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Easier to Hate: Part 4
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“Okay. Good night.”
“Night.” Alice closed the car door and watched Bette speed off, praying that Bette hadn’t screwed everything up.
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Bette nearly jumped out of her car and ran to her dark house, jamming the key in the lock and throwing the door open. “Tina! Are you here?”
Silence.
Bette frantically searched the whole house and the backyard, but there was no sign of Tina. “Fuck.”
She quickly dialed Alice’s number. It rang three times before Alice picked up. “Yello?”
“She isn’t here.”
“She isn’t?” Alice asked, knowing it was Bette.
“What do I do?”
“Call her house again. Maybe she finally, ‘returned.’” Alice said, mocking the doorman.
“Okay.”
“Okay, bye.”
“Bye.”
Bette hung up and quickly dialed Tina’s home phone. She cursed as the machine picked up again.
BEEP.
“Tit’s me. I’m sorry to be calling so late, it’s justyou haven’t called back yet and I was just wondering where you were. I know I don’t deserve to be called back, but I just want to make sure that you’re okay. Please, just call me back.”
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“Tina, it’s Bette again. I know that you’re upset and you have every right to be, but if you could please just call me back, just to let me know that you made it home okay or whateverplease, just call me.”
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“Hi Tme again. Listen, I just called your doorman and he said that you aren’t home yet. Where are you? I hope you’re okay. I-I meanI know that you’re not okay, okay. I know that I hurt you very badly and you have no idea how sorry I am, but if you could please just call me to let me know that you’re physically okay”
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“Hello?” Alice said, her voice full of sleep.
“She hasn’t called back yet Alice. It’s almost three-thirty.”
“Did you call her house?”
“And her cell phone at least five times.”
“Wellshe is really mad.”
“I even called the fucking doorman and he said she hadn’t come home yet.”
“No shit.”
“I’m really worried Al. What if something happened to her?”
Alice shook her head. “Don’t think like that. Tina’s fine. She’s just upset. Maybe she’s staying at a friend’s house. Do you know any of her friend’s numbers?”
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First time calls, second time flowers, what’s for the next time? But I still hope Tee will forgive Bette.
Love the story and the long posts was a bonus. Bette needs to beg beg get down on her knees beg and keep begging for Tina’s forgivness, flowers are not going to do it. Excellent chapter
Wow this is excellent. I like the long posts like this and was a wonderful flashback. Well hope this time she will beg and get down on her kneed again begging for Tina’s forgiveness and hope Tina will forgive Bette. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Great chapter don’t mind the long posts at all!!!
Great stuff… now lets try flowers…tho i think it will take a little more than that to fix this…lookin forward to more…lots more…
What suprises me is that the notion of love didn’t come around a lot sooner. Well if I learned one thing from this chapter, it’s never have a possible life-altering conversation (or yelling match) while drunk. And WTF…flowers? I’d be pissed if someone brought me flowers after a major break-up as of a way of apologizing. Flowers are way too happy for that type of occasion.
I love the long posts and this one was excellent. I really enjoyed the flashback to their first break up. Thanks and please post again soon!
I had something I originally wanted to say and couldn’t remember until now. You asked what we thought might have been the time that passed between S1 and S2. I once read that it was 1 day, but come on. No one’s pregnancy goes from not showing to popping out in a few hours. I would think a month would be long enough for a person to start showing, but I’ve never been pregnant so I wouldn’t know. I’m also pretty sure that Tina said she was living on Alice’s couch for a month right around the time she met with Joyce the annoying as fuck lawyer. But that also makes me wonder how long Bette was involved with Candyass because I always assumed she went back to her 1 more time then called it quits. Wow, people weren’t kidding when they said S2 had holes in the plot and bad writing.
wonderful…the first breakup was really intense….the time line was so screwed up, but my theory is that it was no more than 1-2 weeks between end of s1 and 201, because in 201 Al and dana talked about their kiss and i don’t think they could stay away and not to talk about it for months…tina did tell her lawyer in 203 that she stayed at alice’s house for 1 month, so maybe 2-3 weeks passed from ep. 1 to 3…and i don’t believe that bette would sleep with candace for so long…and another thing: tina was 13 weeks pregnant in 205 when she met helena and she go pregnant while she was still with bette for couple of months…so yes, only 2 weeks at the most between s1 and s2
Wow, that was really good and remarkably believable. The long posts are great. Please keep going.