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Do you remember when… Chapter 12
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"NO…" Bette voice rose as she once again stepped forward, her fists clenched as the blood began to thump through her veins.
"Bette, Nadia knows that Tina is with you… and that is the reason she is talking to Tina…," Alice explained, trying to suppress the growing anger in Bette, knowing that if she didn’t, all hell would break loose.
"Al, she is really fucking winding me up and if she doesn’t get her hands off Tina I will…"
"You will not…, do you trust Tina…?"
"What… of course I trust her…" Bette looked at Alice incredulously.
"Then let her deal with it, she loves you and nobody, not even the viper that is Nadia Marchent, is going to change that."
Bette remained standing as she watched Nadia lean closer saying something into Tina’s ear, she watched as Tina laughed and threw her head back, her heart was really pounding now, the insane jealous streak that she never knew existed had just come and slapped her in the face, and she didn’t like the feeling one little bit.
She didn’t mind people admiring Tina as she walked by, but if they so much as touched her or pawed her or salivated over her, that was a different matter, and that was what that bitch Nadia was doing, and Bette would put money on the fact that Nadia was doing it to provoke a reaction from Bette, and if she wanted a reaction, then she would get one.
She saw Tina lean forward and whisper to Nadia, her sweet smile suddenly changing to one of power and smugness, Bette took it all in, the pounding in her heart altered of one from rage to a surge of something else as Tina glanced back to her and winked, she swallowed the lump in her throat, her anger subsiding.
Alice dropped her hand from Bette’s arm as she saw the calming expression cross her friends face, she had never seen Bette react like that before and she, irrespective that she hated the ground Nadia Marchent walked on, she would have feared for the woman’s life if Bette had got her hands on her, the deadly Porter look, she was like a caged animal defending her territory, and her territory was Tina Kennard.
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I think that what makes your NC-17 so extra hot is that not only are what they doing erotic, but their love for each other just pours out thru your words…There is nothing hotter than a coupling by two people that share such an emotional bond. It gives it just that extra umph!! Thanks!
Very very Hot…..excellent chapter as always….but then, would never expect it to be anything else!..especially coming from one of the best!…Thanks..
Nice work Jobage!
What can be added to what has already been said? You are the master of erotic stories but they are not prurient. You have the rare ability to actually make their story interesting and engaging and at the same time, sensual and palpable lust.
OMG…..What was i thinking…let me rephrase my last comment…i said ONE of the best….I meant THE BEST!…lol…that better?…
You’ve even got me writing about Bette in her Levi’s! What is going on? Great chapter, as always.
Wow, Bette kind of Hulks up when Tina gets hit on. All green with jealousy, extra strong, what fun!
That definitely was sensory overload but I sure enjoyed it. Thank you for Tina’s black bra and Bette’s levis. I am with Alice and Dana in wanting to become a voyeur. Those two can run the entire city of Los Angeles with the electricity that they put off together. Thank you for writing these chapters that illustrate how two people can love each other with so much emotion between them.
Definitely worth the wait, Jo! I agree that this was “beyond hot”! Awesome to see the intense love and passion between them and the love among these wonderful friends as well! Please don’t make us wait too long for the next remembrance!
Those damn Levi’s somehow made their way to the U.S. I wonder if you could pitch one of your stories as an ad for those jeans? Anyway this was freakin’ HOT! That Nadia chick sounds familiar. Where have I heard her name before? I may have seen it in another story a long time ago.
hmmmmmmmmmmmm beautiful as always…….
Wow…this was awesome…just awesome. I love this story!
THUD. Being taken by Bette Porter in an alley. Every gal’s dream, isn’t it? ;) Great as always!
That was amazing and love it!!!!!!!!!!!
First….sweetie have to comment tomorrow xx
Do I need to tell you that was hot? I think not. Wow, LA alleys must be very different from the ones I knew, and smelled, and avoided in NYC. Not that they didn’t harbor sexual activity, but it usually invovled an exchange of money. Could it be that Tina has deliberatley shrunk Bette’s famous 501s in the wash in order to keep the game going?
Totally hot from beginning to end.
I deliberately misspelled deliberatley.
Well that certainly was beyond hot. Great chapter.
Absolutely hot, it made my mouth water! Please continue!
Jo — you totally did the idea justice as i knew that you would – you are just brilliant and we must thank our employers for all the time at work we waste sending each other text messages – especially when both our desks are groaning with paperwork. brilliant jo – you are a brilliant writer and one hell of a friend xx
wow…the temperature in LA just went to 450 F. i’m melting
You’re very welcome, I’ll see you through anytime – it was a interesting and very funny process LOL. I guess there isn’t much there hasn’t already been said about this amazing and brilliant chapter, so I’ll just say a big THANK YOU!! I know how much time and effort you put into your writing – I’m truly in awe by you. This chapter was actually better the second time, I keep discovering new things when reading, I love that :o)) xx
You write such amazing love, the power of it is overwhelming…but sad, sad that we can’t in real life attain such hights…not really I don’t think, outside of the honeymoon stage. To see you write the story of their love thru the 7 full years is exactly what women yearn for. So why is it so unattainable? Why does it have to be so hard? As humans are we destined to struggle? Why is it almost impossible to live the story, live the love, that you write…Your stories make me glad that you write and also sad…But pls don’t stop, don’t ever stop Thanks!
hottttttttttttttttttt longer
Phew….*THUD*
Awesome!! Thanks Jo!
wow and more wow!!!