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    Don’t Fade Away Ch. 5

    Story written on December 10, 2005 by Akiracolorblind.
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    She laid there, hoping someone will save her..CAUTION:Some violence

     

    The doctor nodded his head and looked at the chart. “Well, Miss McCutcheon is doing just fine. She has a couple of crack ribs, a concussion, her eye is swollen shut and a busted lip. We’re going to let her rest for the night, so all you can do is wait for right now.”

     

    “Thank you doctor.”  He nodded his head and walked away. Alice sat down and laid her head on the wall. “Where the ***** is Carmen?”

     

    Dana grabbed Alice’s hand. “Don’t worry babe, she’ll be here.”

     

     

                Carmen and Olivia were sitting at a table at Taos. Carmen took a drink of her white wine and grabbed her fork. She took another bite of her salad and put the fork. Olivia sat her glass down and crossed her arms on the table. She smiled, and Carmen looked at her girlfriend.

     

    “So what’s my surprise?”

     

    Olivia smiled and grabbed Carmen’s hand. “Carmen, I thought this is a perfect night for you and me. I want you to know that I love you, and that I want to know what are you doing for the rest of your life.”

     

    Carmen looked at Olivia. “I don’t know…” She laughed softly. Olivia smiled and reached in her pocket. She put a small box on the table. “Oh my god”

     

    “CarmenWill you give me the honor of being my wife?” Olivia opened the box showing off a 10 karat yellow diamond ring. Carmen looked at the ring and felt the tears fall. Carmen smiled softly and looked at Olivia. Olivia smiled and rubbed her hand. “Please say something.”

     

    “Y-YesYes.” Olivia smiled and grabbed the ring out of the box. She placed it on Carmen’s ring finger and got out of her chair. She knelt down in front of Carmen and kissed her softly.

     

    “I love you.”

     

    “I love you too.” Carmen wrapped her arms around Olivia and held her closely. Carmen heard her phone go off in her purse. She let go of Olivia and looked inside her purse. She grabbed her phone and noticed that it was Alice.

     

    “Hello?”

     

    “My god Carmen, where are you? I’ve been calling you forever. Did you get any of my messages?”

     

    Carmen moved her hair out of her face. “No, why? What’s wrong?”

     

    “Shane’s in the hospital.” Carmen dropped her phone and then picked it up again.

     

    “W-What?” Olivia looked at Carmen concernedly.

     

    “Shane’s in the hospital. You gotta get here please.”

     

    “A-Alright, I’ll be there.”

     

    “Okay, bye.” Carmen hung up her phone and grabbed her purse. Olivia stood to her feet and looked at Carmen.

     

    “What’s wrong babe?”

     

    “We gotta go to the hospital.”

     

    “Why? What’s happened?”

     

    Carmen looked at Olivia with tears in her eyes. “I don’t know, but we got to go.”

     

     

     

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    1. Holy Shit . . . This story is off the chain!!! You got to update and make it soon. Oh and by the way I really don’t like Olivia and Carmen betta slow down a little bit and think of what she possibly still has with Shane and acknowledge the fact that Shane is actually trying to get cleaned up just for her. Anyways . . . C-Ya and LYLASOh, did I mention how much I don’t like Olivia . . . =), lol

    3. oh, the drama!! carmen can’t be engaged to olivia! sharmen belong together. i hope carmen sees the efforts shane is taking. thx for the post. ^ – ^

    4. I must have heard it wrong right? Carmen did not say Yes, did she? How could she do that? Shane was cleaning herself up, just to get back together with her. Fuck… I really love this fic, so really you gotta update soon!!!

    6. Oh Shit! She’s not actually taking Olivia to the hospital with her? Bad move Carmen. Carmen seems to be putting herself between a rock & a hardplace (please forgive the cliche’, it fit) making her situation even more complicated. How will Olivia get along w/ the gang? Post soon.

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