Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of NC-17. Age verification is required to proceed.
Do you remember when… Chapter 9
“Yeah…” Tina said, seeing that a reply from Bette was not forthcoming from the glazed look that was reflecting back at her.
“I… don’t think… I’m going to last… very long…”
Tina smiled at the words, sure that maybe she could stretch things out just a little longer than Bette was thinking.
“Don’t worry about that babe, we have all day…”
“Oh god…” Bette murmured as she watched the blonde locks descend.
Tina hovered above Bette’s curls, she glanced upward, looking towards Bette’s face and smiled as they locked eyes, she slowly moved her hands along Bette’s inner thighs, her fingertips tracing invisible lines along the soft, smooth skin, she watched her own fingertips get closer, her eyes taking in the want and need evidently shining on the neat triangle of curls before her.
Bette’s hands moved to the edge of the sofa, clasping tightly as she watched in fascination and anticipation of what Tina was doing, she could feel her centre already throbbing, the intimate ache had returned tenfold and more, her breathing became rapid as she felt Tina’s lips on her inner thigh, following the course of her fingers, the light delicate touches causing lightening bolts throughout her body, the sensations of Tina’s hot breath, so close, yet so far away.
Her legs, although being supported by coffee table began to become weak, an indescribable sensation travelling from her toes, past her calves, into her juddering knees, along her thighs, cantering in the exact location where Tina’s breath was hitting her skin.
As the sensation crept further up into her body, becoming all consuming, her pounding heart was now beating within her ears, her mouth was becoming drier, the evasive moisture pooling in another region of her body to join the arousal from her earlier escapade.
The dryness in her mouth was causing difficulty in forming words or sounds, her tongue was trying to manipulate sounds and moisture, but the only the vestige of sound was a low growl coming from the back of her throat, her eyes could no longer remain open as Tina worked closer to her throbbing centre.
Tina’s fingertips traced further lines along her inner thighs, her knees unconsciously dropped further apart, giving Tina unequivocal access to her desired destination, feeling the access widen Tina’s eyes matched the movement and also widened in expectation of her first taste of the view before her.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.


(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
Hey…what a chapter…well you managed to bring my favorite chapter of all time……And if at all possible make it even better!…The Portard porn really should have a health warning on it ..not only for Bette..but for the rest of us!.lol..Ok So Bette was caught in a compromising position…but ya know!…Tina was teasing her way more than she could handle…so really i think it only right that Tina finish what she started…and What a finish..lol…as always loved this!…
Oh…my…gosh! That was so hot! I should have known better than to read this at work…. Can’t wait for the next installment.
I forgot to breathe while i was reading that.That was tooooo Hot.Thud job. The gallery scene was so intensely Hot, and erotic. And The portard porn collectionTinaloving..Oh my Gawd. Loss for words.B&T are freaks(iloveit). I need air!
Oh how I remember that day at the gallery oh so well..actually i just read that chapter not so long ago..I love your stories…Thanks for posting..I look forward to them everytime..
I can’t believe I’m reading this at work. I swear I was holding my breath. Here I am trying to have lunch thinking I’ll just check and see whats been posted. OMG, the rest of the day is going to be so long.
Poor Bette was caigh doing what come naturally when you want your soul mate and lover and she isn’t there That was one of the best charter your wrote and you brough it back in such a beautiful way. thanks
i’m speechless…….maybe later my mind can process this, for now it’s blank…all i can think of is Holy f***
Damn woman! *Thud* Mouth is dy and i think I stopped breathing for a minute! Post soon!
HOT!!!!! HOT!!!!!!! HOT!!!!!!!!
That was the most erotic thing I’ve ever read.
This chapter only is the anthology of erotic “situations” and grandiose writing. You’re a maestro at building the scene and bringing it to its apogee, your description of the feelings going through their mind at those times leaves me breathless. Bravo!
What a great chapter. Love the story.
OMFG that was awesome! You made the little hairs stand up on the back of my neck! No one can write the Tibette chemistry like you do Jo! Yep, nobody even comes close! JB your the best!
Damn….this was pretty damn HOT!! – I have to add that while Tina wears her Nike Shox for running, I wear mine for fashion. A girl must always be cute!! ^_^
Jobadge, you’re AWESOME. That was????????? Go girl.
Damn, damn that was just toooo hoooot. I really need a copy of that tape of the very erotic gallery scene. You only enhanced that scene and brought out even more intense feelings and desires. I do believe that this chapter is tied with the original gallery scene as my favorite chapters. I also love your situations chapters.
Goodeness, Jo, I think I’m almost as dazed as Bette. Could my nub be swollen? I’ll have to sashay someplace to check it out. I think I told you when you put out the original gallery chapter about how slowly I read it, the better to enjoy it. Well, you did it to me again.
Jo….You’re just amazing. Your NC-17s are off the chain! I can barely breathe. I can hardly write a simple note and look what you can do w/moments.
wow…
wheeeeeeeeew wut a hot chapter! i very much enjoy ur writing! those cute lil situation chapters too! keep on writing! hope to see more (a lot more) posts soon!!! =)
I lmvmz.r;ok fmnz/.,m fekmnlkdf ‘odf, lkg lkmgm zdgrknxdfxbmitroiepr lkglkmrg klms ………………………………………………….
aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Triple THUD!! Jo you’re simply the best. Better than all the rest. Oh my God. What a way to start the weekend. Thank you for what you do.
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, can’t wait to see more. Ok post soon please, thanks!
lmao@honda90. Problems typing, sweetie? ;) As if I’m one to talk I typed “swttie” at first. lol I’d kinda like to see you write a short collection of gallery chapters.
This was just as hot, amazing and mind-blowing as I had expected, thanks for listen to my advise :o))
Cold shower… Be right back!!!
That’s what I’m talking about!
damn that waz hottttttttttttttttttt
Holy WOW!… What can I say? Awesome! Just absolutely awesome!!!!!