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Do you remember when… Chapter 12
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"I’m sorry Bette…"
"Its okay, doesn’t matter… maybe I’ll beat it next time."
"Your time was looking great near the end…" Tina trailed off, not even knowing how Bette’s time was looking.
"Was it…?" Bette asked, knowing full well Tina was lying, but finding humour in the faraway look in her eyes, her chest surging with love as she knew that it was the connection between them when they looked at one another that had caused Tina’s forgetfulness.
"Uh… yeah…"
"T…" Bette looked deep into Tina’s eyes, a knowing smile gracing her delicate features.
"Yeah…"
"It’s okay…"
"I’m sorry…"
"There is a way you can make it up…?" Bette said with a glint in her eye.
Tina caught the spark in Bette’s eyes, she knew what was coming, the same thing that always happened after Bette’s run, "oh yeah… and what would that be Porter… a rub down…, a full body massage…, to lick the sweat from every inch of your body…"
Bette laughed at Tina’s list, "actually I was just going to suggest a shower… but now you mention the massage and licking the sweat…"
Tina swatted Bette’s arm as she turned on her heel, glancing over her shoulder as she threw the icy water over the still sweating Porter, the look of shock registering on Bette’s face as the icy droplets crawled over her warm skin.
Tina burst out laughing as the water trickled over the irresistible curves, her eyes widening as she halted her steps, her voice was low and menacing as she crooked her finger towards Bette, enticing her… "shower Porter… now…"
Bette smiled at the now alert girlfriend demanding her presence in the shower, and she knew that the look Tina was giving her meant that the run she had just completed was only just the beginning of the exercise regime for the day.
Bette slowly walked toward the bathroom, making her eager partner wait just that little bit longer, she smiled as she noticed the way Tina had looked her over as she had walked up the steps from her run, the appreciative look that hadn’t waned in over seven years, would there ever come a time when they looked at one another and didn’t have that same want and need surfacing the moment their eyes met? Would there be a time after maybe ten years when they just got used to having such a sexy partner lying next to them? Would the desire to touch and taste every inch of the other’s body as if for the first time ever go away?
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I think that what makes your NC-17 so extra hot is that not only are what they doing erotic, but their love for each other just pours out thru your words…There is nothing hotter than a coupling by two people that share such an emotional bond. It gives it just that extra umph!! Thanks!
Very very Hot…..excellent chapter as always….but then, would never expect it to be anything else!..especially coming from one of the best!…Thanks..
Nice work Jobage!
What can be added to what has already been said? You are the master of erotic stories but they are not prurient. You have the rare ability to actually make their story interesting and engaging and at the same time, sensual and palpable lust.
OMG…..What was i thinking…let me rephrase my last comment…i said ONE of the best….I meant THE BEST!…lol…that better?…
You’ve even got me writing about Bette in her Levi’s! What is going on? Great chapter, as always.
Wow, Bette kind of Hulks up when Tina gets hit on. All green with jealousy, extra strong, what fun!
That definitely was sensory overload but I sure enjoyed it. Thank you for Tina’s black bra and Bette’s levis. I am with Alice and Dana in wanting to become a voyeur. Those two can run the entire city of Los Angeles with the electricity that they put off together. Thank you for writing these chapters that illustrate how two people can love each other with so much emotion between them.
Definitely worth the wait, Jo! I agree that this was “beyond hot”! Awesome to see the intense love and passion between them and the love among these wonderful friends as well! Please don’t make us wait too long for the next remembrance!
Those damn Levi’s somehow made their way to the U.S. I wonder if you could pitch one of your stories as an ad for those jeans? Anyway this was freakin’ HOT! That Nadia chick sounds familiar. Where have I heard her name before? I may have seen it in another story a long time ago.
hmmmmmmmmmmmm beautiful as always…….
Wow…this was awesome…just awesome. I love this story!
THUD. Being taken by Bette Porter in an alley. Every gal’s dream, isn’t it? ;) Great as always!
That was amazing and love it!!!!!!!!!!!
First….sweetie have to comment tomorrow xx
Do I need to tell you that was hot? I think not. Wow, LA alleys must be very different from the ones I knew, and smelled, and avoided in NYC. Not that they didn’t harbor sexual activity, but it usually invovled an exchange of money. Could it be that Tina has deliberatley shrunk Bette’s famous 501s in the wash in order to keep the game going?
Totally hot from beginning to end.
I deliberately misspelled deliberatley.
Well that certainly was beyond hot. Great chapter.
Absolutely hot, it made my mouth water! Please continue!
Jo — you totally did the idea justice as i knew that you would – you are just brilliant and we must thank our employers for all the time at work we waste sending each other text messages – especially when both our desks are groaning with paperwork. brilliant jo – you are a brilliant writer and one hell of a friend xx
wow…the temperature in LA just went to 450 F. i’m melting
You’re very welcome, I’ll see you through anytime – it was a interesting and very funny process LOL. I guess there isn’t much there hasn’t already been said about this amazing and brilliant chapter, so I’ll just say a big THANK YOU!! I know how much time and effort you put into your writing – I’m truly in awe by you. This chapter was actually better the second time, I keep discovering new things when reading, I love that :o)) xx
You write such amazing love, the power of it is overwhelming…but sad, sad that we can’t in real life attain such hights…not really I don’t think, outside of the honeymoon stage. To see you write the story of their love thru the 7 full years is exactly what women yearn for. So why is it so unattainable? Why does it have to be so hard? As humans are we destined to struggle? Why is it almost impossible to live the story, live the love, that you write…Your stories make me glad that you write and also sad…But pls don’t stop, don’t ever stop Thanks!
hottttttttttttttttttt longer
Phew….*THUD*
Awesome!! Thanks Jo!
wow and more wow!!!