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Empty – Chapter 8
//You’ve got a way, it seems
You gave me faith to find my dreams
You’ll never know just what that means
Can’t you see you got a way with me?//
“I wanna show you, Al,” Dana whispered as she leaned in to kiss Alice
on the lips, lightly at first but gradually became more urgent. Soon
Alice was lying flat on her back on the bed, with Dana hovering just
barely out of reach, her hands by Alice’s head to support her. “Listen
to those words… baby, no one makes me feel the way you do.”
//It’s in the way you want me
It’s in the way you hold me//
The brunette’s lips were on her again, she was everywhere Alice wanted
her to be. Numerous parts of her body cried out for Dana to taste, and
she was intent on answering each one. Alice moaned when she felt teeth
grazing on her neck. Her body arched off the bed in ecstasy when she
thought that Dana had torn skin.
//The way you show me just what love’s made of
It’s in the way we make love//
Dana’s words earlier rang in her ear, that there was a difference
between ***** and love-making. Oh! How she could feel that now!
Dana’s urgent kisses on her skin awoke her senses. Just the mere
knowledge that Dana’s ministrations came not only from passionate lust,
but also from decisive love.
//You’ve got a way with words
You get me smiling even when it hurts
There’s no way to measure what your love is worth
I can’t believe the way you get through to me//
Alice sighed when Dana finally started undressing her. She wanted every
inch of her skin to feel the warmth of the brunette’s touch. Not one
part of her could be ignorant to the effect of that sensation. She
could not help but let out a whimper when Dana put three fingers inside
her. Luckily, Alice was wet enough that her inner walls were able to
hug Dana’s fingers tightly, which moved inside her, bringing her closer
to release. It was enough to make her come, but Dana wasn’t ready to
give her release just yet.
//It’s in the way you want me
It’s in the way you hold me
The way you show me just what love’s made of
It’s in the way we make love//
“Just look at me, baby…” Dana waited until Alice, who had clenched
her eyes shut, finally opened them to meet hers. A thin sheen of sweat
now coated the blonde’s body, her chest heaved up and down with her
heavy breathing. Keeping eye contact, Dana lowered her forehead to rest
against her girlfriend’s and gradually slowed down the thrusting
movement her hand had started to make. The change was not lost on the
blonde and confusion instantly covered her face. Alice grabbed Dana’s
head on either side with both hands, looking only at her lips, her
mouth hanging open as she whimpered her need for release. “Just stay
with me…” the brunette implored, trying to comfort Alice that this
was a good thing, “I want you to feel this, feel me, as long as
possible…”
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I loved every single chapter of empty and you ended it so well. I am gutted it has ended but i look forward to your next story. Thanks
Thanks for this story. I look forward to your next one. Loved this!
Two words: Cold. Shower. Now (okay three)So THATS why you were “simmering”? Sad to see it end, because…Wow. The ending was great! Bring on the College Years!!
Loved the story. Thanks :)
Awesome story. I think you ended it perfectly, with happy danish. Keep up the great work and can’t wait till your next story
WOW Im 1st!..I think that was a great way 2 end it..the best striez r the unfinished 1..GREAT stry..I love the way u write..I enjoyed all 8 chapters..Syched&looking forward 2 ur next stry – Al&Dane in College – HOT!..I’m thinking I like the way u think..THNK U 4 writing, dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..
that was a very beautiful story. the ending was great and i await for your next story. Keep up the great work!!!
What a great story!!! I can’t wait for your college dayz story ;) I always wondered what would have happened if they’d explored their relationship at an earlier stage…Post the new story soon!!
I love it and this is the best way to end it please post soon
I’ll never listen to that song the same way again *sigh*. What a wonderful end to a wonderful story, and hot too! *still fanning self* Alright next on the agenda, college Danish, when?