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Drowning 22 (part 2)
Tina eyed Dana and saw the single tear running down her face. “Dane?” She waited for Dana to look at her, “If this so hard on you and on Alice, talk to her. You can make this work. Whatever is going on, and there is something going on. Don’t try to tell me that there isn’t. Please don’t take me for a fool. But whatever is going on, the two of you together an fix this.”
“T, I wish we could. You’re right, there is a lot going on. But I can’t talk about it. I just can’t. And trust me, Alice is better off without me. I love her Tina. I really do. Please, just trust me.”
Tina sat quietly for a second before responding, “I will for now, but not long. Dana, you need to talk to someone, please. I need to know you’ll be ok, that Alice will be ok. And you aren’t filling me with confidence. Just think about it. I don’t leave for two more days and I can even stay for a little bit. Please just think and talk to me or talk to Shane or Alice. Just talk to someone.”
Dana reached over and gave Tina a heartfelt hug. “Thanks Tina. Come on let’s get home. It’s late.”
After dropping Tina off, Dana drove aimlessly. She wasn’t sure how long she had driven, but she knew it had to be a while because the gaslight blinked on. She had been trying to clear her head. She was so torn. She wanted her friends to be right. She wanted to be able to talk to Alice and together they would work this out. But if she did that, she could hurt Alice. Even though Alice always said she would do anything for Dana, Dana didn’t really think that included putting herself in harm’s way. The only way to know for sure what Alice would want to do was to ask her and that put her at risk. She couldn’t get out of the circle of logic, which left her where she was when she started the drive, knowing that she couldn’t go to Alice.
She parked in front of Shane’s place and slowly walked up the stairs to the front door. She put her key in the door and didn’t even notice that the door was unlocked. She walked into the house and headed towards the couch. As she went to sit down she realized someone was already sleeping on the couch. She got closer and a tear ran down her face as she looked down at Alice, curled up on the couch asleep.
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(63 votes, average: 4.05 out of 5)
NOOOOO please don’t make us wait. I for the life of me can’t figure this out. What could have Dana so scared she would give everything. Now all I’m going to do is obsess even more about this story, so hurry up so I can have a life.
Maybe when Alice wakes up Dana will tell her? (hint, hint) :)
Call the police, Dana! Call the FBI!!!!
Do you think she can hear me through this internet connection????
Alice was a soothsayer tonight, thanks to Jack!
I loved it, as usual, but look at the state you have us all in now! You have to post again soon; we can’t stand the suspense. (And, Dana, since Alice is right there on the couch: tell her!)
I forgot and Jo Dee Messina “Love is Not Enough”, that is the ultimate heartbreak song. Beautiful and each time I hear it, I thanked god, I’m not in the middle of a breakup.
I was waiting for you lol! Alice’s collection of songs had me cracking up, btw I love the Carpenters. Tina and Dana was touching and sweet. I missed this group of friends where everyone came together and helped out. You really aren’t gonna make this easy for us, aren’t you? What is going on with Dana? The suspense is killing me!
EEEH! Fix it!! Pweese? I luv it! Update soon, that was greeeeeat!
Ok, I’m coming out of lurkdom to say how much I love this story but it’s driving me crazy. (In a good way) Just when I think Dana’s going to cave in and spill the beans with what’s really going on…she fools me once again! Can’t wait for the next chapter.
“She was so torn.” Oh poor Dana!
it’s a great story. however, I don’t understand why Dana didn’t even think about calling police?
Ok, you have me thinking and thinking about all the possibilities for Dana’s behavior, please let us know! lol. Thanks for post soon.
i luv this fan fic!! This is such a great storyline!!! please write soon! the suspense is killing me! they gotta get back together! and tinas gotta stay!
Dana has to go to the police, or at least talk to Alice.
Alice hit the nail on the head with Bette, Bette has to decide what she wants, its not fair on Robin.
Thank you.