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Drenched Ch 11
“Baby, you are so fucking sexy you take my breath away.” Tina appraised, her eyes never leaving Bette’s body.
Bette moved into the space between Tina’s legs and wrapped her hands around her ass. “You know how I love it when you stop breathing…but only just before you scream my name. Right now however I need to feel your skin, so let’s to get rid of some of these clothes shall we?”
Bette pulled Tina’s tank top over her head.
“Mmm talk about fucking sexy” she groaned as she laid eyes on the skin colored bra encasing Tina’s breasts. Just before detaching and discarding this lovely piece of lingerie, Bette dipped her head and grabbed a lace covered nipple between her teeth, then lapped her tongue over it once then twice as it rose to meet her demands.
Tina raised her hands with every intention of pressing her palms against Bette’s pert nipples when Bette abruptly grabbed her wrists.
“T”
“Yes”
“We’re going to play a little game.”
“Mmm ok.”
“Here’s how it goes. I can touch you how I want, where I want, when I want, with whatever I want.”
“Let me guess, there’s a catch here.” Tina giggled.
“You may take and give pleasure any way you like…but you may not use your hands. Got it?”
Mesmerized by the pulse in Bette’s neck, Tina acquiesced, “Alright…I think I can do that.”
Tina quickly wrapped her ankles around Bette’s backside and pulled her in. With her hands still on the counter top she lowered her head, attached her lips to the skin of Bette’s shoulder and licked southward to her left breast.
Bette leaned in tighter as Tina’s suckling and biting caused an exponential rise in her temperature and the pulse at her core.
Bette’s hands immediately went to the clasp on Tina’s shorts, followed by the zipper.
“Lift your ass T.” Bette insisted and was met with no resistance as T balanced her weight on her palms, allowing Bette to remove the garment with minimal effort. Her eyes fell instantly to the glistening glossy moisture escaping from Tina’s pink and swollen lips. Pulling back and disengaging Tina’s mouth from her nipple with a moist snap, Bette just stared in awe at her woman’s exquisite center.
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(54 votes, average: 4.37 out of 5)
Perfect way to end the first day of classes! ;)
I have to concur with NYGayLady about the after-class, but it’s the end of the school week for me. Is this the proper forum to discuss the pros and cons of silicone?
DAMN that was HOT!!!!! Thank you
holy mother of god!! my jaw just kept slippin farther and farther apart as i clicked next page
This was so HOT!!! Where’s the cold shower line, I’m just going to get in line…
I’m speechless. This may have been the hottest story in the history of this site. Thank you for this amazing story. Please don’t stay away too long. You’ve got me totally addicted to you :)
Really Really Hot!
whoa 3 freaking pages!!!!!!!! that was soooooooooooooo f***ing hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Woah -I think i’m actually aching after that. If i smoked i’d wanta cigarette. You are so BAD Coop. & we love it!
Hold on let me get my tongue off the floor….okay, I’m ready to comment. UNFUCKING BELIEVABLE! You have such a mischievious mind…I absolutely love it! It’s AMAZING how you able to put into words what your mind is thinking. UNF*CKING BELIEVABLE! ( I know I already said that) Post soon.
Holy mudda lol!Cheeeeeeeeeees!
You just get better and better…………..but just one thing – – Bring Shaney Baby back so she can teach Bette and Tina a few more new tricks…………..she can bring Carman with her if you like……now that WOULD make good reading………..Thanks for writing and for sharing with us.See yaFAY
babe…After tht tiring day at work your post was like fresh lemonade in a dessert. U so fuckin made my night….lookin at the line of all the hot fanfic readers in cold shower…..and thinkin…All these dykes in one single line of cold shower…The possiblity of the shower being cold is not realistic…LOL just joking..Look wht kind of effect you are havin on everyone….I love it so totally love it when you post your signature nc 17 posts with BT lustylovinPPS
OMG…I think I need to hit the shower now. Damn..how do you write these….
You know what I love about you? You’re not afraid to take chances. In our heads we know what we’d like to see, but don’t verbalize it–and here you come, slamming us with every vision we’ve ever had coped up in our crazy minds. thanks, that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry to see it end. What a ride.
That was hotter than fire!! Gooodness Gracious!
**DRENCHED**…..Ditto!
I´m reading a Tibette story….oh my god *lol* No….even if I´m a Shane fan this was pretty good. I so like your writing! Great job!
I just picked up my jaw from the floor and tied it closed. I do believe I need more than just a cold shower, maybe a dip into a polar ice cap.
OMFG – your posts should come with a health warning!!!!! So fucking hot and you’ve put a semi-naked Bette with only jeans in my head forever, thank you for that LOL. Ok you’re tying this up, but you’ve to continue with the writing….anything with happy and horny B&T is very welcome :o)) And what is’t with you and strap-ons girl???? LMAO. Take care and post soon…
DAMMMMMMMMM girl… and you know how much i love my toys… esp my bullet… hmmmmmmmmm… very nice… and i hope its not the end… cum back to us
Dang girl, that was so HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Youo really need to read this chapter with someone very special or at the very least have her close by. WOW.
Hot, hot, hot!
Hey there! What a great talent. I was impressed with your writing style. Very clean, descriptive (oh yeah) and well-paced. You definitely should get a fan fic award for this one!
I’m sure my girl will understand when I say, Coop de Ville…..where you been all my kcuf’g life? Reading one chapter is mind blowing, but reading from the beginning to its entirety will cause a girl not to walk right the next day!! (/ ) Thank you for an excruciatingly hot story from being to end!!!
ok so i’m wrong i thought i was first LOL oh well but still great chapter
*ThuD* I can’t think but somwhow this has giving me some energy! DAMMMMMNNNNNN I still can’t function! I think they need to have sex in public again!
DAMN……Why did I read this at work!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey i’m first!!!*smile* WOW i need a cold shower now LOL i have read every chapter and you’re good. cant wait for the next post
so i had trouble getting past the visual of Bette in just a pair fo jeans and packing…..oh my GOSH!!!! That is so HOT!!! Onc i finally read the rest of the chapter things only got steamier. Cold shower time.
That was so fucking hot and awesome and love it. Thank you for sharing this story with us and hope you will have a new one for us soon, thanks!!!!!!!!!
a)Being a smoker I tell you in all honesty that my next one will be immensely appreciatedb)Making at least two dozens of women leave wet spots on their office chairs by almost every chapter is quite an achievementc)Your writng rocks (and wets!!) so PLEASE keep up
Ummmmmmmm That was soooo freakin SEXY it chilled me to the BONE!!!! tHANKyOU