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Do you remember when… Chapter 12
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Bette broke the kiss, Tina still with her legs wrapped around Bette’s waist, their eyes still locked, a small smile appearing on Bette’s lips as she looked at Tina, Bette turned seeing the alley they were standing near, and walked toward it with Tina still wrapped around her, her lithe physical strength making it an easy task to walk with her girlfriend wrapped around her.
Tina nuzzled Bette’s neck as she was carried, Bette looking over Tina’s shoulder to navigate her way toward the alley, seeking a darker corner, so she could take Tina in the way she knew she wanted her, desperately.
As they turned into the alley Tina lifted her head from Bette’s neck to view their location, seeing it being a small, dark deserted area, she leaned back down and began to assault the neck she had just been nuzzling, her teeth grazing across the skin, her tongue leaving trails along the jugular, up to her ear, she took the lobe into her mouth sucking hard, her heavy breathing penetrating into Bette’s ear.
"You were so sexy babe… like a caged animal…"
"You know what this animal wants to do with you…"
"Tell me babe…"
"I need you T… I hated seeing someone else’s hands on you…"
"I’m all yours babe… no one else will ever compare to you… you are all I’ve ever wanted… but I want you now…" she chuckled, knowing how desperate she sounded.
Bette smiled into Tina’s hair, she backed Tina against the wall, her legs remained wrapped around her, Bette pushed against her hard, pressing into Tina’s centre with her stomach, grinding into her, keeping a steady rhythm as the passion rose between them.
The urgency at Bette’s neck becoming more apparent as the teeth at her lobe grazed harder, once again returning to her neck, she could feel Tina’s teeth nipping at her skin, her mouth widening to suck the flesh in, the combination of the teeth and the suckling giving Bette the erotic feeling of pleasure and pain, traveling throughout her body, adding and settling in a region of her that was already on fire.
Bette’s eyes rolled back as her lids slowly closed, Tina’s actions making her own body tremble. She brought her hands to the side of Tina’s breasts, grazing her fingertips inside the material, knowing that her movements would be welcomed, as she continued the grinding at Tina’s centre.
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I think that what makes your NC-17 so extra hot is that not only are what they doing erotic, but their love for each other just pours out thru your words…There is nothing hotter than a coupling by two people that share such an emotional bond. It gives it just that extra umph!! Thanks!
Very very Hot…..excellent chapter as always….but then, would never expect it to be anything else!..especially coming from one of the best!…Thanks..
Nice work Jobage!
What can be added to what has already been said? You are the master of erotic stories but they are not prurient. You have the rare ability to actually make their story interesting and engaging and at the same time, sensual and palpable lust.
OMG…..What was i thinking…let me rephrase my last comment…i said ONE of the best….I meant THE BEST!…lol…that better?…
You’ve even got me writing about Bette in her Levi’s! What is going on? Great chapter, as always.
Wow, Bette kind of Hulks up when Tina gets hit on. All green with jealousy, extra strong, what fun!
That definitely was sensory overload but I sure enjoyed it. Thank you for Tina’s black bra and Bette’s levis. I am with Alice and Dana in wanting to become a voyeur. Those two can run the entire city of Los Angeles with the electricity that they put off together. Thank you for writing these chapters that illustrate how two people can love each other with so much emotion between them.
Definitely worth the wait, Jo! I agree that this was “beyond hot”! Awesome to see the intense love and passion between them and the love among these wonderful friends as well! Please don’t make us wait too long for the next remembrance!
Those damn Levi’s somehow made their way to the U.S. I wonder if you could pitch one of your stories as an ad for those jeans? Anyway this was freakin’ HOT! That Nadia chick sounds familiar. Where have I heard her name before? I may have seen it in another story a long time ago.
hmmmmmmmmmmmm beautiful as always…….
Wow…this was awesome…just awesome. I love this story!
THUD. Being taken by Bette Porter in an alley. Every gal’s dream, isn’t it? ;) Great as always!
That was amazing and love it!!!!!!!!!!!
First….sweetie have to comment tomorrow xx
Do I need to tell you that was hot? I think not. Wow, LA alleys must be very different from the ones I knew, and smelled, and avoided in NYC. Not that they didn’t harbor sexual activity, but it usually invovled an exchange of money. Could it be that Tina has deliberatley shrunk Bette’s famous 501s in the wash in order to keep the game going?
Totally hot from beginning to end.
I deliberately misspelled deliberatley.
Well that certainly was beyond hot. Great chapter.
Absolutely hot, it made my mouth water! Please continue!
Jo — you totally did the idea justice as i knew that you would – you are just brilliant and we must thank our employers for all the time at work we waste sending each other text messages – especially when both our desks are groaning with paperwork. brilliant jo – you are a brilliant writer and one hell of a friend xx
wow…the temperature in LA just went to 450 F. i’m melting
You’re very welcome, I’ll see you through anytime – it was a interesting and very funny process LOL. I guess there isn’t much there hasn’t already been said about this amazing and brilliant chapter, so I’ll just say a big THANK YOU!! I know how much time and effort you put into your writing – I’m truly in awe by you. This chapter was actually better the second time, I keep discovering new things when reading, I love that :o)) xx
You write such amazing love, the power of it is overwhelming…but sad, sad that we can’t in real life attain such hights…not really I don’t think, outside of the honeymoon stage. To see you write the story of their love thru the 7 full years is exactly what women yearn for. So why is it so unattainable? Why does it have to be so hard? As humans are we destined to struggle? Why is it almost impossible to live the story, live the love, that you write…Your stories make me glad that you write and also sad…But pls don’t stop, don’t ever stop Thanks!
hottttttttttttttttttt longer
Phew….*THUD*
Awesome!! Thanks Jo!
wow and more wow!!!