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Everybody Knows – Part Nine
“Bette, I never hid the fact that I wanted children from you. You’ve known that almost from the beginning. I’ll admit there have been times, especially at the beginning of our relationship that I hardly thought about it at all. I just wanted you all to myself but now, over the last six months I’ve thought about it more and more. It’s something that I definitely want. Now I need to know if you feel the same way.”
“It would mean a lot of changes.”
“Change can be good.”
Bette let a little snort of derision out as Tina said that. It made Tina smile to think about how anything that upset the order of Bette’s life was treated with distain and yet she knew that she was the one thing that had upset the order in Bette’s life beyond anything else and Bette constantly told her that her life was so much better than she could have ever imagined because of Tina. Maybe Bette would come round to the idea that a small amount of change could be good but something that was life changing could be even better.
“I want to give you everything that you want.” said Bette quietly.
“I know babe, but this is something that we both want to happen. It would change both of our lives in the most incredible way.”
“What if I don’t match up to your expectations, that I’m not the person that you want me to be.”
“Bette, you’ve always been the woman that I’ve wanted.” said Tina, a slight smirk on her face, trying to create some levity.
“You know I don’t mean like that.” laughed Bette, in reply.
“Tell me what your really thinking.”
“I want to tell you that having a child with you something that I want, with no doubt in my mind, but I don’t think that I can do that. My mind’s racing with doubt.”
“Why?”
“What happens if we don’t last, you would hate me and I know that he or she would always be your child. What if you didn’t want me to see them.”
Tears had started to form in Bette’s eyes. She started to look away but Tina gently cradled her face with the hand that wasn’t currently encased in Bette’s. Tina stroked her thumb across Bette’s cheeks and up towards Bette’s eye, gently wiping away the tear that had started to fall. They looked at each other, silently, Tina trying to communicate how much love she felt for Bette. Bette trying to tell Tina how much she needed her to care.
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more?? Pretty please? Thanks citygirl!
Wow cool! They’re going to have a child!! Love Tina’s reaction.
*happy sigh* Okay next story! ;)
Wow…City…why does this have to be the end? I’ll accept that this is the end only if you have another amazing story waiting for us in the wings.
Being inside Bette would make my life complete too!
You know mate, I have loved this story – its written with so much intimaacy and love between them, and for Bette to show her reservations… ah, I love a vulnerable Bette Porter!
That was utterly lovely. Thanks for the story, and I hope we’ll get another treat from you sometime soon.
she said YES…hurray :)
that was great. hopefully more in the wings from you. thanks.
This is so well written it’s an absolute pleasure to read. You’ve got a way with the characters and the dialogue is so spot on for them. Love this and can’t wait for more. Thanks for writing.
As usual, I’m with Jo… pretty much completely. And, as I have nothing else of real value to say, I’ll leave it there with just this: fabulous.
I wish them well on this enormous undertaking on which they are about to embark. I have been convinced that Tina’s wish to be a mother is genuine and that Bette genuinely wants to make Tina happy. I hope Bette will find joy in being a parent as she obviously has in being Tina’s partner.
This story is so good that I don’t want to accept that it’s over. Thank you.
I love the way this was written! Kudos 2U!
Thank you so much City, it was beautiful.
very nice. thanks for the story!
I will be sad knowing that this story has run it’s course. I was extremely happy to be able to read this entire story.
I will be sad knowing that this story has run it’s course. I was extremely happy to be able to read this entire story.
This is good and they are going to have baby. Ok post soon please, thanks!
WOW…..that was so fucking beautiful!!!!! You’ve to continue, just a little bit….maybe until the baby is 18 years old LOL. Thanks, I really enjoyed this.
THAT WAS GREAT. I hope it is not the end but the beging of a new story. Thank you PPS
well i hope this starts another part of their life… like in the delivery room… loved this story… so now i guess we just wait for the sequel… or you could just keep writing this one…thanks
Excellent CG. Sad that the story’s over, But I AM so Happy that Bette said Yes to starting a family with Tina. She knows that she has a lot of work ahead of her, I think she’ll try very hard to be a good parent. I’m soo Happy CG. Thanks for this beautifully written fic.
Wow, city! Great chapter! Thanks. But why does it have to end *pout* ^_~oh well it’s alright as long as you start another story! LOL!
way to go Tina!!!
Your leaving us now, more please!!!Enjoyed reading your story, dialogue = great…your T&B = just love them. Thank you.