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Everybody Knows – Part Nine
“I sometimes think I’m my own worst enemy.” said Bette, still staring out across the pool.
“I don’t understand what you mean.” asked Tina, thankful that Bette had started to talk.
“Well, I should have been paying more attention.”
“Attention to what?” asked Tina again, more confused than she was before.
“To you.”
“Bette, you’ve always paid attention to me. You may get a little distracted at times but I’ve never doubted that I was always on your mind.”
“You have been, and I’ve been worried about you, about us, to be honest.”
“Why?”
“Not spending enough time together, my not knowing what you want. How could we have grown that far apart?”
“I don’t think that we are. It just feels that way right now. But you want to do something about it?”
“More than you know.”
Bette turned to Tina and smiled. She was always harder on herself than Tina ever was. It was one of the things that worked between them, when Bette was beating herself up about something that she hadn’t gone as well as she hoped or something that she couldn’t control Tina was always there, telling her that it would be OK. That it wasn’t her fault, or a way that they could put it right together. There had been countless times over the years when the indomitable Bette Porter had been put back on her feet by Tina.
Tina felt her hand being caressed by Bette. The hand that not that long ago had been inside Bette. Tina gave an involuntary shudder of pleasure as she remembered how she had made Bette come, how she had felt the orgasm rip through her lover. Tina couldn’t even put into words how good it made her feel to know that she was the woman that got to do that. To be inside Bette made her life complete like she never thought it would be.
“Would you want to give up work straight away?” asked Bette, surprising Tina with her directness.
“You haven’t said that you want to start our family yet.” challenged Tina.
“I know, I just want to know how deeply you’ve thought about it. Whether you’ve completely made up your mind that you definitely want it to happen.”
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more?? Pretty please? Thanks citygirl!
Wow cool! They’re going to have a child!! Love Tina’s reaction.
*happy sigh* Okay next story! ;)
Wow…City…why does this have to be the end? I’ll accept that this is the end only if you have another amazing story waiting for us in the wings.
Being inside Bette would make my life complete too!
You know mate, I have loved this story – its written with so much intimaacy and love between them, and for Bette to show her reservations… ah, I love a vulnerable Bette Porter!
That was utterly lovely. Thanks for the story, and I hope we’ll get another treat from you sometime soon.
she said YES…hurray :)
that was great. hopefully more in the wings from you. thanks.
This is so well written it’s an absolute pleasure to read. You’ve got a way with the characters and the dialogue is so spot on for them. Love this and can’t wait for more. Thanks for writing.
As usual, I’m with Jo… pretty much completely. And, as I have nothing else of real value to say, I’ll leave it there with just this: fabulous.
I wish them well on this enormous undertaking on which they are about to embark. I have been convinced that Tina’s wish to be a mother is genuine and that Bette genuinely wants to make Tina happy. I hope Bette will find joy in being a parent as she obviously has in being Tina’s partner.
This story is so good that I don’t want to accept that it’s over. Thank you.
I love the way this was written! Kudos 2U!
Thank you so much City, it was beautiful.
very nice. thanks for the story!
I will be sad knowing that this story has run it’s course. I was extremely happy to be able to read this entire story.
I will be sad knowing that this story has run it’s course. I was extremely happy to be able to read this entire story.
This is good and they are going to have baby. Ok post soon please, thanks!
WOW…..that was so fucking beautiful!!!!! You’ve to continue, just a little bit….maybe until the baby is 18 years old LOL. Thanks, I really enjoyed this.
THAT WAS GREAT. I hope it is not the end but the beging of a new story. Thank you PPS
well i hope this starts another part of their life… like in the delivery room… loved this story… so now i guess we just wait for the sequel… or you could just keep writing this one…thanks
Excellent CG. Sad that the story’s over, But I AM so Happy that Bette said Yes to starting a family with Tina. She knows that she has a lot of work ahead of her, I think she’ll try very hard to be a good parent. I’m soo Happy CG. Thanks for this beautifully written fic.
Wow, city! Great chapter! Thanks. But why does it have to end *pout* ^_~oh well it’s alright as long as you start another story! LOL!
way to go Tina!!!
Your leaving us now, more please!!!Enjoyed reading your story, dialogue = great…your T&B = just love them. Thank you.