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Do you remember when… Chapter 5
"Bette?" Tina looked to the woman whose eyes were heavy; the passionate glint giving Tina cause to take a deep breath, the intensity scared her and excited her.
Bette opened her eyes, "yeah?"
"Is it too soon for us to be doing this?" Tina had a moment of uncertainty pass through her mind.
Bette smiled, picking up on Tina’s sudden timid question, she brought her fingers to Tina’s cheek, gently stroking the soft skin as she looked into the glazed hazel eyes, "baby, if this feels right for both of us, who is to say if it’s too soon or not, but you know it’s okay if you feel that it is."
Tina swallowed the lump in her throat, moving her tongue to create the much needed moisture in her dry mouth before she spoke, "it’s so surreal…"
"Do you want us to stop?"
Bette’s gentleness brought a wave of emotion to Tina’s mind, the amazing woman in front of her made her feel safe, secure and so loved that it hurt; her heart had been beating so furiously that her chest hurt, she gave a slight shake of her head, almost afraid of uttering the words.
Bette brought Tina into her arms, holding her close as Tina buried her head in Bette’s neck, her slow deliberate words penetrating Tina’s ear as she spoke, "I love you; I love you more than I have loved anything or anyone in my life…"
Tina listened to the words being quietly whispered into her ear, and she knew, she knew that this was right, they were meant to be together, they had met and fallen in love, a moments thought of how something so wrong could feel so right crossed her mind, but this wasn’t wrong, how could this unique and overwhelming feeling of being in love feel anything but right, she wanted to be loved by this woman, she wanted to love her, she wanted to love her and explore her.
Tina moved her head in order to come face to face, eye to eye, her breath catching in her throat as the deep look reflecting back at her told her everything she ever wanted to know, her quiet voice utter the thing in the forefront of her mind "would you let me explore your body?"
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Absolutly the ultimate as Sensual,Passionate love stories go…this can not help but take your breath away…Not to mention making me speechless in places….God i love this story!……the absolute perfect end to your 3 part!….Thanks mate…Privilage to read it..
Oh and waiting up paid off big time….I GOT TO BE FIRST!…lol
Wow…I had to get up and walk away from my computer for a minute. I could have sworn I had the a/c on but it is really hot in here. I really enjoyed this story. I hope you post again soon.
That was awfully nice, Jo. Sweet and hot.
JB, my heart feels swollen from the love exuded in your words. Nobody describes B&T’s ‘holy connection’ the way you do – absolute perfection JB!
Girl..I don’t know how you do it! That was hot and I’m not just saying that because I’m pregnant and insatiable either. Nobody can’t write them like you.
Great story
Tina has said that Bette should come with a health warning attached to her. The same goes for your stories. No one writes B & T passion in the detailed , totally erotic way that you do. Jo, at some of the theme and amusement parks there’s a warning posted that states if you have a heart condition don’t get on this ride. So it is w/your stories. You should post the warning in the author’s notes/comments section. Just outstanding!
Beautifully written…a wonder sexual scene….very imaginative…sad to see it leave…..more more more….
I’m worn out and all I did was read! I really liked how Bette let Tina do her thing before taking her. It created an even bigger trust. Verrrrrry nice, Jo. ;)
wow wow
ABSOLUTELY B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!!! Thank you so much for this. It made my night.
THAT WAS INCREDIBLE. That’s all I can. And WOW!
Wow that was SO wonderful, just WOW!!!
THUD…….and in a big way….I mean huge!!!!!!!!!!
That was utterly breath taking or I should say breathless. All this time I assumed that Bette took that first step to making love to Tina the initial encounter. This is the first time that you see Tina actually making the first move and taking her first physical trip of Bette’s winding, curvy body. I too had to stop take a walkabout and then return to the computer screen. This definitely was a massive sensory overload not just for Tina and Bette but for the reader also. I do hope that you will continue with the Remember When series.
that is one of the most descriptive fics ive ever read
Having trouble with the whole thinking thing at the moment, so all I’ll say is WOW.
Wonderfully written… absolutely beautiful!
Amazing, as always. You write so descriptively, it really does jump off the screen. Thanks mate.
That was unbelievable, amazing, Awesome WOW
Madame Jobadge…that chapter has got to be a benchmark for emotional and physical B&T unions. There’s a subtle yet intense orchestration of the physical and emotional elements and they seem to be of equal and very powerful force. This is not an easy feat to accomplish by any stretch, and certainly not easy to do so this well. The words and they way they’re put together seize the reader and don’t let go until the end…. Or maybe I shoulda just said “wow”.
WOW holy freaking cow, this is unfuckingbelievable amazing. Love this story and hope you will continue soon or sequal a new one for us please. Thanks for a hot and sexy chapter, loving it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
u left me speechless and in need of a cold shower :)
that was sooo hot! great story! love it! =)
Omigosh…like they all said…awesome, powerful, romantic, sensual, loving, sexy, hot! I saw it all. I felt it all. Wow…
OMG….OMG….OMG…..OMG…(Hansen has now fainted)
amazing! amazing post! with a lot of details! you writed it excellent!
holy shyt womyn you are merciless, lol…love your writing…
JoB, That was astounding. You generate the essence of romance and love in every chapter that you craft. Every addition has been eloquent and erotic; sensual and sexy; teasing and tantalizing; mind-blowing and magical. I am completely enchanted by your Bette and Tina. The instant connection is marvelous and inspirational. The depth of their feelings and trust give me hope that there truly is a soul mate out there. Your wonderful words create a sense of being there as an observer and being part of this remarkable adventure that these gals have embarked on. The road may be rocky and treacherous at times but together they will overcome all obstacles. You have given this drama a heartwarming and majestic soul. Thank you so, so, so much. Your Loyal Fan.
Excellent as usual Jo! You done did it again! You are undoubtedly one of the best writers on the site! Your masterful at creating these scenes so full of sensuality, eroticism, sexiness,romance, and sweetness. It leaves this reader breathless and amazed at your ability! Post soon!
Absolutely Beautiful. So slow,sensual,sweet,tender,and Hot.Just amazing.Everything is perfect. Excellent job,Jobadge!
i can’t comment because i’m still recovering from this chapter…all i can say now is WOW
WOW
I thought I should leave a real comment too…..and let me start by saying that you really did them justice Jo!!! I love how you let Tina explore Bettes body, let Tina really see/feel a womans body for the first time, so amazing. I loved ever bit of the post and I want more :o))
Holy Wow! This is just exquisite! Your writing is amazing Jo! ^_^ Thanks!!!!
Jo … I’ve have been following your stories … waiting for this one in particular … I knew you would do the thoughts we had justice. Congrats on a job WELL DONE! Ditto to all the other comments left with this story. I too was left breathless! You certainly have a gift when it comes to the descriptive erotic. Cheers M
Jo, that was absolutely amazing. It was veru detailed, sensual, erotic…gosh I don’t think I’ll ever find the words. Thank you!!!! BTW, I love your stories. Please keep them coming.