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Easier To Hate: Part 1
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"I’m sorry." Dana swallowed. "Bette and Tina broke up."
"That’s it?" Tonya asked, surprised. "That’s all?"
"That’s all?" Dana echoed, shocked by Tonya’s response. Then again, Tonya didn’t really know Bette and Tina that well. "Bette and Tina have been together forever. This is a major fucking deal Ton." Dana pulled her hands away from Tonya and went for her jacket and car keys. Tonya followed Dana around until she got to the front door.
"Do you want me to go with you?’
"No, it’s all right. There’s probably going to be lots of crying and stuff. It’s okay."
"But honey–"
Dana shook her head. "It’s all right Ton. I’ll be back in a couple of hours. Okay?" Dana kissed Tonya passionately and then gently. "I’ll be back." Then, she left. Tonya watched her go and then threw her hands up in the air.
"Well what the fuck am I supposed to do?"
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Alice and Shane sat at Alice’s table, both with their hands on Tina’s shoulders, comforting her while she sniffled, her hands pressed up against her eyes. There was a knock at the door. "That’s Dana. I’ll get it." Alice said, getting up. Shane pulled Tina into a tight embrace as Alice walked away.
She jogged over to her door, unlocked it and opened it quickly. Dana barged in, slowing only as she moved past Alice, brushing up against her arm. "Where is she?"
"In the kitchen."
Dana nodded. "How’s she doing?"
Alice shrugged. "How would you be doing?"
Dana looked at her shoes, nodding. She heard Tina’s quiet sobs. It broke her heart to hear Tina in that much pain. She moved to the kitchen with Alice in tow, stopping just in front of the table. Shane looked up at her with large, watery eyes.
"Oh Tina" Dana whispered, her voice cracking with emotion. She didn’t waste another second, walking over and wrapping Tina in a hug from behind with Shane still holding on to her.
Alice stood there, taking the whole scene in. Everything had become so fucked up in such a short matter of time and nothing seemed stable. She looked at Dana and felt an unbelievable urge to grab and kiss her. She pushed the urge from her self as soon as it came. They would need to talk, but later, when things calmed down.
If they ever did.
To be continued
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This is heartbreaking…..I love it though!!!
WOW for a newbe 6 pages is alot but i have to say 6 excellent pages, yes this is very sad, hell its heartbreaking but as with some other stories on this site youve really filled in the blanks, please keep it coming thanks really enjoyed it …well in a morbid way..lol
“It hadn’t been a nightmare….Tina was gone.”… Manda, wow, great first chapter!
I agree with B. This is really well written and I am looking forward to see where you plan to take if from here. Great Job!!
I agree with everyone, please keep going. This is good. I am a relatively new fan myself. I viewed season 2 episode 1 in syndication and then rented all of season 1. I was finally able to see all of season 2 a few months ago. I thank you for exploring this time “in between”. I wondered how did they get from the final episode of season 1 to the beginning of season 2. Particularly in season two when Bette said she had not tried to contact Tina because she wanted to be able to do what Tina asked of her. Did Tina actually want to get back with Bette back sooner, but Bette stayed with Candace until she realized her “mistake”? How did she approach Candace with continuing their relationship? Was the relationship actually six months long? I am a Tibetter from Betteville and I hated to see Bette suffer, but I guess this may be why Tina took it to her in season 2. I would love to hear your take on the “silent” months. Please keep going.
it’s really good, but i have to tell you, i hate drama LOL…very good though, because a lot of this was missing between s1 and s2
I’ve read a few fics that explored what happened after S1, but this is the truest I’ve seen in terms of what we would have watched if IC had chosen to show what happened within those first 24-48 hours after the finale. Most of the time I was wiping away stray tears but I did catch myself giggle over the suggestion that Tina smoke a joint to calm down. And of course Dana being her usual self is generally comical. I vote that you stick with this. Also, don’t worry if people get pissy because you didn’t go for fluffy bunny cute B&T. While I personally enjoy something light more often than not, it’s the darker side of B&T that make me think a little bit more.
The story is absolutely necessary. You’re right. There’re few scenes in the show to say how hard Bette tried to get Tina back. She just suddenly went back to normal life. I don’t think Bette would give up so easily. Please continue.
i am at a loss for words…..i love drama and this is full of it……continue soon…..
i am at a loss for words…..i love drama and this is full of it……continue soon…..
This is very well written…looking forward to the next chapter.
Wow! Great chapter, your voice mirror those of TLW. Looking forward to see where you take this story. I love that Kit came to Bette’s side — that shows how they were able to reconnect and illustrate the new found bond they had in S2.
Great start! And don’t feel like you have to apoligize for writing a story that starts post season 1. I enjoy these more than BnT beginnings. Please write more.
This is good and please continue, thanks!