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    Empty – Chapter 8

    “Oh…” Dana murmured, she looked up just in time to see “Kirk” run out
    the door to chase “Loulou” for her ribbon, and giggled. “I think mine
    would be a green ribbon,” she thought, realizing too late that she’d
    said it out loud.

    “Dana!” Alice gasped, playfully pushing at Dana’s hip. “I can’t believe
    you’re thinking of our breakup-ribbon colours!” Knowing that Dana had
    voiced her thought more on the basis of what her favourite colour was
    rather than the actual possibility of them ever breaking up, Alice
    decided to humor her. “Hmpf, just wait and see if I ever wear your
    ribbon… besides, I’m more of a pink ribbon, anyway.” Alice crossed
    her arms protectively and pretended to scowl, hoping to bug Dana even
    more, but was only rewarded with a kiss on the cheek and Dana pulling
    her closer with both arms around her.


    **Lorelai: This is not coffee. This
    is a Mocha Chocolate Caramel Swirl-accino with extra whipped cream
    …and if it was physically possible to make love to a hot beverage,
    this would be the one!




    Luke: So, apparently, I’ve got competition…

    “Mmm, yumm.” Alice mumbled agreeably to the wishful possibility of making love to a european coffee drink. “Hot beverage, indeed!”

    It was Dana’s turn to pretend-scowl. “Weh-*****… apparently, I’ve got competition!”

    “No-no-no. It’s just a fling,” Alice explained, semi-turning her head
    at Dana, “Next-day unswirled caramel and unwhipped whipped cream
    definitely gets my pink ribbon. Pfft!” She blew out a raspberry,
    dismissively waving her hand away at that possibility.

    Dana smiled at Alice. She’d never seen her so happy and, for the moment
    she didn’t really care if it was a TV show that put that smile on
    Alice’s face and not her. As long as Alice was happy, Dana felt
    completely at ease. “Haha, I’d wear your ribbon …if only to stop you from wearing it.” She looked at Alice with a not too subtle hint on her voice and, lucky for Dana, the blonde caught on.

    “You got yourself a deal.” Alice chuckled. At hearing the beat to the
    theme song, she turned her head and, to Dana’s astonishment, started to
    sing along!

    “If you’re out on the road… feeling lonely and so cold.” Her
    familiarity with the song was evident to Dana as she played an
    air-guitar with the beat. “All you have to do is call my-y name and
    I’ll be there… on the next train.”

    Comments

    1. Two words: Cold. Shower. Now (okay three)So THATS why you were “simmering”? Sad to see it end, because…Wow. The ending was great! Bring on the College Years!!

    2. WOW Im 1st!..I think that was a great way 2 end it..the best striez r the unfinished 1..GREAT stry..I love the way u write..I enjoyed all 8 chapters..Syched&looking forward 2 ur next stry – Al&Dane in College – HOT!..I’m thinking I like the way u think..THNK U 4 writing, dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..

    3. What a great story!!! I can’t wait for your college dayz story ;) I always wondered what would have happened if they’d explored their relationship at an earlier stage…Post the new story soon!!

    4. I’ll never listen to that song the same way again *sigh*. What a wonderful end to a wonderful story, and hot too! *still fanning self* Alright next on the agenda, college Danish, when?

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