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Do you remember when… Chapter 4
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The entwined bodies continued the mouth to mouth marathon, intermittent words being shared in the intense mood surrounding the sofa, fingers rifled through hair, hands caressed faces, fingertips outlining the unique fine features of the other woman’s face, eye’s searching the others, searching and finding, safety of touches limited to face’s, arms and hands, neither daring to bridge the gap toward further intimacy of touching elsewhere, they shared breaths as the intense kisses overtook them both, the passion bubbling to the surface, taking both by surprise, each knowing the effect the other was having, but not really knowing how deeply rooted within their bodies those effects were presenting themselves.
They separated slightly, looking intently at one another, knowing that this evening was having a monumental affect on both of their lives, their minds being overwhelmed with the high emotions running throughout words to one another, their hearts pounding for reasons of the arduous bodily reactions and the complete and utter new feeling of falling in love.
Tina stifled a yawn, to the amusement of Bette, as she encircled her arm around the blonde’s shoulders, pulling her close, placing gentle kisses along her brow, the moment of quiet was allowing both beings to calm the raging passion building within them.
Bette took a deep breath, she laid her head back on the sofa, as Tina rested her head on Bette’s shoulder, their entwined fingers resting in Bette’s lap, the deep breath allowed Bette to regain some composure to the escalating endorphins pumping throughout her veins, she was positive that she was going to have to dig very deep in order to bring an element of equilibrium and stability to her raging hormones, this woman in her arms had pushed boundaries of her sexual energy farther than she had ever experienced, and as yet, they had shared only a kiss, but more than that, Bette’s body was reacting to the emotion between them, the aphrodisiac of falling in love, the feelings that were alien to her, feeling such an intense desire for someone, purely due to how she was feeling for the woman in her arms.
Tina’s eyes slid closed as the warmth and safety surrounded her, never had she felt so at ease and at peace than she did at that very moment, but there was a certain internal battle that she was having unmistakable difficulty controlling, and that was her libido.
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Breathless!!! Fucking amazing.
Damn Jo! My heart was racing along with theirs! How do you it everytime?How? I need a shower and all they did was fucking kiss!!! Damn!
A 10+ on the Richter Scale! *Thud* No One writes passion and romance and lust and desire like you do. Jo, you’re simply amazing. I agree with judith, I am breathless. Your stories should come with a health warning that oxygen canisters are needed while reading and for recovery afterwards. I know you must place yourself w/i your characters minds and hearts. That ‘s the only way your story could be so realistic. It’s as if I am participating in their actions not just observing. And you write in a way that is respectful to your characters and your readers. I am in awe of your talent in expressing so clearly what emotions your characters are experiencing. You write a love story that we all wished we had.
Ohh, isn’t love the best.. :-)
i think my jaw hit the floor and my mouth went dry readin your story jo and it was fuckin amazing absolutly outta this worldfuckk i am work how am i supposed to concentrate on spreadsheets when i am dreamin and fatasizin abt b and t having hot as fuck makeout sessionouch
No one captures it quite like you do …Every emotion that you can possibly imagine in this situation is right here…this chapter is so full of intense passion,…I had goosbumps! as always you come up with amazing chapters…then consistently top them!…Never surprised hun…But in complete awe at your talent…BTW the ending…Well!!this leaves it wide open for part 3…..lol…cant wait!……….
Damn I need a cigarette after that. I think I know what azmama’s talking about. You make it easy to step into the characters’ shoes. That’s when a story becomes 3D. I’ve noticed when I read your stories that it can take me over an hour to finisha chapter. Not so much because it’s long or I’m a slow reader but rather so much is happening that I find myself going over certain things multiple times to make sure I didn’t miss anything. One more thing. If I had been in Tina’s shoes and watched Bette take off her bra, I wouldn’t let out a subtle whimper. I would’ve probably fallen right through the door and landed on the floor in a gooey puddle of love. I’m still waiting for Tina to find the bathroom. I’m sure her bladder is hurting right about now. =p
That was beautiful, your writing is intoxicating!!
Wow……
so my little devonian shellfish – another genius chapter from you. i keep telling you that you are by a large distance the best writer on the site and everytime i say that you get all shy on me so – going to say it again – you are the best writer on the site. though i think he devouring of Bette Porter might be easier for you given your devotion to JB. frankly i am going to email the administrators and complain that this isn’t an nc17 cos it should be. i am in awe of you and i love you deeply — even if you are a clam
just thought of something else == while i write this season 3 has just started on UK television – – give me your version of bette and tina everytime cos you are more talented than the hacks that cobbled together s3.
