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    Don’t Let This Be It

    Story written on March 22, 2005 by angelic1.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=52714
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    Tina comes home after Dana’s party..

    Tina shut the door quietly behind her, careful not to make any extra noise that would aggravate Bette or wake her up. Rubbing her stomach, she went to the kitchen to get some water before sneaking up to bed.

    As she opened the fridge she noticed the outside light was on. Curious, she slid open the doors to see the back of Bette’s head as she sat hunched over holding a glass which shimmered in the light of the pool. Nodding to herself, Tina went into retreat.

    “So did you have a good time?” Bette said quietly, stopping Tina in her tracks. Tina felt her mouth dry up, unable to answer.

    “Did you have a good time?” Bette asked again, stressing her words as she took another drink.

    “Bette.. I..”

    “Did you have a ***** good time?” Bette snapped, yelling. She stood up and turned around to face Tina.

    Tina could see that her face was stained with tears and her eyes were weighed down with the effects of alcohol.

    “No.. No I didn’t,” Tina said slowly and truthfully.

    “Then why, T? Why?” Bette asked harshly, stepping forward.

    “I don’t know why,” Tina mumbled as she looked down.

    “You don’t know why what? Why her? Why tonight? Why you decided to show up with her? Why you lied to me about the baby? Why you decided to force the knife in a little ***** far–”

    “I’m sorry Bette, it was ***** timing, I know. I’m sorry, but I have to move on with my life,” Tina said, her voice letting her down, wavering, and not convincing even herself.

    “That’s all you have to offer as an explanation, T?” Bette yelled. “***** timing? In one day I wake up with you in the house again, thinking there might be a chance, then I find out you’re pregnant and I feel so ***** stupid for not knowing it before and then you appear at Dana’s party with the woman who has probably ruined the CAC, and you hold her and you dance with her–” Bette’s voice was rising to a high shriek.

    “Bette calm down.”

    “I will not!” She screamed, feeling her pounding heartbeat reverberate in her throat. An uncomfortable moment of silence passed as Bette tried to compose herself.

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    4. Well, at least they are talking/screaming…AND Tina admitted she loves Bette!!!!
      It is heartbreaking but this is the first time they have really even talked. MOre please

    6. Big Sigh! I wish the show would actually go down like this, but knowing TPTB, I’m not holding my breath. Excellent portrayal of emotions for both Bette and Tina.

    14. i see with the addition of new ff writers after s2 is increasing and i’m lovin it!!! so many creative juices flowing out there!! i would like to see this continue it truly made me tear up….i can’t believe how bette keeps blowing perfect chances to reconcile….uuuuuggghhhhhh angnst!!!

    15. Bravo! I really like the way you wrote this chapter. The intensity is so strong and yet there are soft moments between Bette and Tina as well. More please!

    18. dont even think about not continuing this story and give all us hopless romantics something to look forward to the writters could do with readind some of these stories instead of messin with our heads thanks for a great 1st post

    19. Wow heartbreaking I wish we could see them confront each other like that on the show But you are doing and excellent job this is a very powerful story PLease continue

    20. Wow….an amazing portrayal of emotions……We could only wish that it really went down like that in the show…..Oh well, to dream *sigh* …..Great piece of writing…..Thank you:)

    24. i can only agree with the others. really well done. i am right there with you in that this past episode was such a bummer, especially since you know that it is only the beginning of the whole Tina/Helena thing. kinda hard to not come off disliking Tina after that episode…but i do digress. thanks for this, again, well done!

    28. Wow great story. This is sad and emotion and hurt. Bette is hurt so bad and now she hope that she and Tina have a 2 chance to be together again. Now please post soon the next one, can’t wait to see what gonna happen next. Thank you!

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