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Enough 5
Previously……
“No. Tina is the name of this person that you wish to thank. Don’t you know when someone is talking about you? Don’t you know yourself at all? You are the one that makes me happier than you have ever witnessed, you are the one that brings me to life. It is you, it has always been you. I love you, I am in love with……..you.”
I can hear my heart beating in my ears. It is beating to the tune of my destiny. And right now………… annoyingly, my destiny sounds like that song “Do Ya Love Me?” by American Juniors. And on top of that, I can’t breathe. I feel like a thief has come and robbed me of all of my oxygen, and as he was getting away, I was pleading with him to just take me as well. I wasn’t completely sure that I wanted to be sitting here when my confession finished seeping into Tina’s consciousness.
I think Tina may have entered a state of shock. I see her sitting in front of me in her green sweater and ragged, grey sweat pants. Her hair has begun to fall out of its previous assigned setting. Several pieces are hanging around her face, much like how a frame encompasses a beautiful portrait. I watch her blink, her lashes long and standing at attention, ready to protect the windows to her soul. I see her swallow and watch it travel down her throat heading towards its final destination. I silently pray that it wasn’t her declaration of her love for me that she sent barreling down her throat to reside at the very pit of her stomach, never to be heard by my wanting ears. I long to hear those words flee from her mouth, and seek refuge in my heart where they belong; where their home has always been.
I contemplate breaking this painful silence. What would I say? Maybe the classic, “So, how’s the weather?” Which her response would be “Cloudy with a chance of go to hell” .Or maybe, “If you were given access to a time machine, where and when would you travel to?” I could hear her saying,” Back to the first day of ninth grade. I would get my ass up from that front row and head straight to the back of the class, as fast as a jack rabbit on red bull. Then my life would be void of stress, my life would be care free, my life would be…… just Tina, no Bette.”
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(21 votes, average: 4.19 out of 5)
You’re killin’ me… really. Please post very very very soon :)
Not COOL, Please PPPPVVVVVSoon:)
AWESOME STORY…..but please post soon… can’t wait to hear what Tina has to say!!!thank you
You’re leaving Bette and us hanging! Please post again soon. Tina is holding Bette’s heart in her hands. Please let her be gentle….
bad bad girl. Leaving us at such a crucial moment…sigh.
OMG, I don’t believe you stopped there. Hope you will post really soon, really want to know what Tina is thinking and about to say. Hope she doeesn’t break Bette’s heart. From her statement… “I never want you to leave,” sounds that she may feel the same towards Bette. At least I hope. Thanks for posting. PPVS
OMG if there ever was a tease this was one. I feel like it’s a payback for my last tease ugh!!!! What did she say??? (in a little whining voice)
OMG, WHAT THE HELL? How can u leave us like that, can’t believe it lol. Damn that was good and Im so into it and then bam nothing on the page 3 lol. Please post more, thanks!
OMG You weren’t kidding when you said that you were gonna leave us hanging… T_T You just have have have to post soon!! That is way too cruel an edge to leave us at.. =( PPPPPPPPPPPVS! =)))
And….then…she…? Great story. I love/hate the cliffies. Thanks for posting.
aw, man. I hope whatever Tina’s about to say, that Bette’s ready for it. And I also hope you’re posting soon. thanks!
oh you tease! Can’t wait for what Tina has to say. Please post soon. Thank you.
Oh what a spin Bette’s in. I love all the free flowing emotions all gummed up and spitting out. The beauty queen question I will have to ponder awhile. Great writing I was right there with Bette waiting on Tina’s answer. Please have it come soon
hey I know there is a third page out there somewhere
what every one else said… and you are the queen for the day… of cliffhangers…pps
Ahhhhh sh!t… What the %#*^??? I can’t believe you left us hanging like this…AGAIN!
you are mean…:)
what the $&&^#@%, that was not a nice way to end this chapter.So I am going to press the back key and then select this story again. Hopefully the rest of the missing pages will reappear and if not I am going to bed. Hoping that when I wake the rest of the pages will be there.Great but all too short chapter.Thanks for posting.
I thought you said you didn’t want to be the queen of cliffhangers !?! PPS.
I’m never tired of reading this story again & again. It’s always at the last page that i’m secretly praying that the “next post by this author” will be available! :D I can’t wait for this, please post soon. This story is so interesting and funny! You can write so well.
im so ready!