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Drenched Ch4
Previously…
Tina repeated the slow circuitous path around Bette’s clit without changing her pressure or her speed until Bette knew Tina was not going to change it, and that she was not going to be able to hold back the dam of an agonizingly sweet explosion that was cuming RIGHT NOOOOOOOOOOW….
“Fuuuuuck…Teeeeeeeee!!!!!!” Bette cried out and bucked her pelvis into Tina’s palm as she slid her mouth from Bette’s breast to her throat, needing in that instant to feel the vibrations of Bette’s orgasm at both ends of her body. She didn’t, however, stop what she was doing with her right hand, and as a bolt of lightning cracked right outside their window Bette was hit by a second jolt with an exquisite sting even stronger than the first.
“Tiiinaaa…you are fucking incredible!” Bette exhaled as her body rushed with endorphins and she showered Tina’s face with kisses…
“Holy shit T…are you and God colluding now to send me right over the edge?”
“If I am my dear, you had better start minding your language.”
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Bette licked Tina’s upper lip and sucked her tongue into her mouth again as she lifted Tina so that she was lying fully atop her body.
“I could just eat you up right now.” Bette whispered as she sucked Tina’s earlobe into her mouth and flicked her tongue against it.
“Mmmmmh…while I would love you to do that Babe, my stomach is telling me we should eat some actual food about now. Plus, I’d love some of that coffee you’ve been drinking.”
“Aww… but isn’t your body needing more than just food and coffee right now?” Bette seductively urged as her urge to make Tina scream came on strong.
“Are you asking if I want you babe? The answer’s yes, and in fact, I’d give you a clue how much but then I know all thoughts of food would go right out the window…and I really want to enjoy some eats and this sensual buzz if that’s ok. And there’s no reason to hurry because we have all day, all night and tomorrow.”
“Ok, you win, but that’s only because I need to build up my strength for what I want to do to you. In the meantime I’ll do my best to stoke your buzz baby.” Bette quipped and then laughed as she sat up and let go of Tina.
“Let me prepare us a little brunch then and you can go take a shower, if you like.”
“I’d love to, thanks T.”
Tina swatted Bette’s butt playfully and proceeded to the kitchen to begin preparing a small feast of eggs Florentine, hash browns, toast, fruit salad and another pot of coffee. As everything was cooking she made some fresh squeezed orange juice and put an alternative mix on her Ipod that was attached to the house stereo.
Bette couldn’t help appreciating the delicious smells wafting through the house as she exited the bedroom freshly scrubbed and dressed in her lightweight J Crew hoody and bottoms. The rain was really coming down now and the sky was getting darker as the windows were drenched with streams of water.
“Boy T, I’m sure glad we don’t have to be out in this today.” Bette exclaimed as she came around the corner into the kitchen.
“Yeah, but it sure is lovely to be in here with you safe and warm and cozy.” Tina answered taking Bette into her arms and planting a slow delectable kiss on her mouth.
“Mmm T you taste like cherries and your lips are red…”
“Yes Babe I got some beautiful cherries in season at the market the other day. They’re firm and sweet, just like you. Of course they also have pits but we’ll ignore that.”
“Cute, T. Mmm, I’m famished, so feed me before I get weak.”
“Ok my poor delicate creature” They both chuckled as they sat to enjoy the sumptuous brunch Tina had set out.
They ate in relative quiet while they watched the storm and listened to music. Tina reached to pop a cherry from the fruit salad into Bette’s mouth as a very sexy song came on the stereo. It was an old Isley Brother’s tune called “For the Love of You” that Tina had downloaded recently [pool table scene from Alfie].
Bette grabbed Tina’s hand as it neared her mouth and slowly let her press the fruit to her lips. Flashes of a building sexual tension were reflected in their eyes as the music stirred and strengthened the buzz they had been riding all morning.
Bette took the cherry into her mouth and slowly chewed it as she got up and bent down to share its sweetness via a kiss with Tina. As she did Tina put her hands on Bette’s hips and directed her to straddle her lap.
“Babe you are so sexy but I know you need to get rid of that pit, so here.” Tina held out her napkin as Bette dropped the pit from her teeth into it.
Just then Bette detected a bit of blush rise to Tina’s cheeks.
“T, what are you thinking?”
Smiling shyly, “Can I ask you something?”
Bette just smiled and gave her the most open and loving look; no words were necessary.
