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    Eternally your: when a lifetime is not enough # 11

    Story written on August 1, 2008 by Braz.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=70530
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    “Please…Bette is dying, Dane…” Dana stopped to the view: her best friend sat against the wall, dressed with eyes of death.Little puzzle pieces made of glass gained Bette´s mind and for the first time she could presence facts that rolled after her death.The death she died inside her nightmares.

    extended her the unit.

    “Dane, hello! Hi, …great talk to you… don’t you want to come and have some tea with us?”

     

    Alice didn’t know at that moment, but sooner she would need desperately Dane to arrive and Bette’s friend would be the one to help her to understand what was going on.

     

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    Bette denied herself the idea that she could have a big shock in contact with the life of her beloved one. 
    She decided to ignore that the house, like our heart, is decorated with the people we loved. 
    And it wasn’t Bette who Tina loved. At least, not at those days.When she trespass the door step, 
    she dived in Tina’s life and that would prove Bette wasn’t wise.

    The house was beautifully decorated. Bette watched around carefully trying to learn more about who was her lover on this reincarnation.

    “From where do you know Tina, Bette?”

    “Long story, Alice…And I don’t want to be here when Tina arrive. Not today…I will explain to you another day…”  The mocha told Alice in a cold tone while she observed the details of the house. The diner room,; the couch; the kitchen; the modern chaise lounge; the ottoman; the art pieces hanging on the wall.  She was unsettle, because jealous began to intoxicate her blood.

    “Ok…I am going to redo the question. What are your intentions with her, Bette Porter?”

    The gallery owner forgot about Alice. She was lost inside her own thoughts. “My intentions?” Bette let her curiosity a far for a while to search for Alice’s eyes. The cold tone wasn’t there anymore. “Marry her, have a daughter and make her happy for this existence and others, Al. Like always it had been…”

    The answer came straight, but it was full with that fog that covered Bette’s words, from time to time.

    “Oh…Hmmmm…Ok… Marry…Kids… But do you know that she already is committed?”

    “This can change any minute…” Bette shot while she watched the art pieces on the walls.

    “You have a hell of a self assurance, lady…” Alice grinned.

    “No…it’s not about that, Alice…”

    “And…you seem to forget that she didn’t know you this well, pall. And I am warning you: Tina doesn’t like surprises…”

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    2. Holy wow, Braz! We are in AWE with the brilliant way in which you made all the pieces of the puzzle starting to fit and make sense. Absolutely amazing, dear friend. Anything we could add, would not do justice to the extraordinary way in which you are bringing this story to life. Just wonderful, Braz! Thanks for making us part of the journey of this unique and fantastic story. PPS Hugs & Kisses on both your cheeks. – Lucero & Marsha (Latin JC’s Salsa Aunties) P.S. Hope the moving process to your new and fabulous home has been great. Just remember that your time in the Spotlight is not over yet, dear friend. You still have tomorrow (saturday) to answer more questions, sweetie. Xoxoxo

    5. Congrats with a good news Braz, happy for you. Wish u all the best and with many happy memories into your new home. That was good chapter, poor Bette and hope she will fight and get her life back this time of a lifetime with Tina. Ok now what Alices up to!

    8. Everytime I read another chapter in this story I get goosebumps because it is so brilliantly written. I love how all the characters are rallying around Bette because they recognize that she is Tina’s soulmate. The use of Meltic as Bette’s bestfriend and murderer is so powerful. He essentially stole her life as well as her love. Braz you have captured my imagination with your story. Best of luck with the new home. Sorry I missed you in the spotlight.

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