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Drenched Ch 5
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Previously…
Bette grabbed hold of Tina’s lower body and wrapped her legs around her torso, holding the back of her head as Tina vibrated with aftershocks.
“T, baby I’ve got you…are you ok sweetheart?”
It was a moment before Tina regained her voice and then it came in a hoarse whisper, “My God Bette, I guess you took me seriously when I asked you to render me speechless.”
They both giggled and embraced tightly as Bette carried Tina to the couch.
“God I love you T!
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Saturday afternoon…
Having no desire to leave the house during the current stormy weather, Tina and Bette decided to pursue more of the delicious inactivity they felt was the best antidote to the demands of parenthood. That is, after all, what this weekend was all about.
So, they luxuriated in the bath in the afternoon, watched another movie and topped it all off with a nap. Well actually, after the movie (“Inside Man”) finished they fell asleep wrapped in each others’ arms on the couch.
Two hours later when they awoke it was dark and the rain had stopped.
“Mmm baby I’m starving.” Tina smiled and stretched.
“Me too…what’s your pleasure T?” Bette inquired as she nuzzled into Tina’s neck, kissing and nibbling playfully.
“You should know better than to ask me that. Food always comes in a distant second to ‘other things’…but we need our strength…so my temporary pleasure would be…a juicy steak and a salad. And it just so happens that I have a couple of thick Delmonicos in the frig.”
“Mmm that does sound good. Shall I go out and stoke up the bar-b?”
“Un Huh…but don’t work too hard turning that knob on the grill babe.”
“Ha ha, T” Bette deadpanned. “Can you make one of your famous blue cheese and vinaigrette salads?”
“It would be my pleasure.”
After lighting the grill, Bette started some kindling in the copper outdoor fire place. The temperature had dropped considerably due to the day’s storms and she wanted to be able to snuggle with Tina by the fire after supper.
They shared a bottle of wine during their very enjoyable candlelit meal and then moved outside to the chaise by the fire. Tina brought a bottle of brandy and a blanket to keep them warm.
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THUD. I don’t have the energy to write anythiing eles. I’m out of breath.
I have to admit, I didn’t think I would like the BTS three-way, but OMFG that was hot. Bring on the other two wishes!
coop…talk about having friends w/benefits! Ilove your NC-17s b/c they are bold and different and nuclear hot. Not everyone’s cup of tea but definitely creative and isn’t that what good sex is all about. You have writing skills and that’s what separates your stories from some other NC-17s.
wow…wow…so erotic…pretty good…
Very arousing!
Holy fucking cow, this is so fucking hot and I need to take a cold shower now, damn damn damn. So good and please post soon, thanks!
Running to the shower as fast as I can without killing myself by running into furniture on the way.
Still don’t agree, but thats just me, BUT WAS HOTT AS HELL, AND I HAVE A FEELING U AINT DONE YET!!!!!
Oh my damn! My body temp just shot up 25 degrees. That was some writing! On to the next wish!
I was so happy to see you post the next chap to this story. It has become my FAVORITE ! Very , very hot…whew ! Shane is not my type, but after what Tina and Bette just did with her, she’s looking pretty good. Can’t wait to read what Tina and Shane wish for ??? You have a great imagination and have such a gift for communicating your thoughts to words. Post again real soon and thanks for making my evening.
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKK is all i can say as well…
lacoop u outdone urself with this one more plz more
OK I know I commented this a couple of chapters ago, but THIS is now one of the hottest chapters I’ve ever read and PLEASE do not let it stop here!
Okay girl, what are you trying to do…kill me???? That was so HOT, I need to go take a cold shower!!!
OMG!!! shanes comment at the end summed that up! lol great read!
OH MY F*CKING GOD! HOT does not convey how arousing that was! I am definitely into reading your chapters multiple times. Good Lord, I love this! I wish I could be sitting in the shadows of the room, watching and listening and using every sense I have to take in that lovemaking session! Now, that would be some episode on the show! Got Damn, that was exciting! Please post again soon! I am so anxoius to see what the others wish for when it’s their turn. This is a hotter than hot threesome! God, I love brunettes! Mmmm… mmmmmm! Thanks for this fantasy! I’m lovin it!
Whoa… that came smoking hot out of left field!
Hey there! OK so I don’t usually read your stroy between trying to write mine and real life but for some odd reason your summary prompted me to come in here…add to that the rating no doubt. All I can say is..OMFG! That was VERY arousing and how happy I am to be jumping in a cold pool in about 10 minutes! I wouldn’t have paired Shane with Bette and Tina to do a threesome, but shit now I want that on the show! GOod writing..keep it up!
i never understood why a couple who is happy in love have the need to get someone else to participate in something so private as making love? if they were in trouble or needed to improve their sex life, then i could see why would they invite shane to do a 3-some but B&T seemed to be fine doing it by themselves in previous chapter…i could never share someone i love with anyone else…call me old-fashioned or whatever…sorry, just not my cup of tea
holy shit coop are you fuckin tryin to kill me with freakin hot as fcuk fanficomfg …..my ac is on and i am sweatin like am in sahara :) dude you rock …i need to take care of myselfbye
O-MY-MUDDDDDDAAAAAAA-FUCCCKKKKIINNNG-GGOD! Lacoop that was HOTTT I actually had to pause for a couple mins to get my heartrate down which is still goin! Despite my feelings on the shane threesome that was the shiznick! More please!
Despite my trepidations about a BTS threeway, gotta admit, that’s was awfully fantastic………………..
Hot…hot…hot. As always, fucking HOT! I’m off to shower. Thanks for shifting my brain backwards…lol. Fucking awesome. P.P.S.
I as I have said before think that Bette and Shane together would be soooo hot, as a one time thing, and was glad to see this chapter, even though Tina was included. I don’t like the use of the strap on and it ruined it for me. Oh well.
Ohhhhhhh Yeah!Shane and tibette mmmmm!Nice One!
that was fucking hottttttttttttttttttt just B&T nobody else ok
That was interesting. But I think I prefer B&T as the jealous/no sharing type.
FUUUUUCK!!!!!! My computer just melted, that was so hot……I think I’ll go in and wake up my GF now :o)) Please post very very soon, it’s a great idea about the 3 wishes.
BTW – the movie ‘Inside man’ is really great and Jodie Foster….WOW LOL.
i think you just set my computer on fire!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!