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Driving — Chapter 28
“She may have mentioned something to me, yes.”
“Oh? Like what, exactly?”
Jealous Bette spoke up. “Like Mary made a pass at you, that’s what.”
“And did she tell you what happened?”
“She didn’t know.”
Tina nodded. “I’ll tell you. Nothing.” Tina was aware of all the details of the encounter that she was omitting, but she didn’t feel compelled to tell them to Bette. In fact, she didn’t feel that she needed to explain anything about this to Bette.
“Were you attracted to her?” Bette asked sheepishly.
Tina’s face dropped open in shock. “Bette!”
Bette looked away. She knew it was a foolish question she had no business asking, but she wanted to know desperately.
“Of all the things we should be talking about – this isn’t one of them.” Tina said, her voice rising and color coming to her face. “And can you appreciate the irony here?”
Bette looked away. Despite her love for Tina and the jealousy she felt towards this woman or anyone who showed an attraction to her, she had no claim to Tina’s devotion anymore. They were not “together”. She had no right to voice her displeasure or to tell Tina who she could or could not see. She had lost that right through her own actions. That realization came quickly and brutally to Bette.
“I’m sorry,” she said quietly.
Tina sighed. “I only told you about Mary because you were so taken with her work and you want to bring her to LA and, I thought you should know before that. We’re not”
Bette nodded and cut her off. “I know, I know. I spoke before I thought. I’m sorry.”
Tina sat back in her chair. She looked at Bette and saw sincerity in her eyes. “Okay. It’s alright.”
***
After dinner they walked slowly toward their car.
“T, I’m sorry about my attitude at dinner.”
“It’s okay.” Tina reached for Bette’s hand.
“Really?”
“Yeah, jealously becomes you.”
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(53 votes, average: 3.60 out of 5)
massmom great to see your post. Wow, dont leacve us to long, you are one of the best fan fic writers out there. You are truly missed, when you dont post.
OMG do you know how to leave us wanting more. That was so priceless, the interplay the almost disaster the recovery due to the generosity of them both. You have it all not to mention the anticipation of HMS in the next post. Thanks so much
This was absolutely extraordinary, and I loved every single moment. This story is a remarkable journey and I’m so glad that you’re bringing us along for it. Thank you for sharing your vision and talent with us!
I love it when you post. That was delicious.
…and when I saw that you’d posted, my breath caught. Having just finished reading it – my deepest thanks!! This is such a grand story. I’m so glad you have continued it.
Very good thanks for posting and hope you can post the next soon.
wow great hope see some love in the next chapter great chapter post soon thanks
awesome- you have been missed and i just hope that it is not too long before you continue what has always been one of my most favorite stories out there. thanks!
Thanks for posting Missed your writing.. Love this, when they can talk and not get angry. thanks
Good God MM!!!! After all this time away, and you leave us here?!!! I am with Skipton, this has been one of my favorites from the beginning…hope to see you back her SOON!!!!
Wow, it’s nice to have you back. Definately like where this is going. Hope you won’t wait so long to post again.
OMG! I can’t believe that I’m going to have to wait for the next chapter…damn! Please don’t take so long next time! I have missed your writing!
I love the sense I get from your story of observing a mature passion between two grown women (not girls).
It’s always well drawn, always well realized. You share with SNS the ability to convey a definite sense of place. I am there in Taos with them, moment by moment, feeling every varying emotion.
My comments feel inadequate to the task of praising the excellence of your work.
Each new chapter you post is like a rare gem: precious.
I thank you for posting again.
Where is your fanfic award?
Jwet: What is HMS?
HotMoistSex?
HeavyMetalSex?
HomeMadeSex?
Something else starting with ‘S’, besides ‘Sex’?
Help a sistah out…
WOW! Did my day just get a whole lot better!
I am in awe, as always. I love your work. Although I’ll say “I can’t wait” for the next chapter, clearly I can. It may be painful, but I’ll wait….
M.
Suffice to say, You Rock! ;-)
Hey mm….great that you’re back. Have missed this story and thanks for such a wonderful read. Yeah…where’s your award?
The mood you set is awesome. Thank you for coming back to this. It is one of my favorites.
Excellent story. I’m fairly new to it but I was quickly hooked. I look forward to the next update.
Just finished the last of the chapters. This story is great. I love how the relationship between them is playing out.
Hot stuff coming!!!!!!!!!!
Why head back when they’ve got an expanse of deep, dark desert. (just gotta watch for that ‘sand up the wazoo’).