“I’ve been thinking about yesterday…by the pool.”
“Yes, “Bette whispered and closed her eyes as erotic visuals flashed in her mind.
“…Your dream….ah…how do I say this…you know how people say our dreams represent our true feelings…well I was wondering…
“You want to know if I desire a three-way T.” Bette cut in with infinite kindness in her eyes.
“Yeah,” Tina smiled bashfully.
Bette raised her hand and cupped Tina’s cheek and wrapped her long fingers tenderly around the base of her neck.
Taking a moment to compose her response, Bette replied, “Let me put it this way, I believe my dream was exciting to me because it gave me a way to observe, a bit at a distance, someone bringing intense pleasure to you. And since, in my dream, Shane only did things she sought and I gave her permission to do, it was like she was an extension of me.”
“Why Shane?”
“I don’t know T, probably because she is one of the few people in the world who I trust implicitly; who I know would never hurt me or you intentionally.”
“Ok, well…do you think that if your dream had not been cut short,” “Tina smiles mischievously, “that you would have…”
“What T?”
“That you would have liked to touch Shane or have her touch you?”
“Would that have turned you on T?
Tina blushed.
“T?”
“Yes, but….”
“Wow, maybe I should be asking you the three-way question.” Bette smiled.
“But Bette, when I really think about it…the exciting thing to me is…your response. Although Shane is definitely sexy in her way, it’s your response to her touching you that would get me going…and…”
“Yes, T?”
“Well I guess just the sight of you two together would be pretty hot.”
“Yeah? Well in my dream…when she kissed you…just seeing that …well as I told you it did me in…”
“Babe?” Tina whispered, “I’m so turned on right now… I need you to ….” Bette’s lips silenced her plea as her hands slipped under Tina’s shirt caressing the incredibly soft skin of her abdomen and moving to envelope her breasts.
Bette slid off Tina’s lap to her knees and lifted Tina’s shirt to suck her right breast into her mouth as she pulled Tina’s sweats down her thighs to the floor.
“What do you need, T?” Bette breathed just before she took as much of Tina’s breast into her mouth as she could.
“Uuugh Jesus that feels incredible!!!”
“Tell me T!” Bette insisted as she then rolled Tina’s nipple between her teeth and pulled until Tina cried out with pain and pleasure.
“Fuck…I want your mouth on me until I can’t speak anymore!” Tina relented and demanded simultaneously.
Bette gave Tina’s other breast equal attention before she very slowly scraped her teeth over to Tina’s breast bone and licked straight down to her belly button.
“Put your feet up on the table T” Bette ordered
Tina lifted her legs over Bette’s shoulders and planted her feet firmly on the edge of the table. Luminescent beads of Tina’s silken fluid clung to her lips and curls while shiny patches of slippery moisture adorned the interior of her creamy thighs.
Bette paused momentarily to inhale the sight and scent of the woman she loved beyond limits. She lifted her gaze to Tina’s and was awed by the love and lust so evident there, just before her lids dropped and she groaned at the touch of Bette’s tongue to the tip of her clit.
“Ohhhhh Fuck!!!”
Bette immediately sucked the swollen ball of nerves into her mouth and began lightly hammering it with her tongue with the intention of bringing Tina to the brink as quickly as she could. She alternated between this relentless visceral drumming and stopping to swirl her tongue excruciatingly slowly around her clit.
“Jesus Bette….I’m so close!!” Tina almost wailed as her strong thighs began to lift her pelvis off the chair.
Upon hearing her entreaty, Bette pulled away from her clit and drove her tongue as far as she could into Tina’s core. Then she deliberately slowed her pace; licking and tasting all around T’s opening.
“Mmmm Bette, what are you doing to me?”
Bette’s only response was to slide her tongue down and around Tina’s anus before pushing the tip up and over and over against her urethra. Tina had by this time gripped the sides of the chair tightly and had suspended herself by her hands and feet between the table and the chair as she rode out the incredible sensations Bette’s tongue was inflicting on her sex.
When she thought Tina was sufficiently strung out, Bette returned to drumming her tongue against her clit but this time she did it in slow thudding beats and licks that Tina helped control the pace and pressure of with her rising and falling hips…and then …Bette stopped.
“Fuck Betttte”, Tina gasped and began to urgently thrust her clit against Bette’s tongue as she held it strong and immovable RIGHT THERE.
