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Escort – Chapter 3 (Rewrite)
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“You just can’t handle it…you’re too jealous” Alice stated.
Bette sighed putting her head in her hands. She knew that Alice was right, she would not be able to handle Tina dating other people even if it was just a job. But she wasn’t prepared to throw an opportunity with this incredible woman away without knowing what could have been.
She was still sitting with her head in her hands as Kit made her way over.
“What’s wrong baby girl?” she asked.
“I’ve met the most incredible woman”
Kit looked confused “That’s a good thing right?”
“Yeah…” Bette sighed “Except for the fact that my lovely friend’s here don’t think that I can’t start anything with her”
“Why not?”
“She’s an escort” Alice chipped in as Bette glared at her.
“An escort” Kit said with her eyebrows raised.
“But you guys don’t understand…” Bette sighed “I’ve never felt like this about anyone before”
“You’ve been on ONE date Porter” Alice arched an eyebrow at her friend “You sure you don’t just want to get into her pants?”
Bette let out a frustrated sigh “Look we all now I’ve slept around…a lot” she started “I’m not denying that…but…” she trailed off.
“You really like this one huh?” Shane said softly.
“Yes…” Bette sighed “I just feel a connection with her…I can’t stop thinking about her”
“Then I think you should go for it” Shane stated.
“Shane!” Alice exclaimed “Don’t tell her that”
“I’m with Shane” Kit started “If you really feel this strongly about this woman than you should go for it baby girl”
“You guys are crazy” Alice said “Don’t listen to them Bette!”
“Alice” Shane glared at her.
“No this will only end with Porter getting hurt and I’m not encouraging that!” Alice said giving Shane an angry look.
“Look guys I really appreciate your advice but I just need to clear my head a bit, can we talk about something else?” Bette said.
“Yeah sure” Shane smiled “So what are the plans for tonight?” she asked, looking over at Alice.
“Baby girl can I get you anything?” Kit smiled at her sister.
“Some coffee would be great Kit” Bette smiled before watching her sister walk off to get it for her.
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And so the plot thickens. Can’t wait for more.
Oh man, I’m really hoping Alice doesn’t get to Bette anymore than she has already. I respect her looking out for her friend though . . I hope it all works out, can’t wait to read more
wow lovin’ the rewrite, this is totally awesome. true story. more please
Loving it.
you rewrit amazing i love it thank you i can’t wait for more!!!!
Great update. thank you.
Thank you for the update.Love the rewrite.PPS
I like this version better! Love this story