenaline, despite being a
controversial topic already involved in this story.
Tina Marcus lucky at the last moment to talk
Henry, who was to blame for his injuries.
I think I’ll have to buy medicine for
my heart, because this story promises to stir
with my heart.
Congratulations!