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Do you remember when… Chapter 16 – Part 1
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Tina unfolded the wallet slowly, savouring the feeling inside at the surprise, savouring the look of utter devotion emanating from her partner’s eyes, savouring the excitement in her partner’s voice as she encouraged her to look.
Tina looked at the tickets, taking in the information, her eyes flitting across the dates, the location, back to Bette’s face, seeing the infectious smile as she watched in anticipation.
“Oh my god…”
“You like…?” Bette said quietly.
“No…, I don’t like…, I love it…” Tina threw her arms around Bette’s neck, hugging her tightly.
Bette’s smile grew wider as the extent of Tina’s excitement caught her, the tight hug, the kisses on her cheek, the murmurs of ‘oh my god… I can’t believe it…,’ echoing in her ear.
Tina leaned back, her eyes sparkling with tears, “what did I do to deserve this?”
“You love shopping right?”
“Yeah…”
“You love New York?”
“Absolutely…”
“I’m taking you Christmas shopping in New York…”
“I can’t believe it… Oh, fuck… I need to call work, arrange the time off…”
“All done…”
“What?” Tina said surprised, not able to believe it had all been sorted out.
“I’ve already talked to Liz, she arranged your time off, it’s all covered T…”
“I can’t believe you did all this?” Tina replied with another hug, “what did I do to deserve it huh?”
Bette looked in Tina’s eyes, seeing the love they shared, so plain to see, she gently kissed her rosy lips before replying, “just because…”
“I love you Bette Porter…”
“I love you too honey…”
“By the way… I have a surprise for you too…”
“Oh yeah?”
Tina leaned forward, bringing her lips close to Bette’s ear, her voice low and deliberate, “Pemequid oysters… for dinner tonight…”
“Oh my god… how on earth did you manage to get hold of them at this time of the year?”
“Shipped in especially for my one and only…”
“You really did that for me?” Bette asked, loving how Tina always put so much thought into arranging surprises for her.
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Okay, I’m first, but for once not happy to be!!! It’s sooooo late, and I was just about to rush to bed, cause I have this important meeting tomorrow, when I refreshed and saw your post!!! Aaaaargh!!! Unfortunately, I really can’t afford to read it now or I won’t enjoy, but I’m defintely going to bed wondering how my most favorite fic in the whole wide world (Angie’s words) is gonna shake my world this time! Rrrrr… I’m such a Jo-junkie!… but so proud to be! Okay, a real comment tomorrow then! ;)
Jo, never have I even known a flight attendant to actually help in acquiring that membership…Way to go Bette!!!!
Awesome chapter. I just love your stories. Please post again soon.
Tina wearing Bette’s jeans, and Bette without panties. *blink, blink* Too much hotness for one chapter! I just hope you don’t get too caught up in “Hindsight” and not give us an update until after the new year. LOL
Women in tight Levi’s, no panties, mile-high club, I do believe I feeling a bit warm. You gotta admit, being any where with Bette standing by your side would be hot.
Hey sexy indeed! Damn, Bette in levis, Bette in powere suit, Bette joing in the mile high club…..these are a few of my favorite things! This story has been missed Jobadge so thanks for coming back w/ a vengence. I really think you email your story to the levis people so they can market an entire campaign around my favortie L Word lady-Bette Porter. I just love the visual of Bette in jeans and a tee; she can class up the most casual of clothing. Please post soon b/c I’m hoping the next chapter will include a detailed account of what went on in that bathroom and just how much fun did Tina have joining the mile high club…..lol
Wooooh! Is it hot in here? I dont know but this chapter sure was!!!! I’m glad u got back to this one. I like hindsight too but i have been missing this one. Cant wait for u’r next post so PPS.
damn Jo that was hot! bette is just too sexy for words!
those damn jeans!!!!!!!!!!!!! longer
JO!I LOVE THIS CHAPTER AND TINA IN BETTES LEVIS HELL YA!p.p.s
What’s that Ginuwine song? “In Those Jeans”. So apt for our girls. Jo… How are those love letters coming along? Hee, hee. PPS. You’re the best.
Another great one.
I bet the smile on my face is as wide as the one on T’s when she read that little note!!!…..Please don’t leave it too long b4 u post either story…love ’em both.
Thats great……….love this
So now Tina stole those wanted, hot levis that form so well to that Porter Ass. I love the note/invitation that Bette sent to Tina. Hell, I would be crawling over the seat to get to the ladies room. Thank you for the wonderful reflection of the love that these two astonishing human beings have for one another.
OMG….Not fair stopping there, very bad Pit Bull!!! Thanks for the author note sweetie, I understood and loved it :o))…..OMG (again) absolutely loved T wearing the jeans and the way Bette told her she had no panties on, brilliant!!!! You really are an ‘ass’ girl, not one word about some cleavage LOL. You better write part 2 VERY VERY soon, need any expert help??? LOL. One thing though: Why is ‘THE you’ still missing?, I thought I was your ‘you editor’ LMAO. Mate this was amazing, the feelings your words evoke in me are incredible – you are The Bomb!!!
this story is so goog i love read happy B&T times, but girl why you stoped there? maybe another half of page is missing somewhere? anyway as always incredible post
Damn I missed this story and then you stopped! Tease!!!!Puleese post soon!
Ooops that comment should have been from Tinslgarsen, but I don’t function so well this early :o))
lol… that was very nice. See… that’s what I’m talking about with the great range of your writing. I’m loving the playful tone… and now you write your author notes in Danish… your skills never cease to amaze me, lol. Thanks.
… And shake my world it certainly did!… AGAIN! I so totally agree with bettefortina, that you should sell the idea of JB in Levis to those people, they would make a fortune!… Oh, and it seems that you have another little obsession with those Oysters dear!… Anyway, to be serious, wanted to say that you proved one of your greatest skills again, which is to elicit the most intense & romantic emotions with the simplest words… “Just because”… Isn’t it what love is all about? I was really struck by the way you introduced the whole idea and how this phrase gave so much meaning and intensity to the love they share… You really have a special gift, and that’s such an understatement for the magic of your words… I loved the whole chapter, of course, but that first part… that simple but oh so cherished moment of coming home to the one you love… Thank you… And you ARE the “Bomb”!
Hey Jo, That was wicked and warm, delighful and naughty. I loved it. You always manage to hit all the emotional power points and leave your readers drained but entertained. There was just so much love and teasing in this latest installment. Thank you so much for recounting the past is such a warm and wonderful way. Your Grateful and Loyal Fan.
Well, first I need to confess that I’m a Jo-junkie too, and don’t worry Kword, any superlative would be an understatement to describe Jobadge’s amazing talent. There are simply no words. In fact, I think I’m going to set myself the challenge of finding a neologism that could suit Jo’s writing skills. Anyway, “Do you remember” remains my favourite fanfic ever… What else could I say ?…
Im pretty sure the these two may very well cause some turbulance on this flight…so at the risk of sounding very corny…Fasten your seatbelts…its could be a bumpy ride!…Good one again!
whoa, is it hot in here? That was one scorching chapter Jo. And all done with word play. You writing is just amazing. Dont make us wait too long to see how Tina celebrated the joining of the club :)
This was so hot…I will dream & sleep well tonight.
I am with bettefortina. Jo you did it again just very HOT!!! Shower Time. THanks PPS
Damn that was awesome and can’t wait to see hot stuff cominggggggggg. Ok post soon please, thanks!