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Don’t Let This Be It
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“Bette..” Tina whispered, as she stepped forward, thinking she could reach out to her.
“So do you like her?” Bette said, her head snapping up.
“What?”
“Do you like her? Did you like her holding you and dancing with you?” Tina couldn’t answer as Bette ploughed on. “Did you kiss her? Did you ***** her? Huh? Did you ***** her and come back here to pick up your things before running off to her hotel room for the night? Will she raise our child? Will she love him or her as much as I will?”
“Her,” Tina whispered.
“Her,” Better repeated slowly, feeling the anger dissipate.
“It’s a girl,” Tina said, clearing her throat and forcing herself to look up at Bette.
“A girl,” Bette softened, smiling. “We’re having a girl. A daughter.” Her eyes glistened as she stared a Tina.
“Yeah.. We are,” Tina smiled, letting herself become mesmerised with Bette’s eyes. Forgetting everything they had been through and where they were now; she just let herself slip into what felt right. Bette let her eyes slip down to Tina’s stomach and then travelled back up to her face, asking permission. Tina smiled and nodded, feeling her eyes sting as Bette hesitantly crossed the distance and placed a hand on the layer of clothing and skin separating Bette and their baby. Bette let out a breath she had been holding. Choking back laughter and a sob she bit her lip and gazed at Tina.
“It is.. our baby, right?” Bette asked softly.
Tina had seen Bette in some vulnerable positions in the past where she completely let her guard down, most noticeable of late was in the lawyers office as she begged Tina to reconsider. But the look on her face now of a scared child, so unprotected and so broken was a new one. After seven and a half years, there were still new things she discovered in Bette, one of the reasons why she loved her so much..
She couldn’t refuse her now. “Yes Bette, it’s our baby.” Bette’s mouth widened to reveal her million dollar smile as tears slowly fell down her cheeks.
“T, I need this,” Bette whispered.
“Bette, I still don’t know,” Tina sighed, finding it hard to tear herself back to reality without Bette.
“T.. I don’t know how much more apologising I can do.. I don’t know what else to do..” She whimpered.
“Bette,” Tina said softly, shaking her head.
Bette put her hand behind Tina’s neck and pulled her forward onto her own lips. For a second, Tina resisted, pursing her lips together before relaxing and letting it take over her. Bette’s hand slid round to her face as Tina’s hand moved up to cup her chin. Slowly, their lips parted to allow their familiar tongues to ravel gently, remembering how this felt and how no one could ever feel like this again. Tina could taste the combination of gin, vodka, salt tears and the faintest trace of the familiar raspberry lip gloss from Bette’s mouth. The destruction of the woman she loved was hanging on her lips, coupled with the taste of who she used to be before. Bette slowly broke off the kiss and rolled their heads together, gently massaging Tina’s neck.
“I love you,” Bette whispered. “Please don’t give this up. This is it. This is what youre giving up for us. Please please don’t do that, T.”
“Bette, I..” Tina started hesitantly.
“Please tell me you’re still in love with me, please T.”
“I.. Am. I am still in love with you Bette,” she sighed in defeat.
“Please..”
“I don’t know..”
Bette felt fresh tears stinging her exhausted eyes and turned away from Tina, trying to furiously wipe them away.
“Baby,” Tina said softly.
“I need to go to bed,” Bette mumbled, her face shielded by her hair as she rushed past Tina and through the patio door.
“*****,” Tina hissed. She sat where Bette had been on the deck chair and rubbed her temples. She grazed her lips with her fingers, feeling them tingle. She licked them lightly.
She could still taste Bette.
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All I could do after reading this, was sit and stare at the screen…my heart is breaking for these two women. Really well done, thanks.
Awesome story I could see that happening. Great first story girl, I hope you write again soon.
That’s what should happen but it wouldn’t. Good story
Well, at least they are talking/screaming…AND Tina admitted she loves Bette!!!!
It is heartbreaking but this is the first time they have really even talked. MOre please
I liked it. Please continue.
Big Sigh! I wish the show would actually go down like this, but knowing TPTB, I’m not holding my breath. Excellent portrayal of emotions for both Bette and Tina.
Wow…. just… Um, okay, maybe I’ll try this again when I’m not speechless…
After the last episode I was hoping that this is the way it will turn out, but I know we have a little ways to go beforehand. Really good story.
Great story! Looking forward to more…
Wow, that kicked ass. Great writings and cool interpretation on what happened.
Wow very powerful. I could really feel their struggle- you are a very good writer. I hope we get more soon. Thanks!
Very visual writing. I wished this happened too.
Wow, well done, i hope you continue.
i see with the addition of new ff writers after s2 is increasing and i’m lovin it!!! so many creative juices flowing out there!! i would like to see this continue it truly made me tear up….i can’t believe how bette keeps blowing perfect chances to reconcile….uuuuuggghhhhhh angnst!!!
Bravo! I really like the way you wrote this chapter. The intensity is so strong and yet there are soft moments between Bette and Tina as well. More please!
This is an excellent story. I wish they could have done this for real on Sunday. You are an excellent writer–I can’t wait to hear more.
i think it’s great.
dont even think about not continuing this story and give all us hopless romantics something to look forward to the writters could do with readind some of these stories instead of messin with our heads thanks for a great 1st post
Wow heartbreaking I wish we could see them confront each other like that on the show But you are doing and excellent job this is a very powerful story PLease continue
Wow….an amazing portrayal of emotions……We could only wish that it really went down like that in the show…..Oh well, to dream *sigh* …..Great piece of writing…..Thank you:)
I’m begging you to continue. The sooner someone can fix the drama the better. Great story.
I had the same reaction as Seahurst…very powerful chapter…I would love to hear more from you.
A fabulous first chapter! You really must continue after leaving us breathless!
i can only agree with the others. really well done. i am right there with you in that this past episode was such a bummer, especially since you know that it is only the beginning of the whole Tina/Helena thing. kinda hard to not come off disliking Tina after that episode…but i do digress. thanks for this, again, well done!
Well this is
really good story and you’re writings great I love Tina and
Bette not Helena Pls. continue your writings.
Great job! This is the scene they should have given us Sunday night.
great story please continue
Wow great story. This is sad and emotion and hurt. Bette is hurt so bad and now she hope that she and Tina have a 2 chance to be together again. Now please post soon the next one, can’t wait to see what gonna happen next. Thank you!
I love this raw, vulnerable side of Bette! Great writing..I hope you will continue!
I know Bette cheated but Tina did her all kinds of wrong, I hate seeing Bette hurt, argh damn you IC