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Easier To Hate: Part 1
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"No."
Both Alice and Shane turned to see Tina leaning up against the kitchen counter. "TK, how are you feeling?"
Tina shrugged. "It’s over."
"That’s good. Now just try to remember to breathe easy–" Alice began, but was cut off by the wave of Tina’s hand.
"I mean…it’s over between me and Bette."
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"Ooh, I don’t know where to put it!" Dana exclaimed, somewhat excited, somewhat frustrated.
"How ’bout in the fireplace." Tonya muttered under her breath.
"What?" Dana said, smiling as she looked from the painting to Tonya.
"Uh..a-above the fireplace?"
"That’s so cliche" Dana mumbled, hitting her lips with her finger as she thought about it. Then, her face lit up. "Oh my God! I know the perfect place for it!"
Tonya gulped.
"Right above the bed! Aww, that way Mr. P. can look down at us while we sleep. Ooh!" Dana cooed, almost hugging the picture.
Tonya cringed, but forced a smile on to her face. She thought she was rid of the little monster, now it was going to be staring down at her from her bed? "Sweetie, th-that’s a wonderful idea, ha-ha, but aren’t you worried about what Mr. P will be seeing when we’re not…sleeping?"
Dana looked at Tonya with slight confusion but her shoulders drooped when she realized what Tonya was saying. As soon as the sadness came, it left. "Don’t worry, Mr. Piddles has seen everything. It’ll be fine."
Tonya sighed, rolled her eyes, and plopped down on the couch just as Dana merrily skipped into the bedroom, and then the phone rang. "I’ll get it!" Tonya shouted.
"Okay!"
Tonya sat up straighter, cleared her throat, and answered the phone with a soft but sexy, "Dana Fairbanks’ residence, Tonya, her fiancee, speaking."
Alice rolled her eyes. "Hi Tonya." She said flatly. "Is Dana around?"
"Yes she is. Can I ask what this is about?"
Alice laughed nervously. "Uh…actually, Ton, it’s no offense, but it’s kinda private and an emergency. So can I just please talk to Dana?"
Tonya’s upper lip tightened, but she remained calm. "Sure, hold on just a sec. Dane! Sweetie, Alice is on the phone for you."
"Wha–" Dana whipped her body around at the mention of Alice’s name. Suddenly, she was falling off her bed. CRASH! "Ouch! Dammit!"
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This is heartbreaking…..I love it though!!!
WOW for a newbe 6 pages is alot but i have to say 6 excellent pages, yes this is very sad, hell its heartbreaking but as with some other stories on this site youve really filled in the blanks, please keep it coming thanks really enjoyed it …well in a morbid way..lol
“It hadn’t been a nightmare….Tina was gone.”… Manda, wow, great first chapter!
I agree with B. This is really well written and I am looking forward to see where you plan to take if from here. Great Job!!
I agree with everyone, please keep going. This is good. I am a relatively new fan myself. I viewed season 2 episode 1 in syndication and then rented all of season 1. I was finally able to see all of season 2 a few months ago. I thank you for exploring this time “in between”. I wondered how did they get from the final episode of season 1 to the beginning of season 2. Particularly in season two when Bette said she had not tried to contact Tina because she wanted to be able to do what Tina asked of her. Did Tina actually want to get back with Bette back sooner, but Bette stayed with Candace until she realized her “mistake”? How did she approach Candace with continuing their relationship? Was the relationship actually six months long? I am a Tibetter from Betteville and I hated to see Bette suffer, but I guess this may be why Tina took it to her in season 2. I would love to hear your take on the “silent” months. Please keep going.
it’s really good, but i have to tell you, i hate drama LOL…very good though, because a lot of this was missing between s1 and s2
I’ve read a few fics that explored what happened after S1, but this is the truest I’ve seen in terms of what we would have watched if IC had chosen to show what happened within those first 24-48 hours after the finale. Most of the time I was wiping away stray tears but I did catch myself giggle over the suggestion that Tina smoke a joint to calm down. And of course Dana being her usual self is generally comical. I vote that you stick with this. Also, don’t worry if people get pissy because you didn’t go for fluffy bunny cute B&T. While I personally enjoy something light more often than not, it’s the darker side of B&T that make me think a little bit more.
The story is absolutely necessary. You’re right. There’re few scenes in the show to say how hard Bette tried to get Tina back. She just suddenly went back to normal life. I don’t think Bette would give up so easily. Please continue.
i am at a loss for words…..i love drama and this is full of it……continue soon…..
i am at a loss for words…..i love drama and this is full of it……continue soon…..
This is very well written…looking forward to the next chapter.
Wow! Great chapter, your voice mirror those of TLW. Looking forward to see where you take this story. I love that Kit came to Bette’s side — that shows how they were able to reconnect and illustrate the new found bond they had in S2.
Great start! And don’t feel like you have to apoligize for writing a story that starts post season 1. I enjoy these more than BnT beginnings. Please write more.
This is good and please continue, thanks!