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Do you remember when… Chapter 14
Bette smiled at the words, “what T…tell me babe…”
“Babe, you have… the most amazing ass… in these shorts, and… I think they have to come a close second… to your ass in the levis…!”
Bette laughed, “T… you must have forgotten what my ass looks like in those fucking levis, it seems an eternity since I could squeeze myself into them…”
“Oh no babe…, forever engrained in my memory…” Tina whispered as her hands continued to roam, touching, teasing and taking in every… single… inch.
Bette’s head dropped back as her eyes slid closed, her throat constricted as the fingertips of her partner began their magic touch, the touch that could… quite simply… bring her to her knees in a second, but she had to gain some control, some semblance of restraint, she needed this run and if the weakness travelling south was anything to go by, then her feet wouldn’t be able step in front of one another let alone take her on the five miles she had planned.
“T… baby, you need… to stop…”
“You really want me to…?”
“No, but… oh fuck Tina…”
Tina smiled to herself, feeling the reactions of the woman in her arms, but she also knew that Bette was set on her run, she placed her lips against the exposed neck, her tongue gently running along the length, grazing her teeth as she halted at her favourite spot, her lips parted as she concentrated on the juncture of Bette’s neck and shoulder, within the slight dip as her clavicle extended across her shoulder, her mouth, tongue and teeth all working in unison to bring the lithe woman to a trembling mass in her arms.
“Oh my god…” Bette whispered as she felt the sucking at her neck, her partners tongue and lips able to bring her to the edges of desire no matter where on her body they were concentrating on.
Tina backed away from Bette’s neck slightly, her vision taking in the mark that was appearing from her passionate and savage attack, she gave a smirk, knowing that Bette didn’t like marks left on her in visible places, but she also knew that Bette wouldn’t even notice, not until later, after her shower when she was standing in front of the mirror getting ready, and by that time, Tina would be well out of the way.
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(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
Oh my damn…that was awesome. Tina is in for a treat. Bring on part 2.
Just the description of Bette walking in dressed to kill…Its enough to make yer head spin!!..lol..Ok Tina may be dead meat…But what a way to go!…Great post!
OMG… my mouth got so dry just reading… dammmmmm girl… post the rest
I want to be Tina for awhile.Need to be on the receiving end of Pay back from Bette. The levi are a Porter trade mark. for anyone to look at, but only Tina to touch. thanks
That description of B was fantastic, I can actually c that right here right now…………..post soon u r the tease not T………..love T’s face.
OMG!!! You are so bad you are Good!!!! Thank you PPS
Two American icons….Levis and Bette Porter’s ass!! Forever memorialized in your tale. I just love this story. Stories don’t have to be smutty to be sexy and titillating. Great imagery and imagination are all that are needed.
Oh those fucking amazing levis. Just add Tina’s black bra and you have a slice of heaven with a B&T sandwich. You amaze and astound me with your writings. I always look forward to your chapters or stories because I know that you will take care of Bette/Jennifer and Tina/Laurel.
Nice!!!! glad to hear JB and I have more in common than our dark brown hair…levis, T-shirt and old Tan boots!!!!Oh now all I need is the JB body!!!! now where did u read or see that interview????
OMG! At a time like this, you can not tease tibetters like this!, I was hoping for you know Alpha bette, to be all alpha over Tina … Damn tis rude to leave a girl hanging like that lol! Post soon!
ahhhhh fuckin tease!!
Great chapter as always. I read that article. One of the pictures is now hanging in my locker at work. I know very high school, but I couldn’ help it. She is like a fine wine – better with age. Thanks foe takin the time ti write.
I just now thought of the scene from “Fast Times at Ridgemont High” when Judge Reinhold was jerking off in the bathroom hile he imagined Phoebe Cates emerging from the pool outside the house. Definitely looking forward to part 2!
Oh my stars above, you do have a way with words and describing a scene. You make it so real, we can just see her walking across that room and looking Tina dead in the eyes and not looking at anyone else with that smirk on her face and Tina being dumbfounded at the sight of her. What a way to go.
Damn Bette so fucking sexy and hot!!!!!!
OMG, there it is!!!! And I’m first!!! Off to read this wonderful tale!!! Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!
only you can write a scene as sexy as this — you are the Clam-tastic Jo !! lol
You….
so bad!!!!!!
are….
BTW – they definitely need to talk……right on Kit’s desk!!!!! Come on Pit Bull I know you want to….
It seems that Bette has found a way to have her cake and eat it, too. God bless her. And as Marie Antoinette once said, “Let them eat cake!” And anything else that cums to mind. I just hope they don’t lose their heads about it. Un autre morceau de gateau, s’il vous plait. Not a fan of hickeys myself, so I hope that Bette doesn’t resort to doing violence on Tina’s person in revenge. I’m sure I can leave that safely in your hands, Jo. OK, you’ve convinced me, I’m off to reaquaint myself with my Total Gym.
Such a tease, Jo! LOL… I’ve had this huge grin plastered on my face the whole time I was reading! I can’t believe what you can accomplish with just a goodbye, a run, getting dressed and… walking across the Planet! That has to be the biggest room ever! Or is it that this world’s temporal and spacial dimensions are turned upside down when one Ms Bette Porter in Levi’s walks in… And gosh I could just picture those jeans coming up her legs and ass! I love thee for bringing back the Levi’s! Ahem… Sooooo, about this part 2…..
Oh damn… Tina’s SO dead… we should all be that lucky, though.
That was a lot of fun. Tina was a bad girl so I’m sure something good is in store. I’m really looking forward to the next post.
JoMo I love this and your writing – now go and make my gf happy, she keeps babble about a desk???
lmao……i lovvvvvvve this fic…..amazing woman……just amazing….i could feel the love and lust between these two….that is what great writing is all about……
Oh Hell Yeah! Damn that was S-E-X-Y!!! Bette, Bette, Bette! *shaking my head* Hot damn! You’re one hot and sexy babe!
Hey sweetie – I just had to read it again and the scene with Bette (the very sexy feet/ankle woman) entering The Planet is FUCKING AMAZING…….as a reader you could really feel her walking reaaaaaal slow as a panther only having eyes on her prey!!! You’re the best mate xx
NICE! EXCELLENT! BEAUTIFUL! ah…where’s the rest?! LOL! I of course adore Tina’s reaction to Bette it’s frickin amazing..and Shane is right..they have an amazing connection…but that’s only cuz of how you write them! Keep it up!
i could just see Bette walking, my jaw would be on the floor in a second…i was laughing so hard at everybody’s reaction…bring on the dead meat part
Naughty, but oh so nice!!!!
Bette in those tight ass jeans and a sex scene coming up? What a perfect way to start a new chapter, please continue!
OMG! What a great chapter! But such a tease Jo..