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    Driving — Chapter 28

    Story written on September 26, 2005 by Massmom.
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    Author Notes:

    Bette and Tina take a trip in the desert and converse, fight and make-out.

    Bette laughed a little and squeezed Tina’s hand.

    Darkness had fallen while they were in the restaurant and a light in the distance caught Tina’s eye.

    “What is that over there on the horizon?”

    Bette looked. “It’s the moon rising.”

    Tina’s eyes widened, “It is.”

    They stood against the car and watched in wonder as the glowing orb rose silently next to the mountain.

    “Remember in Nepal?” Bette said, using verbal shorthand that their years together allowed.

    Tina turned to her, delighted, “I was just thinking that!”

    They looked at each other and smiled in recognition. Their thoughts were united and a warm wave flowed between them.

    “The River Lodge” Tina said, almost sighing.

    Bette closed her eyes. She remembered every detail of their favorite accommodations on that trip. The night of the moonrise they had sat together on the porch on the moonlight, watching, talking, and holding hands. When they retreated to their room they lay together and Bette nuzzled into Tina’s neck. Her skin was smooth and soft and smelled as fresh as the night air.

    The feeling of Tina’s arm wrapping around her waist brought Bette back to the present.

    Tina looked up at Bette’s face and smiled softly, “Where were you?”

    “The River Lodge.”

    Tina looked right into Bette’s eyes and pulled her close. She knew their best moments together were only glimpses from the past over these last few days. But now it was as if they shared the vision of what had been and what could be.

    Tina wanted it. The feeling they’d had that night in Nepal.

    Tina put her right hand on Bette’s cheek. The moment froze for both of them. Tina’s heart filled, she wanted to speak but no words came to her. She slid her hand to the back of Bette’s head and pulled her into a kiss.

    Bette was floating. She was tethered only to Tina by her lips. She pressed hungrily against them and felt a hunger for her in return.
    They pressed their bodies together. Tina fell back against the car. They stopped to take a breath and took in each other.

    The moonlight shining on Tina’s face made it glow and Bette could only gaze at her as love and desire took away her words. She thought she could die at this moment and she wouldn’t care.
    Tina looked into Bette’s eyes and saw want and need to match her own.
    “Let’s go,” she said breathlessly.
    “Yeah” Bette kissed her deeply and before she realized it, her hand moved under Tina’s t-shirt and was caressing her back. Tina groaned. She pushed Bette back gently.

    “Not here.”

    ***

    The drive back to the hotel could have been the death knell for their passion. It could have been a twenty minute cooling off period where both parties stopped to consider what they were doing thinking about having ***** when the fundamental issues between them had yet to be addressed. It could have been a time when anxieties and fears from their despairing encounter two nights before welled up and overcame them.

    But it wasn’t.

    The air inside the speeding car was charged with sexual electricity and potential.

    Tina put her hand on the inside of Bette’s thigh.

    Bette depressed the accelerator.

    “You’re speeding,” Tina said softly.

    “Just keeping up with my pulse.”

    ***

    At the first red light they hit in the city Bette said, “Damn” as much for the delay as for the rising tide of anxiety that had just begun in her. “This is really going to happen,” she thought, as self doubt overtook her. ” *****.” Her mind began to go down a slippery slope of fear, then she felt Tina’s hand on her inner thigh again and her hot breath brushed against Bette’s ear.

    “Baby, go.”

    Bette looked at the light. It was green. Tina was sucking her earlobe. Pain was throbbing between her legs. She pressed on the gas.

    TBC

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    Comments

    1. massmom great to see your post. Wow, dont leacve us to long, you are one of the best fan fic writers out there. You are truly missed, when you dont post.

    2. OMG do you know how to leave us wanting more. That was so priceless, the interplay the almost disaster the recovery due to the generosity of them both. You have it all not to mention the anticipation of HMS in the next post. Thanks so much

    3. This was absolutely extraordinary, and I loved every single moment. This story is a remarkable journey and I’m so glad that you’re bringing us along for it. Thank you for sharing your vision and talent with us!

    5. …and when I saw that you’d posted, my breath caught. Having just finished reading it – my deepest thanks!! This is such a grand story. I’m so glad you have continued it.

    8. awesome- you have been missed and i just hope that it is not too long before you continue what has always been one of my most favorite stories out there. thanks!

    10. Good God MM!!!! After all this time away, and you leave us here?!!! I am with Skipton, this has been one of my favorites from the beginning…hope to see you back her SOON!!!!

    12. OMG! I can’t believe that I’m going to have to wait for the next chapter…damn! Please don’t take so long next time! I have missed your writing!

    13. I love the sense I get from your story of observing a mature passion between two grown women (not girls).

      It’s always well drawn, always well realized. You share with SNS the ability to convey a definite sense of place. I am there in Taos with them, moment by moment, feeling every varying emotion.

      My comments feel inadequate to the task of praising the excellence of your work.

      Each new chapter you post is like a rare gem: precious.

      I thank you for posting again.

      Where is your fanfic award?

    15. WOW! Did my day just get a whole lot better!

      I am in awe, as always. I love your work. Although I’ll say “I can’t wait” for the next chapter, clearly I can. It may be painful, but I’ll wait….

      M.

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