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Easier To Hate: Part 1
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Maybe Shane could help? She was after all, Yoda. Alice finally relented, and Shane released her arm.
"Things are really, really fucked up Shane."
"What are you talking about?"
Alice looked around. "Not here. Come to my car."
Shane followed Alice to her tiny car, feeling her insides twist with anxiety. Shane had only seen Alice look grave when something really bad was going down.
Oh, God someone’s hurt or dying or dead. Please God let everyone be okay. Please…
Alice opened the door and motioned Shane inside. Then, she closed the door and walked around, getting in on the driver’s side. By this time, panic had overtaken Shane, a feeling she wasn’t comfortable with at all.
"What the fuck is going on Alice?"
Alice exhaled nervously and said, "The world is coming to an end."
"What the fuck does that mean?"
"It’s Bette and Tina." Alice choked out, her emotions getting the best of her.
"What is it!"
"Tina…Tina left Bette last night. She’s staying at my house."
"What? Why?"
"I-I don’t know all the details but it seems that Bette" Alice bit her lip and looked up, fighting tears. She couldn’t believe this was happening. "Bette cheated on Tina."
"What the fuck?" Shane shouted, exasperated.
Alice shook her head. "With Candace."
Shane just stared at Alice. For a second, she felt angry with Alice, suspecting that this was just a sick, cruel joke. But the look on Alice’s face told Shane that she wasn’t joking at all. Shock and disbelief followed, and finally, pain. Bette and Tina were like the parents she never had. Shane loved, admired, and looked up to them. They were the perfect couple. Their love was something she longed for, something she knew she could only wish for. Now it was over? Impossible.
Seeing Shane’s eyes glaze over sent a pang of fear into Alice’s already frightened heart. Maybe Shane couldn’t help after all.
"That’s all I know right now. Tina wasn’t up for talking last night"
"How is she?" Shane muttered, somewhat snapping out of her paralysis.
"Not good Shane. She’s so heartbroken it hurts to look at her. She’s in so much pain."
"So you left her in your apartment alone?!?"
"I gave her a couple of pills in her water last night. She should be down and out for a few more hours."
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This is heartbreaking…..I love it though!!!
WOW for a newbe 6 pages is alot but i have to say 6 excellent pages, yes this is very sad, hell its heartbreaking but as with some other stories on this site youve really filled in the blanks, please keep it coming thanks really enjoyed it …well in a morbid way..lol
“It hadn’t been a nightmare….Tina was gone.”… Manda, wow, great first chapter!
I agree with B. This is really well written and I am looking forward to see where you plan to take if from here. Great Job!!
I agree with everyone, please keep going. This is good. I am a relatively new fan myself. I viewed season 2 episode 1 in syndication and then rented all of season 1. I was finally able to see all of season 2 a few months ago. I thank you for exploring this time “in between”. I wondered how did they get from the final episode of season 1 to the beginning of season 2. Particularly in season two when Bette said she had not tried to contact Tina because she wanted to be able to do what Tina asked of her. Did Tina actually want to get back with Bette back sooner, but Bette stayed with Candace until she realized her “mistake”? How did she approach Candace with continuing their relationship? Was the relationship actually six months long? I am a Tibetter from Betteville and I hated to see Bette suffer, but I guess this may be why Tina took it to her in season 2. I would love to hear your take on the “silent” months. Please keep going.
it’s really good, but i have to tell you, i hate drama LOL…very good though, because a lot of this was missing between s1 and s2
I’ve read a few fics that explored what happened after S1, but this is the truest I’ve seen in terms of what we would have watched if IC had chosen to show what happened within those first 24-48 hours after the finale. Most of the time I was wiping away stray tears but I did catch myself giggle over the suggestion that Tina smoke a joint to calm down. And of course Dana being her usual self is generally comical. I vote that you stick with this. Also, don’t worry if people get pissy because you didn’t go for fluffy bunny cute B&T. While I personally enjoy something light more often than not, it’s the darker side of B&T that make me think a little bit more.
The story is absolutely necessary. You’re right. There’re few scenes in the show to say how hard Bette tried to get Tina back. She just suddenly went back to normal life. I don’t think Bette would give up so easily. Please continue.
i am at a loss for words…..i love drama and this is full of it……continue soon…..
i am at a loss for words…..i love drama and this is full of it……continue soon…..
This is very well written…looking forward to the next chapter.
Wow! Great chapter, your voice mirror those of TLW. Looking forward to see where you take this story. I love that Kit came to Bette’s side — that shows how they were able to reconnect and illustrate the new found bond they had in S2.
Great start! And don’t feel like you have to apoligize for writing a story that starts post season 1. I enjoy these more than BnT beginnings. Please write more.
This is good and please continue, thanks!