OMFG, that was so real, erotic, sensual and any other word that can be used to descripe this chapter. Even though they never consummated their love in this chapter you could feel the tension, want and need of both woman. I am amazed that both women could hold themselves apart from another for as long as they did. I loved your description of Bette as the Super Hot Sex on Legs. It sounds like a very delectable desert. You now have earned not only the Cold Shower Award but also the Most Erotic Sensual Award.
Way much better than a NC-17. So much love and passion…Gosh, you describe so well what everybody is looking for. So so good. Couldn’t do anything than just read. This is trully amazing. The writing is amazing ! I felt like i was spying on them in their living room. It was amazing, really really amazing !!! Thank you so much !!! Fantastic !!
man that was geat and all they did was kiss
absolutely marvelous. Your writing is so good, there are no words!
Jobadge you have outdone yourself this time. This is a wonderful story and this is exactly what we all want to see, well, at least all of us TiBetter’s, “our girls” in love and loving each other. Thanks for your story.
Damn! These girls know how to make out. So glad Bette came to her senses. What was wrong with her, anyway? Well Jo, you’ve left me high and dry. All I’ve got is the couch.
A wonderful beginning…..love this
You know in my state I don’t need much to get myself going…Damn, girl, are you trying to kill me? You and Ally…I love England!!! Great chapter and I definitely can’t wait for the next one.
so exciting chapter! this increased the temperature and it was the first proper kiss! excellent girl!
God, when I asked last time for an other jewel to add in this marvellously beautiful necklace of yours, how could I have dream for a lovelier update ? You’re amazing, simply that, and I adore the way you depict with such a talent, deepness and sensitivity each step of this forever love story. What a wonderful tribute to this magical L word – the most powerful feeling ever. Thank you SO much for given us such an unforgettable gift ! They’re truly chapters to remember… And I cannot wait for the next !! ^_^
JB You are fucking amazing!!!! You say so much that needs to be said about something that (to some) seems so small. Excellent! Three hours and eighteen minutes – where did you come up with that time exactly JB?
All I can say is “OH MY GOD!!!!!!!” That was absolutley incredible!!!!!!!!!!!!! And you are absolutely incredible. Thank you for a WONDERFUAL chapter.
i knew it was a reason for me to stay up all night and read your story at 3 am..it was perfect
Wow! Double wow!!
WOW what a kissing marathon, but still no NC-17 Jo LOL!!! I don’t know what to say this time….other than you’re simply the best on this side and in general!!!!!! Your humble mate
Wow!! I’m at a loss for words! Just awesome! Such talent! Thanks jo!
Wow…I read this story at 3 o’clock and was gonna comment on it when a friend came by for me to go to the store for a minute and here it is freakin 1:14 a.m….anyway love the story love B&T beginnings please post soon.
Its so nice to see the return of the S.H.S.L. in just the right place. Thanks for the awesome memory.
THUD… that’s it, just… THUD…
Wow and that was just kissing!! Your chapters leave me breathless. You write like no other. The show could use your talent!! Please hurry soon with an update on what happens after the “I Love Yous”.
This is swesome and hot, love it. Cant wait to see more, post soon please, Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!
Jobage, Your write the intense, imaginative and romantic chapters. The love just flows from each and every thought and word spoken by Bette and Tina. Their sudden connection has both terrified and engaged and entraped both of their hearts. The level of detail is magnificent as I can picture every scene and feel every breath, every loving touch, every amorous moan, every anticipated lick and suck. I adore the way in which you had Bette being the one trying to cool things down as Tina’s ador was taking them past the point of no return. Bette was so brilliant is trying to soothe Tina and explain her rationale for stopping this act. Tina’s vision of Bette’d unexpected strip tease was a joy. I could feel my heart start to pump faster and as my breathe swallowed as this scene played out. Bette’s reaction was glorious as she tried to reassure Tina that all was well. I was on the stairs as Tina recoiled from Bette’s rebuttal and jumped for joy as Bette captured Tina once more and took her into the house. This is so much desire and passion in this magical melodrama. Please let the night continue and our gals get all hot and sweaty in each others arms. Brava!! For an awesome adventure. Your Loyal Fan.
Oh my god! I love the depth of your writing. The detail is amazing. Thank you for sharing this story.