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    Do you remember when… Chapter 2

     

    “I was only going to say I think we should play the game tonight…”

     

    “Which game would that be Bette?” Tina teased.

     

    “I think you know which game…” Bette continued to nuzzle the creamy neck.

    “Trivial Pursuit?”

    “No…” Bette’s tongue became stronger against the skin, flicking the lobe as Tina continued the teasing, which she was matching in her own unique way.

    “Monopoly?”

     

    “No…”

     

    “Pictionary?”

     

    “No…”

     

    “Naked Twister?”

     

    Bette stopped.

     

    Tina smiled.

     

    “We haven’t played that in quite a while T, I like that idea…”

     

    Tina laughed, knowing her suggestion had halted Bette’s train of thought, also knowing exactly which game she wanted to play.

     

    “Which event did you want to remember babe?”

     

    Bette smiled, “I think we should play naked twister…”

     

    “We could ‘remember when’ we played naked twister for the first time, or we could carry on from where we left off last time!”

     

    “So it’s between ‘naked twister’ or ‘our first date’?” Bette asked; her kisses momentarily halted as her mind processed the options.

     

    “So…” Tina asked, turning in Bette’s arms to come face to face with her partner, “…what’s it to be babe?”   .

     

    “Can we do both?” Bette asked hopefully.

     

    Tina shook her head, her face smiling at Bette’s child like pleading, “one ‘remember when’ at a time…”

     

    “Spoilsport!”

     

    Tina wrapped her arms around Bette’s neck, pulling her in close, nudging her nose against Bette’s, followed by a delicate kiss on her lips, “what about we remember our first date… and maybe, if you’re good…” Tina smiled, kissing the tip of Bette’s nose, “… maybe we’ll get the twister mat out later…”

     

    Bette caught Tina’s lips with her own, “I think I can cope with that…”

     

    Their lips caressed one another’s, slowly, deliberately, time of no essence as they enjoyed the closeness of feeling their partner in their arms around one another.

     

    Tina broke the leisurely kiss, “you wanna take a shower before dinner?”

     

    Bette smiled, only one train of thought coursing through her mind, “only if you join me…”

     

    Their eyes met, no words needed as their communication skills from the past seven years continued to be honed into one another’s intuitive look. 

    Comments

    1. Naked twister — for gods sake you have no shame woman – naked twister ?! i really have lead a sheltered life – but as always your writing leaves me in awe — i bow at my knee great imperial jedi FF writer ally xx

    2. ‘As the shower head sprinkled the steaming hot water over the entwined bodies the stove continued to bubble, the temperature continued to rise, continued to build as the simmering liquid began reducing and reducing, until the flavoursome concoction began to sizzle, to dry, to slowly burn…’ Somehow I don’t think this had anything to do with what was on the stove. OMG I can’t get enough of your writing. I wish you had all the time in the world to do nothing but write for us. Sorry it took me forever to put a real comment, but I was busy going back and forth between 2 message boards discussing the L Word convention this November. =D Oh, and I have no clue what movie was described here. =/

    3. Hey, Lamentamini, the movie is “The Green Mile”. Which is a great movie as is your writing Jo, I love it have read from the beginning and am bad at leaving comments. I hope you grace us with another chapter soon! :)

    4. Well what can i say that i havnt already said about this chapter…and all the others before it….Touching, Romantic,Funny…..well…the thought of naked twister conjures up all sorts of thoughts..lol…but in the end all i can say is great trip down memory lane for them…and beautifully written as always…looking forward to more like this..

    5. Such a great premise for a story and so beautifully executed. Your writing is exquisite and this story is just pushing all the right buttons! I really can’t wait for more, I adore your posts.

    6. Jo….amazing. It would be sheer delight to have someone speak to me the way you write. Pure pleasure. You writing just keeps getting better. What a treat for us!

    7. I always wondered what happened after the initial meeting at the gallery. With your last two chapters you have brought the fictional characters of Bette and Tina into human terms. I am not sure if I am saying this right but you have shown us the inner workings of what took place. As a reader I get to experience their fear, gazes, their hunger, and the beginnings of a loving relationship. It helps to put their love into perspective so that us humans can understand. I have never played twister let alone naked twister. That gives me an incentive to learn quickly.

    8. it’s so nice when they are ‘happy in love’;great writing…looking forward to more ‘remember whens’…I always wanted to know what happened from when they met up until we met them…more soon please…

    9. How incredibly endearing…your imagery is crystal clear. so well done. twister these days would put me in traction.with either of the girls naked it would be cardiac arrest.sue

    10. Heart failure just thinking of Naked Twister with those two. I loved this you have filled in a lot of what did happen after the Opening at the Gallery thanks

    11. Loved this chapter! All in one it was sexy,sensual,erotic,romantic,sweet, happy,humorous..and other names you can throw in there to describe this reader feelings. You manage to do this with each and every single chapter. It truely is amazing! Thanks again for continuing this fanabulous story! Post soon!

    12. JB-I knew you what movie you were talking about before you even mentioned Mr. Jingles! Who didn’t cry at the end? I think the saddest part is the ending thinking about the prison guard (can’t remember his name) and Mr. Jingles living all those long added years after receiving the ‘John Coffey’ effect…having to watch all his loved ones die, and continue to live so much longer…him and Mr. Jingles…and if a mouse could live that much longer, how much longer would he live? How lonely he must have been. I so love this story, and I think B&T are both ready for a little naked twister now! LOL! Too funny about Tina forgetting to turn the stove down and burning up all the pans – how symbolic. Can’t wait for more!

    13. wow! love those trip on memory lane, beautifully written, you feel all the emotions and depth of your character..well done as always..yup! naked twister sounds much better than strip poker.

    14. Ohhhh that was so sweet, very touching and f…… cute – I loved it, but I always do so no surprise there right!! The banter you’ve created between our girls is so spot-on and full of love and humour, it’s beautiful. I’ll not even comment on the naked twister thing, I’m sure you know what my thoughts are LOL. Your writing is so….uh I’m lost for words, but I’m sure this is the way Tibette’s first kiss and date really happened. So thanks for enlighten us where I.C. has not.

    15. see i told you–you don’t have to write just NC-17 chapters, that you would still have as many readers no matter what you write, because you are just that great of a writer. loved this chapter.

    16. Hey JoB, That was delightful. I adore your teasing and romantic rememberings. Your has such a light yet deft touch in creating a magical moment in Bette and Tina’s lifs together. Never thought “The Green Mile” was a great date movie but just look how wrong I was. Capital punishment brought these two together. Their playful banter was awesome and honest. It is this openess that put you it a class of your own. I can’t wait to read the next memory. Thank you for this pleasure. Your Loyal Fan.

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