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Drenched Ch 11
Previously…
“Shane, you are a beautiful, intelligent, successful woman, and I’ll never say this again, but you are so fucking sexy and good in bed that it’s scary. So you need to tell that first, negative half of your brain to sit down and shut up because it’s bringing nothing but pain and stagnation to your life.
If you need to go to therapy to deal with it, then do it, but go after your happiness. Change the percentages. Work at getting your girl and soon your doubting side will only have 25% and eventually zero control of your psyche.”
Shane listened intently to Bette’s words and thought for a moment.
“You think I’m good in bed?”
“Asshole!” Bette shot back as she ruffled her friend’s hair.
Ch 11
When Bette returned from Shane’s, Tina had gone out for a run and the house was quiet.
Bette was lying on the couch reading the last chapter of her book when Tina walked in the front door.
“Hey Babe.”
“Hey T.”
“Is Shane alright?”
“As it turns out, I think she’s going to be more than alright.”
“Let me take a quick shower and you can tell me about it.”
“I’ll be right here waiting.” Bette smiled.
Twenty minutes later Tina walked into the living room smelling fresh and clean, wearing low-rise, khaki shorts and a black tank. Feeling playful, she straddled Bette’s lap and leaned down placing a sweet kiss on her nose.
“Well T, we have six hours left of freedom from mommy-hood and responsibility. How would you like to spend it?”
“Mmm…we’ve gotten so good at doing nothing it’s hard for my brain to comprehend doing ‘something’.”
“There’s no law that says we have do to anything that could be specifically classified as ‘something’.”
“Well based on this conversation, I think our brains are turning to mush. Could it be from too much sex last night?” Tina chuckled.
“Hmm…possibly” Bette pondered as her mind flashed on a myriad of images from the night before.
“Speaking of last night how is Shane?”
“Well we had the most interesting conversation.”
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(54 votes, average: 4.37 out of 5)
Perfect way to end the first day of classes! ;)
I have to concur with NYGayLady about the after-class, but it’s the end of the school week for me. Is this the proper forum to discuss the pros and cons of silicone?
DAMN that was HOT!!!!! Thank you
holy mother of god!! my jaw just kept slippin farther and farther apart as i clicked next page
This was so HOT!!! Where’s the cold shower line, I’m just going to get in line…
I’m speechless. This may have been the hottest story in the history of this site. Thank you for this amazing story. Please don’t stay away too long. You’ve got me totally addicted to you :)
Really Really Hot!
whoa 3 freaking pages!!!!!!!! that was soooooooooooooo f***ing hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Woah -I think i’m actually aching after that. If i smoked i’d wanta cigarette. You are so BAD Coop. & we love it!
Hold on let me get my tongue off the floor….okay, I’m ready to comment. UNFUCKING BELIEVABLE! You have such a mischievious mind…I absolutely love it! It’s AMAZING how you able to put into words what your mind is thinking. UNF*CKING BELIEVABLE! ( I know I already said that) Post soon.
Holy mudda lol!Cheeeeeeeeeees!
You just get better and better…………..but just one thing – – Bring Shaney Baby back so she can teach Bette and Tina a few more new tricks…………..she can bring Carman with her if you like……now that WOULD make good reading………..Thanks for writing and for sharing with us.See yaFAY
babe…After tht tiring day at work your post was like fresh lemonade in a dessert. U so fuckin made my night….lookin at the line of all the hot fanfic readers in cold shower…..and thinkin…All these dykes in one single line of cold shower…The possiblity of the shower being cold is not realistic…LOL just joking..Look wht kind of effect you are havin on everyone….I love it so totally love it when you post your signature nc 17 posts with BT lustylovinPPS
OMG…I think I need to hit the shower now. Damn..how do you write these….
You know what I love about you? You’re not afraid to take chances. In our heads we know what we’d like to see, but don’t verbalize it–and here you come, slamming us with every vision we’ve ever had coped up in our crazy minds. thanks, that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry to see it end. What a ride.
That was hotter than fire!! Gooodness Gracious!
**DRENCHED**…..Ditto!
I´m reading a Tibette story….oh my god *lol* No….even if I´m a Shane fan this was pretty good. I so like your writing! Great job!
I just picked up my jaw from the floor and tied it closed. I do believe I need more than just a cold shower, maybe a dip into a polar ice cap.
OMFG – your posts should come with a health warning!!!!! So fucking hot and you’ve put a semi-naked Bette with only jeans in my head forever, thank you for that LOL. Ok you’re tying this up, but you’ve to continue with the writing….anything with happy and horny B&T is very welcome :o)) And what is’t with you and strap-ons girl???? LMAO. Take care and post soon…
DAMMMMMMMMM girl… and you know how much i love my toys… esp my bullet… hmmmmmmmmm… very nice… and i hope its not the end… cum back to us
Dang girl, that was so HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Youo really need to read this chapter with someone very special or at the very least have her close by. WOW.
Hot, hot, hot!
Hey there! What a great talent. I was impressed with your writing style. Very clean, descriptive (oh yeah) and well-paced. You definitely should get a fan fic award for this one!
I’m sure my girl will understand when I say, Coop de Ville…..where you been all my kcuf’g life? Reading one chapter is mind blowing, but reading from the beginning to its entirety will cause a girl not to walk right the next day!! (/ ) Thank you for an excruciatingly hot story from being to end!!!
ok so i’m wrong i thought i was first LOL oh well but still great chapter
*ThuD* I can’t think but somwhow this has giving me some energy! DAMMMMMNNNNNN I still can’t function! I think they need to have sex in public again!
DAMN……Why did I read this at work!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey i’m first!!!*smile* WOW i need a cold shower now LOL i have read every chapter and you’re good. cant wait for the next post
so i had trouble getting past the visual of Bette in just a pair fo jeans and packing…..oh my GOSH!!!! That is so HOT!!! Onc i finally read the rest of the chapter things only got steamier. Cold shower time.
That was so fucking hot and awesome and love it. Thank you for sharing this story with us and hope you will have a new one for us soon, thanks!!!!!!!!!
a)Being a smoker I tell you in all honesty that my next one will be immensely appreciatedb)Making at least two dozens of women leave wet spots on their office chairs by almost every chapter is quite an achievementc)Your writng rocks (and wets!!) so PLEASE keep up
Ummmmmmmm That was soooo freakin SEXY it chilled me to the BONE!!!! tHANKyOU