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Don’t Say Good Bye~ Chapter 4
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“Do you still want to be with her?”
“Of course I do.”
Jamie is so lucky to have a guy like him, she thought.
“Okay, okay, why don’t you do this. Buy some orchids, put a few in her locker with a note apologizing for arguing with her even though you didn’t start it. And after school leave a few more on her car and leave another note to have her meet you at your favorite spot.”
“Favorite spot?”
“You mean to tell me you two don’t have a favorite spot? All couples have a favorite spot, if not than the first place you went on a date.”
“Yeah we have a spot.”
“Okay, well take it from there.”
“Are you sure this is going to work?”
“Jake have I ever steered you wrong?”
“No, never”
“Okay, I got to get going, I got a model that I need to draw.”
“I’m sure you don’t want to be late. Thanks Liz, talk to you later.”
“Anytime Jake, talk to you later.”
~1 Year Later~
**Elizabeth- 19; Jake- 18; Chrissy- 15**
The Kennard’s were throwing a Christmas party at there house. Elizabeth wasn’t going to come home for the break but she knew she wasn’t coming back for the summer so she decided to come for a while. She wanted to surprise the Kennard’s, Melvin had picked her up at the airport.
“Hi daddy.”
“Hi sweety, welcome home.”
He takes her luggage and gives it to Collins to put in the limo.
“How was your flight?”
“It was good”
Collins opens the door for them and they get in. It was small talk all the way home.
“The Kennard’s are having a party tonight, do you feel like going?”
“Yes definitely, I haven’t seen them in a while.”
“Okay”
That night they both arrived. Collins opened the door for them and they walked into the house. The place was full of Mr. Kennard’s co-workers, neighbors, Melvin even saw some of his co-workers and other people that have lots of money. Elizabeth saw Mrs. Kennard and she walked up behind her and wrapped her arms around her. Mrs. Kennard turned around and was surprised of who was standing before her.
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I think each chapter is getting better..post when you can. Thanks
So, Liz noticed Chrissy’s grown up a little. Curious to see when they will really begin to notice each other more.
Yippe and doing happy dance to you posted.. GREAT STORY…thank you!!
So Bette is already noticing Tina. How long before Tina starts to notice Bette and become interested in her. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
jailbait…but I’ll continue to read to see what happens. I love your writing…I feel like I am there.
This it getting better and better!!!!!!!
sweet pms
interesting…….more soon…
this was a great chapter. It looks like things are getting interesting.
Much better chapter!
I totally love this story… I want to know/read moremoremore! plssss *puppydogeyes*
i decided to wait a bit before commenting because i wanted to see how you brought these two together esp with the age difference… keep going…
When will baby Chrissy find herself fall in love with her Liz? ;)
Wow! Your story was already great and original but from now on it’ll be exciting, can’t wait until those two fall in love!
Another Great Chapter!!! Please Keep it up. Thank you
Very sweet story. A whole new perspective on B/T beginning. Interesting to see a version where they would have known each other forever. Thanks and please continue. (What’s up with the names?)
they sure grow up fast…hopefully liz and chrissy begin notice each other more
Ok, cool, things are speeding up a little… Keep it up!
Sweet-Spending a lil time together on break. Great chaoter. Thanks for taking the time.
Awww sweet story :o))