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Do you remember when… Chapter 9
Bette reached down entwining her fingers in the blonde hair at her centre, her back arching into Tina as her hands pulled Tina closer, closer than she already was as she rocked herself over Tina’s tongue, her heels digging into the edge of the coffee table as the sensations wreaked havoc on her body and mind, her fingers clasped the hair, pulling Tina in, wanting to feel more of her.
Bette’s body felt the extreme heat traversing throughout her being; familiar with the powerful orgasm was building within her, Tina’s finger was gently compressing her inner walls, intensifying the already strong sensations as they began their slow and deliberate climb to their ultimate pinnacle.
Tina felt the pressure in her mind, the urgency of Bette’s hands in her hair, the rocking of her body against her, the excited whimpers coming from above, the increased intensity of the movements signalling to Tina how close Bette really was, she began to increase her motion, her finger stroked the internal wall as her tongue flicked her swollen centre.
Bette’s movements increased as her mind became blank, all sensations focused in one area, building and building…
Tina felt the crest of the wave firstly on her finger as she increased the pressure, her tongue and finger in complete synchronization as they worked together to ride the orgasm to its full capacity. Bette’s breathing became fast and furious as it broke free, sweeping throughout her body, the detonation igniting her whole being as her body violently shuddered, her own unique sap gently trickling from her centre as her silent screams reverberated around the room.
Tina removed her finger as she continued to devour her lover’s essence, quenching the thirst she had for her lover as she sensed and felt the aftershocks beneath her tongue.
“Fuck…” Bette’s breathing was shallow, small breaths allowed her to rekindle some semblance of feeling following the massive rush of endorphins that were coursing throughout her body.
“Bette…?”
“Mmmm…” came the quiet mumbled reply.
“You wanna watch a video now?” said Tina with a wicked smile as she watched the woman she loved more than anything slowly recovering from what could only be described as an almighty, earth shattering, thunderbolt of an orgasm.
Bette’s silent reply of a wry dazed smile only further enforced Tina to understand the magnitude of the experience they had just shared.
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(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
Hey…what a chapter…well you managed to bring my favorite chapter of all time……And if at all possible make it even better!…The Portard porn really should have a health warning on it ..not only for Bette..but for the rest of us!.lol..Ok So Bette was caught in a compromising position…but ya know!…Tina was teasing her way more than she could handle…so really i think it only right that Tina finish what she started…and What a finish..lol…as always loved this!…
Oh…my…gosh! That was so hot! I should have known better than to read this at work…. Can’t wait for the next installment.
I forgot to breathe while i was reading that.That was tooooo Hot.Thud job. The gallery scene was so intensely Hot, and erotic. And The portard porn collectionTinaloving..Oh my Gawd. Loss for words.B&T are freaks(iloveit). I need air!
Oh how I remember that day at the gallery oh so well..actually i just read that chapter not so long ago..I love your stories…Thanks for posting..I look forward to them everytime..
I can’t believe I’m reading this at work. I swear I was holding my breath. Here I am trying to have lunch thinking I’ll just check and see whats been posted. OMG, the rest of the day is going to be so long.
Poor Bette was caigh doing what come naturally when you want your soul mate and lover and she isn’t there That was one of the best charter your wrote and you brough it back in such a beautiful way. thanks
i’m speechless…….maybe later my mind can process this, for now it’s blank…all i can think of is Holy f***
Damn woman! *Thud* Mouth is dy and i think I stopped breathing for a minute! Post soon!
HOT!!!!! HOT!!!!!!! HOT!!!!!!!!
That was the most erotic thing I’ve ever read.
This chapter only is the anthology of erotic “situations” and grandiose writing. You’re a maestro at building the scene and bringing it to its apogee, your description of the feelings going through their mind at those times leaves me breathless. Bravo!
What a great chapter. Love the story.
OMFG that was awesome! You made the little hairs stand up on the back of my neck! No one can write the Tibette chemistry like you do Jo! Yep, nobody even comes close! JB your the best!
Damn….this was pretty damn HOT!! – I have to add that while Tina wears her Nike Shox for running, I wear mine for fashion. A girl must always be cute!! ^_^
Jobadge, you’re AWESOME. That was????????? Go girl.
Damn, damn that was just toooo hoooot. I really need a copy of that tape of the very erotic gallery scene. You only enhanced that scene and brought out even more intense feelings and desires. I do believe that this chapter is tied with the original gallery scene as my favorite chapters. I also love your situations chapters.
Goodeness, Jo, I think I’m almost as dazed as Bette. Could my nub be swollen? I’ll have to sashay someplace to check it out. I think I told you when you put out the original gallery chapter about how slowly I read it, the better to enjoy it. Well, you did it to me again.
Jo….You’re just amazing. Your NC-17s are off the chain! I can barely breathe. I can hardly write a simple note and look what you can do w/moments.
wow…
wheeeeeeeeew wut a hot chapter! i very much enjoy ur writing! those cute lil situation chapters too! keep on writing! hope to see more (a lot more) posts soon!!! =)
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Triple THUD!! Jo you’re simply the best. Better than all the rest. Oh my God. What a way to start the weekend. Thank you for what you do.
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, can’t wait to see more. Ok post soon please, thanks!
lmao@honda90. Problems typing, sweetie? ;) As if I’m one to talk I typed “swttie” at first. lol I’d kinda like to see you write a short collection of gallery chapters.
This was just as hot, amazing and mind-blowing as I had expected, thanks for listen to my advise :o))
Cold shower… Be right back!!!
That’s what I’m talking about!
damn that waz hottttttttttttttttttt
Holy WOW!… What can I say? Awesome! Just absolutely awesome!!!!!