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    Empty – Chapter 8

    //Oh how I adore you, like no one before you

    I love you just the way you are//

    At that moment, while looking into Alice’s eyes, when she felt happy,
    when she felt safe, and when she felt everything she could ever feel
    for Alice …Dana remembered Carmen’s words: “BUT, before you tell her, just take a split second and let yourself remember all the sh*t, and decide, while you feel everything for her and while you fear everything else, whether she’s still worth it.”

    And Dana did remember, because in Alice’s eyes she could also see all
    the possible problems, the risks they both took, the reasons why “this
    could not work”, their inevitable future arguments, and her innate
    insecurities. She saw truth and reality in her eyes …but what she
    also saw, which was stronger than the harsh reality, was hope. Granted,
    no amount of hope will take the elements of fear away, but it can erase
    doubt. And Dana, for sure, saw no traces of doubt in Alice’s eyes. Dana
    decided for herself that, yes! Alice was worth it. IS worth it! No
    amount of fear or insecurities could make her deny her love for the
    blonde. A new resolve building up within her, Dana’s eyes flashed with
    new passion, urging her fingers to resume its previous thrusts. She
    lowered her lips to quench her sudden thirst to drink Alice in. The
    blonde accepted her kiss hotly, moaning and thrusting her hips up in
    time with Dana’s hand.

    //It’s in the way you want me

    It’s in the way you hold me//

    “Alice, oh, I love you…” she spoke into the kiss, “Come for me, love.
    Show me that you can feel this… that you can feel me.” Dana’s drove
    her fingers in and out deeper and faster, touching as much of Alice’s
    inner walls as she can.

    //The way you show me just what love’s made of

    It’s in the way we make love

    It’s just the way you are//

    The moment hit Alice like a tidal wave. Surge after surge of pleasure
    seemed to ride through her. Dana stayed inside her well past the last
    shudders. In the afterglow of the *****, Alice thought for a split
    second that she’d imagined a voice repeating a certain phrase over and
    over or that perhaps a song had started to play with the same lyrics.
    It wasn’t until her breathing had returned to normal and could finally
    clearly hear Dana whispering in her ear. She said the words so softly
    yet so firmly and honestly. Three simple words, yet they expressed so
    much meaning. Three simple words that was empty of any doubt and full
    of certainty. Three simple words that Alice knew she’d never ever get
    tired of hearing.

    ” I love you… I love you… I love you…”

    THE END

    …

    I know I said I had a couple more chapters to go, but after some
    discussion with my BETA-buddies, it was decided that this is as good a
    place to end the fic as any. I apologize for pulling you along for so
    long, and taking weeks of simmering, only to end so abruptly. I hope
    you guys liked “Empty” …yes, all of eight of them. :o)
    I’m gonna be working on a new fic (as promised) trying to explore Dana
    and Alice’s relationship had they taken the chance to explore it while
    they were in college. …oh and YES, there will be a drunk-party scene
    indeed! LOL
    Until then, “Empty” OUT -^///^—————–
    ~Rach

    Comments

    1. Two words: Cold. Shower. Now (okay three)So THATS why you were “simmering”? Sad to see it end, because…Wow. The ending was great! Bring on the College Years!!

    2. WOW Im 1st!..I think that was a great way 2 end it..the best striez r the unfinished 1..GREAT stry..I love the way u write..I enjoyed all 8 chapters..Syched&looking forward 2 ur next stry – Al&Dane in College – HOT!..I’m thinking I like the way u think..THNK U 4 writing, dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..

    3. What a great story!!! I can’t wait for your college dayz story ;) I always wondered what would have happened if they’d explored their relationship at an earlier stage…Post the new story soon!!

    4. I’ll never listen to that song the same way again *sigh*. What a wonderful end to a wonderful story, and hot too! *still fanning self* Alright next on the agenda, college Danish, when?

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