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Drenched Ch 11
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“Yeah?”
“Yeah you would not believe what happened. In fact, she scared the shit out of me for a minute.”
“Really, how?”
“She started crying when I first got there.”
“Shane? Awe no…we didn’t do the wrong thing did we?” Tina asked suddenly very concerned.
“That’s what I asked her, but she said no. And then, once I got her to settle down a bit, she explained to me how she thought our lovemaking had triggered something called muscle memory in her. Have you heard of that?”
“Sure it’s where your body retains the affects of emotional or traumatic experiences.”
“T, how’d you get so smart?”
“Just lucky I guess, so what did she mean?”
“Well, she said that the love she felt in our presence and our actions brought up images and memories of Carmen and the love they shared.”
“Wow, does that mean she’s still in love with her?”
“Yes. I think she’s been so afraid to admit it to herself. She buried those feelings pretty deep, and if you want my opinion, all the meaningless sex has been her way of throwing more dirt on that ground.”
“You said muscle memory, babe. Was there something specific that triggered her release of feelings?”
“Yeah.” Bette paused.
“Let me guess…it was when you went down on her.”
“Un huh.”
“Well I knew you had magic powers but this is beyond anything I ever expected.” Tina teased. “Imagine that, the tongue that reunited lost lovers.”
“Brat!” Bette countered, swatting Tina’s butt lightly.
“So, what’s she going to do?”
“Well I gave her my best get it together and go get your girl speech, and I think she’s going to give it a try.”
“Wow, that’s fabulous Bette. I’m proud of you…and us. After all I guess I had a part in this too…”
“T?”
“Yeah?”
“Are you getting flashbacks like I am?”
“If you mean, can I not stop thinking about it…the answer’s yes. Especially the part where Shane had you, shall we say, under her thumb.”
“You think so do you?” Bette smiled
“Well, you can’t deny that she was in control. And unless I’m highly mistaken, I believe you were totally on board for the ride.”
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Perfect way to end the first day of classes! ;)
I have to concur with NYGayLady about the after-class, but it’s the end of the school week for me. Is this the proper forum to discuss the pros and cons of silicone?
DAMN that was HOT!!!!! Thank you
holy mother of god!! my jaw just kept slippin farther and farther apart as i clicked next page
This was so HOT!!! Where’s the cold shower line, I’m just going to get in line…
I’m speechless. This may have been the hottest story in the history of this site. Thank you for this amazing story. Please don’t stay away too long. You’ve got me totally addicted to you :)
Really Really Hot!
whoa 3 freaking pages!!!!!!!! that was soooooooooooooo f***ing hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Woah -I think i’m actually aching after that. If i smoked i’d wanta cigarette. You are so BAD Coop. & we love it!
Hold on let me get my tongue off the floor….okay, I’m ready to comment. UNFUCKING BELIEVABLE! You have such a mischievious mind…I absolutely love it! It’s AMAZING how you able to put into words what your mind is thinking. UNF*CKING BELIEVABLE! ( I know I already said that) Post soon.
Holy mudda lol!Cheeeeeeeeeees!
You just get better and better…………..but just one thing – – Bring Shaney Baby back so she can teach Bette and Tina a few more new tricks…………..she can bring Carman with her if you like……now that WOULD make good reading………..Thanks for writing and for sharing with us.See yaFAY
babe…After tht tiring day at work your post was like fresh lemonade in a dessert. U so fuckin made my night….lookin at the line of all the hot fanfic readers in cold shower…..and thinkin…All these dykes in one single line of cold shower…The possiblity of the shower being cold is not realistic…LOL just joking..Look wht kind of effect you are havin on everyone….I love it so totally love it when you post your signature nc 17 posts with BT lustylovinPPS
OMG…I think I need to hit the shower now. Damn..how do you write these….
You know what I love about you? You’re not afraid to take chances. In our heads we know what we’d like to see, but don’t verbalize it–and here you come, slamming us with every vision we’ve ever had coped up in our crazy minds. thanks, that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry to see it end. What a ride.
That was hotter than fire!! Gooodness Gracious!
**DRENCHED**…..Ditto!
I´m reading a Tibette story….oh my god *lol* No….even if I´m a Shane fan this was pretty good. I so like your writing! Great job!
I just picked up my jaw from the floor and tied it closed. I do believe I need more than just a cold shower, maybe a dip into a polar ice cap.
OMFG – your posts should come with a health warning!!!!! So fucking hot and you’ve put a semi-naked Bette with only jeans in my head forever, thank you for that LOL. Ok you’re tying this up, but you’ve to continue with the writing….anything with happy and horny B&T is very welcome :o)) And what is’t with you and strap-ons girl???? LMAO. Take care and post soon…
DAMMMMMMMMM girl… and you know how much i love my toys… esp my bullet… hmmmmmmmmm… very nice… and i hope its not the end… cum back to us
Dang girl, that was so HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Youo really need to read this chapter with someone very special or at the very least have her close by. WOW.
Hot, hot, hot!
Hey there! What a great talent. I was impressed with your writing style. Very clean, descriptive (oh yeah) and well-paced. You definitely should get a fan fic award for this one!
I’m sure my girl will understand when I say, Coop de Ville…..where you been all my kcuf’g life? Reading one chapter is mind blowing, but reading from the beginning to its entirety will cause a girl not to walk right the next day!! (/ ) Thank you for an excruciatingly hot story from being to end!!!
ok so i’m wrong i thought i was first LOL oh well but still great chapter
*ThuD* I can’t think but somwhow this has giving me some energy! DAMMMMMNNNNNN I still can’t function! I think they need to have sex in public again!
DAMN……Why did I read this at work!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey i’m first!!!*smile* WOW i need a cold shower now LOL i have read every chapter and you’re good. cant wait for the next post
so i had trouble getting past the visual of Bette in just a pair fo jeans and packing…..oh my GOSH!!!! That is so HOT!!! Onc i finally read the rest of the chapter things only got steamier. Cold shower time.
That was so fucking hot and awesome and love it. Thank you for sharing this story with us and hope you will have a new one for us soon, thanks!!!!!!!!!
a)Being a smoker I tell you in all honesty that my next one will be immensely appreciatedb)Making at least two dozens of women leave wet spots on their office chairs by almost every chapter is quite an achievementc)Your writng rocks (and wets!!) so PLEASE keep up
Ummmmmmmm That was soooo freakin SEXY it chilled me to the BONE!!!! tHANKyOU