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Easier to Hate: Part 4
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“Let them fucking stare. I want an answer.”
Tina sighed loudly out of frustration. “An answer to what?”
“Are you still fucking your boyfriend?” Bette said just a little bit louder than she meant to. Her voice stopped many people in their tracks, including Alice and Eric, who had been watching from the sidelines.
Tina’s face flushed with both anger and embarrassment. “No! I can’t believe you would accuse me of that.” She whispered to Bette, her voice cracking with emotion. “Don’t you trust me at all?”
“So, what are you doing with him? Holding his hand, kissing him on the cheek like that?” Bette crossed her arms. Her words slurred a little, making Tina’s hurt eyes widen with realization.
“You’re drunk.”
“Am not.”
“Are too.”
“Am fucking not Tina!”
Tina shook her head, putting her hands up as she turned and walked away from Bette. “I’m not doing this with you now.”
“TTinaTina don’t walk away from me!” Bette chased after Tina, who was practically jogging toward the door. Soon, both women were outside in the unusually chilly night. “Tina!” Bette screamed, making Tina stop in her tracks.
Tina turned, still very angry. Tears pooled in her eyes as she gritted her teeth. “I can’t believe you would embarrass me like that!”
“Embarrass you? What about me? What do you think it feels like to be played for a fool for the last eight months!” Tears found their way to Bette’s eyes as well. “Do you know what I was coming to tell you before I saw you with him? Huh?!?” Bette said, the bitterness evident in her voice.
Tina shook her head.
“I was coming to tell you that I loved you.”
Tina’s features softened. “What?” She gasped breathlessly.
Bette nodded, her face scrunched in pain. “Yeah. And then you went and fucked it all up.”
Tina shook her head wildly, moving toward Bette quickly. “No, baby I didn’t. Just give me a chance to explain–” Tina put her hands on Bette’s arms, trying to hug her, but Bette knocked them away, taking a large step back.
“Don’t fucking call me baby! It’s over.”
Tina recoiled as if she had been slapped in the face. For what seemed like the millionth time, she uttered a breathless, “What?”
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First time calls, second time flowers, what’s for the next time? But I still hope Tee will forgive Bette.
Love the story and the long posts was a bonus. Bette needs to beg beg get down on her knees beg and keep begging for Tina’s forgivness, flowers are not going to do it. Excellent chapter
Wow this is excellent. I like the long posts like this and was a wonderful flashback. Well hope this time she will beg and get down on her kneed again begging for Tina’s forgiveness and hope Tina will forgive Bette. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Great chapter don’t mind the long posts at all!!!
Great stuff… now lets try flowers…tho i think it will take a little more than that to fix this…lookin forward to more…lots more…
What suprises me is that the notion of love didn’t come around a lot sooner. Well if I learned one thing from this chapter, it’s never have a possible life-altering conversation (or yelling match) while drunk. And WTF…flowers? I’d be pissed if someone brought me flowers after a major break-up as of a way of apologizing. Flowers are way too happy for that type of occasion.
I love the long posts and this one was excellent. I really enjoyed the flashback to their first break up. Thanks and please post again soon!
I had something I originally wanted to say and couldn’t remember until now. You asked what we thought might have been the time that passed between S1 and S2. I once read that it was 1 day, but come on. No one’s pregnancy goes from not showing to popping out in a few hours. I would think a month would be long enough for a person to start showing, but I’ve never been pregnant so I wouldn’t know. I’m also pretty sure that Tina said she was living on Alice’s couch for a month right around the time she met with Joyce the annoying as fuck lawyer. But that also makes me wonder how long Bette was involved with Candyass because I always assumed she went back to her 1 more time then called it quits. Wow, people weren’t kidding when they said S2 had holes in the plot and bad writing.
wonderful…the first breakup was really intense….the time line was so screwed up, but my theory is that it was no more than 1-2 weeks between end of s1 and 201, because in 201 Al and dana talked about their kiss and i don’t think they could stay away and not to talk about it for months…tina did tell her lawyer in 203 that she stayed at alice’s house for 1 month, so maybe 2-3 weeks passed from ep. 1 to 3…and i don’t believe that bette would sleep with candace for so long…and another thing: tina was 13 weeks pregnant in 205 when she met helena and she go pregnant while she was still with bette for couple of months…so yes, only 2 weeks at the most between s1 and s2
Wow, that was really good and remarkably believable. The long posts are great. Please keep going.