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Easier to Hate: Part 4
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“II-uh, I know one. Barbara.”
“Call her.”
“At four o’clock in the morning? What if Tina didn’t go there? I don’t want to worry the womanI don’t even know her that well. I’ve only met her a few times.”
“So don’t call her.” After a few minutes of tense silence, Alice said, “I’m coming over.”
“No, no you don’t–”
“It’s okay. I’ll be there in ten minutes.”
“No Al. Forget it. It’s okay. Justsleep.”
“Are you sure, cause I’ll be there faster than you can say, ‘dyke drama.’”
“No.” Bette sighed. “I’m sorry I called. I just didn’t know who else to talk to.”
“Hey, you call me anytime, all right? I mean that.”
“I know. Thanks again.”
“Ad fifty to the bill.” Then, Alice hung up.
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“Okay, Tina, I know that you’re upset with me, but I’m really, really worried about you. Please, please, please just call me and let me know that you’re alive. You don’t have to say anything else but, ‘I’m alive.’ I swear. Please just call me back.”
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At six o’clock in the morning, Bette was just about ready to pull all of her hair out. She had been up all night worrying about Tina. She called both Tina’s house and cell phone numerous times and even drove over to Tina’s apartment two more times. She also stopped in some local places, like nightclubs, bars, and a few twenty-four hour supermarkets that they had frequented. Tina was nowhere to be found.
In one more last effort, Bette drove to the park, where she and Tina had shared many lovely mid-day lunches and a few weekend picnics. It was virtually empty, except for a few homeless people and early-bird joggers. Bette crossed the large field, scanning the park for any sign of blonde hair, when she spotted her.
Sitting on one of the benches, still dressed in last night’s evening pants suit, was Tina. The sun was just beginning to rise, illuminating Tina’s form. Bette’s heart jumped up into her throat. “T” She whispered breathlessly. “TTinaTina!”
Bette broke into a full run just as Tina turned her head. She turned back toward the sunrise, standing up and crossing her arms as tears rand down her cheeks. Bette reached her and couldn’t control her actions as she wrapped Tina in the tightest hug she had ever given. “Oh God T. I was so worried. I called and called you and never answered. I was so afraid you were hurt or–”
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First time calls, second time flowers, what’s for the next time? But I still hope Tee will forgive Bette.
Love the story and the long posts was a bonus. Bette needs to beg beg get down on her knees beg and keep begging for Tina’s forgivness, flowers are not going to do it. Excellent chapter
Wow this is excellent. I like the long posts like this and was a wonderful flashback. Well hope this time she will beg and get down on her kneed again begging for Tina’s forgiveness and hope Tina will forgive Bette. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Great chapter don’t mind the long posts at all!!!
Great stuff… now lets try flowers…tho i think it will take a little more than that to fix this…lookin forward to more…lots more…
What suprises me is that the notion of love didn’t come around a lot sooner. Well if I learned one thing from this chapter, it’s never have a possible life-altering conversation (or yelling match) while drunk. And WTF…flowers? I’d be pissed if someone brought me flowers after a major break-up as of a way of apologizing. Flowers are way too happy for that type of occasion.
I love the long posts and this one was excellent. I really enjoyed the flashback to their first break up. Thanks and please post again soon!
I had something I originally wanted to say and couldn’t remember until now. You asked what we thought might have been the time that passed between S1 and S2. I once read that it was 1 day, but come on. No one’s pregnancy goes from not showing to popping out in a few hours. I would think a month would be long enough for a person to start showing, but I’ve never been pregnant so I wouldn’t know. I’m also pretty sure that Tina said she was living on Alice’s couch for a month right around the time she met with Joyce the annoying as fuck lawyer. But that also makes me wonder how long Bette was involved with Candyass because I always assumed she went back to her 1 more time then called it quits. Wow, people weren’t kidding when they said S2 had holes in the plot and bad writing.
wonderful…the first breakup was really intense….the time line was so screwed up, but my theory is that it was no more than 1-2 weeks between end of s1 and 201, because in 201 Al and dana talked about their kiss and i don’t think they could stay away and not to talk about it for months…tina did tell her lawyer in 203 that she stayed at alice’s house for 1 month, so maybe 2-3 weeks passed from ep. 1 to 3…and i don’t believe that bette would sleep with candace for so long…and another thing: tina was 13 weeks pregnant in 205 when she met helena and she go pregnant while she was still with bette for couple of months…so yes, only 2 weeks at the most between s1 and s2
Wow, that was really good and remarkably believable. The long posts are great. Please keep going.