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Don’t Say Good Bye~ Chapter 4
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“Yeah man, you do.”
~1 Year Later~
**Elizabeth- 16; Jake- 15; Chrissy- 12**
Liz arrives at the Kennard’s residence.
“Miss Elizabeth, nice to see you again. Is Jake expecting you?”
“Not exactly but I came to see him and Chrissy.”
“They are both in the family room.”
“Thanks Benjamin.”
She goes to the family room.
“Hey guys”
“Hey Liz”
“You two busy?”
“Not really, just some homework. What’s up?”
“Well what if I told you two that I GOT A CAR!”
She shows them the key.
“What that’s so cool!”
“What kind of car?”
“Well follow me and I’ll show you”
They quickly walked outside and in front of them sat a brand new black BMW convertible with red interior.
“Oh my god, this is your car?”
“Yes it is”
“Liz this is awesome, can I sit in it?”
“Of course Chrissy, hop in”
“I can’t believe your dad got you this car.”
“I know I can’t believe it either. I came home from school and there it was sitting on the driveway in all its glory. I couldn’t believe it.”
“Wow this is awesome.”
“So do you two want to go for a ride?”
“Liz you know I want to but I got late practice tonight.”
“Why don’t Chrissy and I drop you off?”
“You serious?”
“Anything for my best friends.”
“Cool let me grab my stuff”
He ran inside.
“Jake you need to get ready for practice!”
“Mother Liz is going to take me. In her new car”
“She got a car?”
He runs back down the stairs with his stuff.
“Did you say new car?”
“Yes I did, check it out.”
They both walk out and Mrs. Kennard was surprised at the car.
“Elizabeth this is quite a car.”
“Isn’t it? My father got it for my birthday.”
“It suits you well.”
“Thank you Mrs. Kennard. I hope you don’t mind, I offered to take Jake to practice and take Chrissy along for the ride.”
“No trouble at all, just be careful okay?”
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I think each chapter is getting better..post when you can. Thanks
So, Liz noticed Chrissy’s grown up a little. Curious to see when they will really begin to notice each other more.
Yippe and doing happy dance to you posted.. GREAT STORY…thank you!!
So Bette is already noticing Tina. How long before Tina starts to notice Bette and become interested in her. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
jailbait…but I’ll continue to read to see what happens. I love your writing…I feel like I am there.
This it getting better and better!!!!!!!
sweet pms
interesting…….more soon…
this was a great chapter. It looks like things are getting interesting.
Much better chapter!
I totally love this story… I want to know/read moremoremore! plssss *puppydogeyes*
i decided to wait a bit before commenting because i wanted to see how you brought these two together esp with the age difference… keep going…
When will baby Chrissy find herself fall in love with her Liz? ;)
Wow! Your story was already great and original but from now on it’ll be exciting, can’t wait until those two fall in love!
Another Great Chapter!!! Please Keep it up. Thank you
Very sweet story. A whole new perspective on B/T beginning. Interesting to see a version where they would have known each other forever. Thanks and please continue. (What’s up with the names?)
they sure grow up fast…hopefully liz and chrissy begin notice each other more
Ok, cool, things are speeding up a little… Keep it up!
Sweet-Spending a lil time together on break. Great chaoter. Thanks for taking the time.
Awww sweet story :o))