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Easier to Hate: Part 4
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“WHof course I did Al. She was fucking”
“Ohyou are such an idiot!”
Bette did a double take, blinking in surprise and anger. “Excuse me?”
“Okayjust, shut up and listen for a second, all right?”
Bette nodded. “What is it Al–”
“Just shush!” Alice waved her hands around wildly. “Oh, you are in such deep shit.” Alice shook her head, looking up at the ceiling. Looking back at Bette, she sniffled, wiping her nose. “Okay, after your took your little temper tantrum show outside, I decided to go over to Eric and give him all kinds of hell, cause that’s what best friends are for right? So anyway, before I even got a chance to utter my first obscenity, Eric explained everything.”
“Oh yeah?” Bette muttered skeptically. “What’d he say?”
“He said that he was just clearing the air with Tina. Their breakup, as you know, had been a little messy and they hadn’t left it on good terms. Eric was just apologizing to Tina for being so cold with her. He could see how happy she was with you and he was glad.”
“And you fucking believed him Al?”
“I had no reason not to. You know I can sniff out a lie from a hundred feet away. He wasn’t lying. Besides, Eric is just as happy. Apparently, he’s already engaged.”
“To who?”
“One Vanessa Lyons. That’s why he was here. You had Vanessa on the list and he came along as her, ‘and guest.’” Alice said, using hand quotations.
Bette looked at Alice, who sat back in her bar stool, fiddling with the martini toothpick in her mouth. The deepest feeling of sadness and regret washed over Bette’s whole body. “Oh shit.”
“Exactly.”
“Oh shit, oh shit, oh shit.” Bette stood up frantically as she remembered everything that happened. How she yelled at and embarrassed Tina in front of everyone, how she wouldn’t let Tina explain herselfwhat she said to Tina. “Ohfuck.” She sobbed, putting a hand on her hip and the other on her forehead.
“Hey,” Alice soothed, rushing to Bette and putting a comforting hand on her back. “It’ll be okay Bette. Tina will understand.”
Bette shook her head wildly. “No Alice. I said so many mean, hateful things to her. Oh, fuckI ruined it. I lost her.” She started to panic as her heart throbbed with pain. She had lost the only good thing in her life because of her stupid fear of commitment and drunken jealousy.
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First time calls, second time flowers, what’s for the next time? But I still hope Tee will forgive Bette.
Love the story and the long posts was a bonus. Bette needs to beg beg get down on her knees beg and keep begging for Tina’s forgivness, flowers are not going to do it. Excellent chapter
Wow this is excellent. I like the long posts like this and was a wonderful flashback. Well hope this time she will beg and get down on her kneed again begging for Tina’s forgiveness and hope Tina will forgive Bette. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Great chapter don’t mind the long posts at all!!!
Great stuff… now lets try flowers…tho i think it will take a little more than that to fix this…lookin forward to more…lots more…
What suprises me is that the notion of love didn’t come around a lot sooner. Well if I learned one thing from this chapter, it’s never have a possible life-altering conversation (or yelling match) while drunk. And WTF…flowers? I’d be pissed if someone brought me flowers after a major break-up as of a way of apologizing. Flowers are way too happy for that type of occasion.
I love the long posts and this one was excellent. I really enjoyed the flashback to their first break up. Thanks and please post again soon!
I had something I originally wanted to say and couldn’t remember until now. You asked what we thought might have been the time that passed between S1 and S2. I once read that it was 1 day, but come on. No one’s pregnancy goes from not showing to popping out in a few hours. I would think a month would be long enough for a person to start showing, but I’ve never been pregnant so I wouldn’t know. I’m also pretty sure that Tina said she was living on Alice’s couch for a month right around the time she met with Joyce the annoying as fuck lawyer. But that also makes me wonder how long Bette was involved with Candyass because I always assumed she went back to her 1 more time then called it quits. Wow, people weren’t kidding when they said S2 had holes in the plot and bad writing.
wonderful…the first breakup was really intense….the time line was so screwed up, but my theory is that it was no more than 1-2 weeks between end of s1 and 201, because in 201 Al and dana talked about their kiss and i don’t think they could stay away and not to talk about it for months…tina did tell her lawyer in 203 that she stayed at alice’s house for 1 month, so maybe 2-3 weeks passed from ep. 1 to 3…and i don’t believe that bette would sleep with candace for so long…and another thing: tina was 13 weeks pregnant in 205 when she met helena and she go pregnant while she was still with bette for couple of months…so yes, only 2 weeks at the most between s1 and s2
Wow, that was really good and remarkably believable. The long posts are great. Please keep going.