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Escort – Chapter 3 (Rewrite)
Bette entered the Planet immediately spotting Alice and Shane at a table in the back and made her way over.
“Hey guys” she said as she sat down next to Shane.
“Porter, where were you last night?” Alice asked “You missed a pretty awesome night at HIT”
“I had to go to the CAC dinner, remember?”
“Yeah right” Alice said “How was it?”
“It was good, would’ve been better without Vanessa there though”
“Oh yeah, how is that biatch?” Alice grinned.
“She’s a real bitch as usual” Bette sighed “And she did everything to mess up my date”
“Who was the lucky lady?” Shane smirked.
“This very beautiful blonde” Bette smiled thinking about Tina.
“What’s her name?” Alice asked, suddenly very interested.
“Tina” Bette smiled.
“You really like her don’t you?” Shane smiled “I haven’t seen you smile this much over a girl in a long time” she grinned.
“She’s special” Bette said.
“Where did you meet her?” Alice asked.
“At my gallery last Saturday”
“Wait a minute” Alice started “This is not the escort right? Please tell me it’s not her!”
Bette looked at Alice with a frown “What if it is her?”
“Bette!” Alice sighed loudly “You can’t date an escort”
“Wait a minute” Shane said “This girl works as an escort?”
“Yes” Bette started “But she doesn’t sleep with her dates she just go out with them” she said defensively.
“Does she even like you?” Alice said “Maybe she just acted like she did so that you would pay here more!”
“I didn’t even pay her” Bette said “She didn’t want me to”
“What!?” Alice squealed “So you actually went on a real date with this woman?”
“Look guys I really like her and I think she likes me too”
“Is she even gay?” Alice asked curiously.
“I guess so… I mean you can’t kiss the way she did and not mean it” Bette smiled thinking back to their kiss.
“You kissed?” Alice exclaimed.
“Yeah, Alice what’s the big deal?”
“I just don’t think it is a good idea getting involved with her” Alice said, slowly shaking her head.
“Look Bette I’m with Alice…it’s a disaster waiting to happen” Shane said smiling apologetically at her friend.
“What is the worst thing that can happen?” Bette asked feeling frustrated with her friends.
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(4 votes, average: 3.25 out of 5)
And so the plot thickens. Can’t wait for more.
Oh man, I’m really hoping Alice doesn’t get to Bette anymore than she has already. I respect her looking out for her friend though . . I hope it all works out, can’t wait to read more
wow lovin’ the rewrite, this is totally awesome. true story. more please
Loving it.
you rewrit amazing i love it thank you i can’t wait for more!!!!
Great update. thank you.
Thank you for the update.Love the rewrite.PPS
I like this version better! Love this story