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Do you remember when… Chapter 5
Tina felt the now familiar surge that came about when in such close proximity to this woman, her presence and her words affecting her every sense, she swallowed the large obstruction that had suddenly appeared in her throat, the excited nervousness sending a wave through her body.
"… also that I… I Love you Tina…"
Tina smiled at the tentative words, noticing the emotion being placed in each word, "it sounds like that’s the first time you have ever said those words."
"It is…"
Tina’s face showed surprise, although as she mentally compared the effect this woman had on her to other feelings of past relationships, she knew in her heart, without a shadow of a doubt, that this feeling was something she would never experience with another human being in her life, this unique, overwhelming, all encompassing feeling of being in love, being in love with Bette Porter.
"I love you too Bette…"
Bette leaned forward capturing Tina’s lips with her own, the quiet gentleness of the kiss, full of emotion, full of softness, the day’s building intensity inflamed as lips parted and tongues met. Bette’s arms encircled Tina’s waist as Tina’s automatically wrapped themselves around Bette’s neck, her fingers entwining in the darks curls, pulling her closer as the rising bubbling desire began to surface in the passionate embrace.
As the Bette’s arms wandered over Tina’s back, she suddenly broke the kiss, the hot hands wreaking havoc on her senses, their eyes meeting in silent understanding, Bette stepped slowly forward, guiding Tina as the intense gaze penetrated the shared breaths, their chests rising and falling, as they suddenly found themselves at the base of the bed.
Bette stepped back from Tina, their hands dropping to their sides, the overwhelming intensity of the moment increasing the beating and pounding of the united hearts, Tina looked from the piercing blackness to the parted lips before her, she brought her finger to the lips, touching the softness, watching her finger drag across the skin, feeling the warm breath on her fingertip.
She could sense the obvious rising of her chest, the intensified moments overwhelming her, her finger dropping as her eyes followed the path to Bette’s neck, the long fine neck that she wanted to kiss, she looked lower, glancing at the mirrored rising and falling of Bette’s chest, her eyes slowly travelling over the cotton tee shirt, her eyes widening as her admiration became apparent, her lingering gaze watching in fascination as her fingers hovered, she looked to Bette’s face, seeking permission…
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Absolutly the ultimate as Sensual,Passionate love stories go…this can not help but take your breath away…Not to mention making me speechless in places….God i love this story!……the absolute perfect end to your 3 part!….Thanks mate…Privilage to read it..
Oh and waiting up paid off big time….I GOT TO BE FIRST!…lol
Wow…I had to get up and walk away from my computer for a minute. I could have sworn I had the a/c on but it is really hot in here. I really enjoyed this story. I hope you post again soon.
That was awfully nice, Jo. Sweet and hot.
JB, my heart feels swollen from the love exuded in your words. Nobody describes B&T’s ‘holy connection’ the way you do – absolute perfection JB!
Girl..I don’t know how you do it! That was hot and I’m not just saying that because I’m pregnant and insatiable either. Nobody can’t write them like you.
Great story
Tina has said that Bette should come with a health warning attached to her. The same goes for your stories. No one writes B & T passion in the detailed , totally erotic way that you do. Jo, at some of the theme and amusement parks there’s a warning posted that states if you have a heart condition don’t get on this ride. So it is w/your stories. You should post the warning in the author’s notes/comments section. Just outstanding!
Beautifully written…a wonder sexual scene….very imaginative…sad to see it leave…..more more more….
I’m worn out and all I did was read! I really liked how Bette let Tina do her thing before taking her. It created an even bigger trust. Verrrrrry nice, Jo. ;)
wow wow
ABSOLUTELY B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!!! Thank you so much for this. It made my night.
THAT WAS INCREDIBLE. That’s all I can. And WOW!
Wow that was SO wonderful, just WOW!!!
THUD…….and in a big way….I mean huge!!!!!!!!!!
That was utterly breath taking or I should say breathless. All this time I assumed that Bette took that first step to making love to Tina the initial encounter. This is the first time that you see Tina actually making the first move and taking her first physical trip of Bette’s winding, curvy body. I too had to stop take a walkabout and then return to the computer screen. This definitely was a massive sensory overload not just for Tina and Bette but for the reader also. I do hope that you will continue with the Remember When series.
that is one of the most descriptive fics ive ever read
Having trouble with the whole thinking thing at the moment, so all I’ll say is WOW.
Wonderfully written… absolutely beautiful!
Amazing, as always. You write so descriptively, it really does jump off the screen. Thanks mate.
That was unbelievable, amazing, Awesome WOW
Madame Jobadge…that chapter has got to be a benchmark for emotional and physical B&T unions. There’s a subtle yet intense orchestration of the physical and emotional elements and they seem to be of equal and very powerful force. This is not an easy feat to accomplish by any stretch, and certainly not easy to do so this well. The words and they way they’re put together seize the reader and don’t let go until the end…. Or maybe I shoulda just said “wow”.
WOW holy freaking cow, this is unfuckingbelievable amazing. Love this story and hope you will continue soon or sequal a new one for us please. Thanks for a hot and sexy chapter, loving it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
u left me speechless and in need of a cold shower :)
that was sooo hot! great story! love it! =)
Omigosh…like they all said…awesome, powerful, romantic, sensual, loving, sexy, hot! I saw it all. I felt it all. Wow…
OMG….OMG….OMG…..OMG…(Hansen has now fainted)
amazing! amazing post! with a lot of details! you writed it excellent!
holy shyt womyn you are merciless, lol…love your writing…
JoB, That was astounding. You generate the essence of romance and love in every chapter that you craft. Every addition has been eloquent and erotic; sensual and sexy; teasing and tantalizing; mind-blowing and magical. I am completely enchanted by your Bette and Tina. The instant connection is marvelous and inspirational. The depth of their feelings and trust give me hope that there truly is a soul mate out there. Your wonderful words create a sense of being there as an observer and being part of this remarkable adventure that these gals have embarked on. The road may be rocky and treacherous at times but together they will overcome all obstacles. You have given this drama a heartwarming and majestic soul. Thank you so, so, so much. Your Loyal Fan.
Excellent as usual Jo! You done did it again! You are undoubtedly one of the best writers on the site! Your masterful at creating these scenes so full of sensuality, eroticism, sexiness,romance, and sweetness. It leaves this reader breathless and amazed at your ability! Post soon!
Absolutely Beautiful. So slow,sensual,sweet,tender,and Hot.Just amazing.Everything is perfect. Excellent job,Jobadge!
i can’t comment because i’m still recovering from this chapter…all i can say now is WOW
WOW
I thought I should leave a real comment too…..and let me start by saying that you really did them justice Jo!!! I love how you let Tina explore Bettes body, let Tina really see/feel a womans body for the first time, so amazing. I loved ever bit of the post and I want more :o))
Holy Wow! This is just exquisite! Your writing is amazing Jo! ^_^ Thanks!!!!
Jo … I’ve have been following your stories … waiting for this one in particular … I knew you would do the thoughts we had justice. Congrats on a job WELL DONE! Ditto to all the other comments left with this story. I too was left breathless! You certainly have a gift when it comes to the descriptive erotic. Cheers M
Jo, that was absolutely amazing. It was veru detailed, sensual, erotic…gosh I don’t think I’ll ever find the words. Thank you!!!! BTW, I love your stories. Please keep them coming.