“Oooooohh Noooooooo….Ohhhhhhh Myyyyyy Goooooodddddd!! Betttte!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tina arched high and ceased all movement and sound as internal contractions pushed stream after stream of ecstatic juices onto Bette’s tongue. Bette’s lapping alone seemed to keep Tina suspended on a wave of exquisite small explosions, until she gently eased her middle finger through Tina’s folds and pressed very deliberately into her G spot.
“Yeeeeeeesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss!!!! Tina screamed as a sensory tidal wave hit her hard and without mercy…fuck who needs mercy…
Bette grabbed hold of Tina’s lower body and wrapped her legs around her torso, holding the back of her head as Tina vibrated with aftershocks.
“T, baby I’ve got you…are you ok sweetheart?”
It was a moment before Tina regained her voice and then it came in a hoarse whisper, “My God Bette, I guess you took me seriously when I asked you to render me speechless.”
They both giggled and embraced tightly as Bette carried Tina to the couch.
“God I love you T!
TBC
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(45 votes, average: 3.60 out of 5)
am I first?? Bette and Shane together? OMG that would be soooooooo HOT…please do write it, I have always wanted to read a hot fic with Bette and Shane!! Please yes!!!!
you have no clue wht your fan fic is doin tomy fantasies….I did dream a dreanched version of my own after reading this one with me being the viewer while b t and shane are havin a three wayloved love loved the story
still say B & T with anyone but themselves is UUUGGGHH…..YUCKY…GROSS!!!! WAS A HOTT CHAPTER THOUGH!!!
DAMN! that was HOT LACOOP IT WOULD BE VEY HOT SHANE/BETTE/TINA WOW YOUR GIRLFREIND IS VERY LUCKY LADY! PLEASE POST SOON
Dayum…..you are bold!!!! So hot…so very hot. One of the commenters mentioned a lucky gf. How right she is about that. LOL. But besides being totally erotic, your story is well written and has wonderful imagery.
Bette & Tina + Shane? Just too dame hot! bring it on! xx Keep up the good work! xx
Hell they don’t need anybody else, just those two can set the world on fire. Shane would be hot with both of them, but Shane is like their child only older. B&T really do not need anybody to help with the hottness level. Post soon, please.
Bette, Tina and Shane… I’m hot, er… game. Bring it on!
man u burned down my computer u owe me a new one
fuck… i just read all of your chapters… dam girl they were too fucking hot… and a threesome… hmmmm… who to pick… please continue
holy crap..I don’t know how much more my poor computer can take.
God I love you lacoop – for writing hot, sexy, dripping and drenched B&T sex!!!! This is just what I need with all the shit that is S3. As for a threesome with Shane, it’s definitely NOT a fantasy of mine, but I’m sure you can make it very hot. Please just be respectful to B&T and let them fall even deeper in love with each other, because of the trust this ‘thing’ requires. Right now I would love to see B&T making love in the pool…in the rain. Post soon please
You write the HOTTEST sex scenes I have ever read!! Whew…unbelievable! It seems that Bette and Tina might both “fancy” some 3 way lovin’. Shane doesn’t do much for me, but Bette and Tina talking about it, is a definate turn on !
Bette and Tina are so hot together…if Shane can come in for a minute with no drama and no catching feelings I could live with that…bring it on! Please post soon.
Does it make me a bad person that I don’t ever want Angelica to come home so this weekend won’t ever end? Ooh, can we please have a sex scene outside in the rain? Yummy :). Beautifully written as always. Thank you.
I hardly ever leave comments, but I thought after reading this chapter..I must tell you how much I love your writing.You write in so much detail and so beautifully, I love it. Please write a Shane/Bette/Tina threesome, I can’t think of anything hotter…xx
Damn Lacoop! That was FIRRREEEEE! I second the motion on fucking in the rain! On the fence about a three-way with shane but the other chapter was pretty damn HOT! Can you bring back the strap-on? that was too fucking hot!
BRING IT ON!!! thanks for being brave and taking this on. I can’t say I’ve read something like this on our site before. Glad to see everyone having a little fun.
ok that was hot. i dont think that they need anyone else to be hot
Damn so fucking hot and hot and hot, loving it. Please post soon, thanks!!!!!!!!!
love this but don’t spoil Shane and Bette’s friendship…or Tina and Shane’s… once a third person enters the bedroom the party is soon over, someone gets hurt when jealousy rears its ugly head as it always does….
i’m speachless as well…