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Everything and Nothing: 16.) Beautiful and Impossible
I bend over a little and shake it, just a little, and hear Jenny yell whoo! in a high tone that distorts as Shane drives them around the block. I laugh, blushing as the girls sipping coffee at the outdoor caf tables stare at me.
Hi, I nod. Morning. I feel my face turning red and quickly escape into the Planet. I wave to Kit and she points to a big table in the back, which is all set and waiting for us. No one else is here.
Dana comes in, alone. Shes come without Tonya for the last several brunches, and as overjoyed as that usually makes me, she has seemed upset and worn down lately.
Simultaneously, Alice, Bette and Tina come in. The latter two come together, but I think this was just timing, not a reconciliation. Rumor has it that Tinas been dating a guy.
Hey guys, I say. I see Shane and Jenny walk by, through the window. Wait til you see Jenny.
Sure enough, when they walk in, everyone goes crazy over Jennys hair. Holy *****. Alice says. Who died and made you Audrey Hepburn?
Jenny rolls her huge eyes and smiles.
Did you do that, Shane?
Yep. Shane looks bleary, uncaffeinated. She slides in opposite me and stares at the table. Shes wearing a sage green tee shirt that makes her eyes look the kind of green you see when copper gets wet over time, giving it this weathered patina-
You look great, Jenny, Tina says, smiling.
Hey, girls, Kit says, bringing us a basket of pastries and a pitcher of water. Sorry Im taking so long, one of my girls called out.
You need help, Kit? Shane asks, nodding to the line forming at the counter.
No, sweetie, Im good for now, but thank you. She affectionately rubs Shanes shoulder and Im envious, that she can touch her so simply, without it having to mean anything or setting up a cascade of threatening, damning implications.
Hey guys, what are you all doing on September twenty-third? I ask.
Whats that? Tina asks.
Saturday after next. I take a banana muffin from the basket and break it in two.
Whats on the twenty-third? Bette asks.
Well, I am having a big old barbecue and I hope you all can come.
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(38 votes, average: 3.79 out of 5)
That was a great update. I can’t wait for the next one. I want to know how that scene will ended. I loved it a lot. Need a fix soon.
great – you have a gift for showing the raw emotion.
-Kisses- : ) ur great babe
“When our eyes meet it reminds me of two magnets that repel. Gazes quickly swerve in opposite directions. And it’s like the Medusa legend in reverse. I can’t look for too long, because she will turn to stone.”
Damn! What a powerful image. The judges had their heads up their butts. Nobody writes this well on this site but you. And I think I broke a personal record for how long I could hold my breath because from that line on to the end, I’m not sure I breathed at all. Powerful powerful story!
Thank you guys, you’ve made my day.
No, Sakshi, I am not seeing anyone, but I am looking. :)
seriously your writing is excellent. the way you capture the charcaters
I agree. And I don’t know what the judges are thinking…you are, without a doubt, the best writer on this site. Your work reads like a professional’s. The storylines are mature, and real; your characterizations are perfect; your language is lovely.
so many moments of your story ring so true to me…so evocative of so many emotions
Where have you been? hope the next chapter comes up sooner…you are simply GOOOOOOD! BTW are u seeing someone?? :)