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Do you remember when… Chapter 12
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As contact was made there was a gasp at Bette’s ear, Tina’s hips bucked as her nerve centre became the focus of the stroking fingertips, the fingers sliding further through the velvety folds, gently stroking back and forth, the sensations and touch immediately causing the familiar building within her.
Bette felt the breathing against her neck, the passion building, rising as her fingers moved from the slow pace, increasing as Tina’s breathing altered.
She felt it then, felt the change in her breathing, felt the change in her body, the quick and intense need, the instant need for one another, her own need being satisfied as she took the woman she loved to another plain.
She moved her fingertips, easing gently over the sensitive center, knowing she was about to explode and release, release her love and desire onto her fingers.
Bette’s fingers felt the swift exploding as she stroked back and forth, the love escaping from the woman that was her life.
Tina’s body shuddered as the detonation reverberated throughout her being, her head shot backwards as her body continued with the shocks, her hands holding onto Bette’s shoulders for stability, her mouth opening with silent groans, her breathing held as the intensity overtook her whole spirit.
Bette held tightly as the jerking body in her arms began to calm, the breaths against her neck coming in short, sharp gasps, she brought both of her arms around Tina, bringing her in close, allowing Tina’s legs to untwine from around her waist and drop to the floor, the feeling and sensation within them still not having returned, remaining weak from the intensity of how quickly and intensely Bette had taken her, her ultimate need truly having been satisfied.
Tina’s head rested on Bette’s shoulder, she heard the endearments being whispered into her ear, the small kisses being gently planted in her hair. Some semblance of feeling was returning to her legs, her knees were still giving slight trembles and she was thankful for her pillar of support, holding her tightly as they leant against the wall in the dark corner.
Tina raised her head from Bette’s shoulder, the time of quiet between them having given her body a slight opportunity for recovery, her eyes met Bette’s, they searched, gazed, compelled by the intensity between the two, to verbalize the unsaid, she rubbed her nose against Bette’s and kissed the tip.
She quietly said, "I love you, Bette Porter"
Bette smiled at the words, knowing how much there was behind the words, how much was always unsaid, "not nearly as much as I love you Tina Kennard…"
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I think that what makes your NC-17 so extra hot is that not only are what they doing erotic, but their love for each other just pours out thru your words…There is nothing hotter than a coupling by two people that share such an emotional bond. It gives it just that extra umph!! Thanks!
Very very Hot…..excellent chapter as always….but then, would never expect it to be anything else!..especially coming from one of the best!…Thanks..
Nice work Jobage!
What can be added to what has already been said? You are the master of erotic stories but they are not prurient. You have the rare ability to actually make their story interesting and engaging and at the same time, sensual and palpable lust.
OMG…..What was i thinking…let me rephrase my last comment…i said ONE of the best….I meant THE BEST!…lol…that better?…
You’ve even got me writing about Bette in her Levi’s! What is going on? Great chapter, as always.
Wow, Bette kind of Hulks up when Tina gets hit on. All green with jealousy, extra strong, what fun!
That definitely was sensory overload but I sure enjoyed it. Thank you for Tina’s black bra and Bette’s levis. I am with Alice and Dana in wanting to become a voyeur. Those two can run the entire city of Los Angeles with the electricity that they put off together. Thank you for writing these chapters that illustrate how two people can love each other with so much emotion between them.
Definitely worth the wait, Jo! I agree that this was “beyond hot”! Awesome to see the intense love and passion between them and the love among these wonderful friends as well! Please don’t make us wait too long for the next remembrance!
Those damn Levi’s somehow made their way to the U.S. I wonder if you could pitch one of your stories as an ad for those jeans? Anyway this was freakin’ HOT! That Nadia chick sounds familiar. Where have I heard her name before? I may have seen it in another story a long time ago.
hmmmmmmmmmmmm beautiful as always…….
Wow…this was awesome…just awesome. I love this story!
THUD. Being taken by Bette Porter in an alley. Every gal’s dream, isn’t it? ;) Great as always!
That was amazing and love it!!!!!!!!!!!
First….sweetie have to comment tomorrow xx
Do I need to tell you that was hot? I think not. Wow, LA alleys must be very different from the ones I knew, and smelled, and avoided in NYC. Not that they didn’t harbor sexual activity, but it usually invovled an exchange of money. Could it be that Tina has deliberatley shrunk Bette’s famous 501s in the wash in order to keep the game going?
Totally hot from beginning to end.
I deliberately misspelled deliberatley.
Well that certainly was beyond hot. Great chapter.
Absolutely hot, it made my mouth water! Please continue!
Jo — you totally did the idea justice as i knew that you would – you are just brilliant and we must thank our employers for all the time at work we waste sending each other text messages – especially when both our desks are groaning with paperwork. brilliant jo – you are a brilliant writer and one hell of a friend xx
wow…the temperature in LA just went to 450 F. i’m melting
You’re very welcome, I’ll see you through anytime – it was a interesting and very funny process LOL. I guess there isn’t much there hasn’t already been said about this amazing and brilliant chapter, so I’ll just say a big THANK YOU!! I know how much time and effort you put into your writing – I’m truly in awe by you. This chapter was actually better the second time, I keep discovering new things when reading, I love that :o)) xx
You write such amazing love, the power of it is overwhelming…but sad, sad that we can’t in real life attain such hights…not really I don’t think, outside of the honeymoon stage. To see you write the story of their love thru the 7 full years is exactly what women yearn for. So why is it so unattainable? Why does it have to be so hard? As humans are we destined to struggle? Why is it almost impossible to live the story, live the love, that you write…Your stories make me glad that you write and also sad…But pls don’t stop, don’t ever stop Thanks!
hottttttttttttttttttt longer
Phew….*THUD*
Awesome!! Thanks Jo!
wow and more wow!!!