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Don’t Say a Thing – Ch 9
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The blonde got out of the car and entered the house, making a beeline for the living room. She found what she had expected: uncountable empty beer bottles, teared packs of chips, the smell of sweat and closed shutters. The television was on, showing a silly show Tina recognised as a kid’s program. Any normal person would get up and do some cleaning instead of watching things that weren’t even interesting for him.
Henry was in the couch, a can of beer in his hand. He didn’t even look up when his wife entered his pig hole.
“I think you’ve got some explaining to do,” he simply said. “Who was that crazy lunatic? Where have you been? Did she speak the truth? What was that about me not knowing how to please you? I made you scream countless times and who cares about a G-spot as long as you come?”
Tina bit her tongue, sighed and sat down. “That ‘lunatic’ was Bette Porter. I want you to listen carefully and not to interrupt me. Is that a deal?”
“Who the fuck is Bette Porter?”
“I’ll bring you a whole load of beer if you just shut up and let me speak.”
“Okay.”
“Bette Porter… is hard to put in words. I met her eighteen years ago, when I first moved here. She lived next door and I think I’ve been in love with her from the moment I saw her. I denied my feelings for a long time and we were just friends, but we came to a point that it was ridicolous, what we were doing. The love was just so obvious and neither of us didn’t feel like wasting any time anymore. Bette Porter gave me the feeling I was alive and I was real, she gave me everything anyone can ever wish for. She treated me like a princess and she would have done everything in her power just to make me smile. I would have done everything for her as well, and still. The sex was mind-blowing and amazing, and it was even better because of the strong connection we had. Our lives were perfect… until she had to leave. Her father had decided to move to New York and came back after his world trip with this news. Bette had no choice. Now, seventeen years later, she’s back. I’ve always loved her, Henry. I want to live the life that was meant for us.”
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G where have you been?? I waited for this story for so long to be up dated, But I just have one very good question, WHY DID SHE MARRIED HIM can you please tell me, it seams to me that she didn’t even knew him that well before marring that asshole. Anyway that was a great chapter, all the thing that Tins said when she was threatening him were things only a little and childish person cares about, she deserve so much better and all the women deserve so much more than life sometimes offers. Thanks G, you are great and I love reading your stories. Post soon please and have a beautiful day. Love
tina settled for henry czu she didn’t have bette, finally caught up. henry is a turd and needs to go! :)PPS
Yay! A new chappy…I so hoped that this is the chapter where Tina leaves Henry and you did it. You wrote this scene so real. I felt like I was standing in the livingroom and they were fighting right in front of me. Great! I’m excited to see how Elizabeth will react, how they will work everything out (like where to live and that) and of course: the reaction of the others… Maybe you are 17 but I would say that at least your writing skills show how mature you are for your age. And of course I KNOW that you are a wonderful person who is blessed with rare gifts: fantasy, the power of your imagination and a very good heart…have a great day my friend Yours Jay
Tina was hitting Henry way below the belt. Why do men always think of sex if they are better are if the other person is better. Tina not only worked outside the home,but took care of the home anf maded Henry laxer than what he was. Elizabeth will love to be in a new home with lots of love and repect for her mom. thanks
Glad Tina let him have it. I wish I could have done that 10 years ago when I left my ex. Kind of reminds me of Henry. pps
nice update… so glad tina laid it on the line to henry… hopefully he lets her leave and they all can live their lives… but i have a feeling thats going to take work… PPS
soooooooo great. Yeah Bette take your family with you. Elisbeth needs a stable family. Thank you Henry for your sperm which create Elisabeth, your task is finished goodbye. Hope everything will be fine. I have been waiting for this reunion since Bette left 17 yeas ago. PPS
Hey Genner, Good to have Bette and Tina finally towards each other. Loved how Tina socked it to Henry. The guy is a total waste of space. Tina had all the put downs arranged and jist let them fly when she needed them. Henry ain’t got a chance. Now Bette and Tina deserve the life together that was stolen from them. Elisabeth deserves parent who adore her. Henry can just fade away like the bad smell he is. Genner, while you may not have experienced this first just keep writing from the heart. Brilliant. More please from Your Loyal Fan.