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Enough 6
“Bette, I want to call you an idiot so bad it makes my teeth hurt, but you know what they say, it takes one to know one, and boy that couldn’t be more true if God said those words Himself. I have been such an idiot. In fact, idiot is not even a good word to describe what I have been. I would say that I have been a fool. A fool with the wool pulled over my eyes, and stuffed in my mouth, so that I could not see what has been in front of me, and speak what has been looming inside of me. This whole room reeks of stupidity and cowardliness, and fucking regret. “
Now it was my turn to have the look of confusion posted on my face as if it were front page news. I knew I was an idiot, this wasn’t breaking news coming from Tina’s mouth, but why was she saying she was an idiot? I have never thought she even came close to being in the same vicinity of an idiot. Well, I take that back. Tina can be somewhat clueless when it comes to her own natural beauty. I have never understood why she can’t see it. Her own beauty is unknown to her, they are strangers. Tina’s beauty and myself have gotten to know each other better over the years. We have a love/hate relationship. Sometimes when I am looking at her my eyes take on a mind of their own, and I can’t get them to look away. I beg them to look anywhere else, but her beauty has won them over and I no longer have control. It was during these times that we got to know each other so well. Other times, my heart would have a “heart to heart” talk with my eyes and tell them that they could not go out and play with Tina’s beauty today, because it was nothing but a colossal bully. It was during these times I would grow to despise her beauty, and my addiction to it. Either way, Tina is an idiot for not knowing her own beauty, and it is my job to make them acquaintances.
Tina gets up and starts pacing the floor, I can tell she is in deep thought because she is picking at her eye brows. I see her mumbling to herself, which is either a sign of going crazy or of being a genius, I haven’t quite decided. I guess it all depends on what her response is going to be to my love being thrown at her like a fast ball. Will she take it like a champ and hit a homerun, and then run all the home to my waiting arms? Or will she strike out because we just cannot connect, not in the way I want at least. At this point, I would just settle for a bunt….. that would be a start. That would be a sign that she feels something for me and one step closer to a win, a win for my poor losing heart. This game needs to hurry up though, because my heart is just about ready to throw in the towel and forfeit.
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(23 votes, average: 4.04 out of 5)
I agree with both lodeerca & lilla, just beautiful:))PPS
Wow! That confession was sweet.
Carrying on the brief baseball (softball?) theme, that was a home run! thank you for the chapter. :)
Freaking Fantastic. Well, I never expected that from Tina, although I was hoping for it. Now all the angst that Bette feels can subside and they can finally, FINALLY, love one another. In one of my earlier comments, I said that Mrs. Kennard knew they were in love with each other, the just didn’t know. Now I’m waiting to find out if I was right. Thanks for posting.
Sweet, just sweet…
So sweet. You had me scared for minute there when Tina said she met someone….I was ready for her to tell Bette she was already taken. I’m so glad they feel the same way about each other.
Beautiful update. Thank you for posting. Great story.
Thanks, I loved this chapter. The Hours!!
That was awesome and beautiful, love it. Please post more, thanks!
for a minute i thought you were going to leave us hanging.. without telling jus who tina’s heart was beating for… wow…if only they talked a few years ago… ok… now their first kiss is in order..pps
Beautiful.Thank you.PPS
Nicely written. This was such a sweet scene between them two.
your writing is so hilarious yet so…I don’t know..deep. does this make a sense?
That was.. poetry!
I love this chapter. The hilarious banter between B&T is awesome. I love Tina’s declaration of love for Bette. Don’t leave us hanging for so long, please.
That was so funny.Great update thank you.
Now that was CLASSIC!!